I was one step away from accomplishing my lifelong dream. But an accident appears to have changed my life for the worst. My life-long goal now seemed unachievable in a new world with things I previously thought impossible. But when a new goal is discovered, what will it take to accomplish? But as they say, dream on.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated and helps me make the story better.
Huge thanks to Arch Medley for making the cover art!
I would also like to thank my new editor for helping me with *cough* a few *cough* corrections. I would give credit, but they wished to remain anonymous.
Chapters (5)
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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.
𝕎hen something bad happens you have 3 choices.
You can either let it define you,
let it destroy you,
or you can let it strengthen you.
-Dr. Seuss
Good chapter
I’m not much into gender-bent stories, at all, but yours has me intrigued for some reason. I’ll see where it goes
Oof
Why is Blueblood mean to his Aunt?
O-well it’s a fanfiction after all.
Well Shoot!
If he wants his gender back he’s going to need to ask a Unicorn to help her to be a Male.
This is way better than I expected
Good job
Oooo I wonder what type of song it would be next I’m curious too see if any other pony notice that she/he has no Cutie Mark
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Thanks, I appreciate it!
Ah yes, the beginning of the complete mutilation of the main’s mental state is starting to materialize.
Wonder how long he’ll be able to hold out...
Also, I’d somehow slipped Owl City from my brain for a long time, so needless to say it was a bit of a surprise. That haircut hit me like a fucking truck, among other things I’d like to forget about late 00’s/early 10’s. Not the music, of course. That can stay.
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The music was definitely one of the good things of that era.
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Lots of fanfics have Blueblood be a dick or downright nasty, which is weird since all we've seen of him is just refuse Rarity at the gala, and from his POV she's just another gold digger.
Well this is nicely written, love how she plays pianos inspired by popular music-pop in our generation
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Thanks, it's some of my favorite songs from the mid to early 2000s
I’m really enjoying the story so far and await the next installment.
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Appreciate it!
If only getting a job was that easy! And impressing a Wonderbolt? He's rolling in luck, heh!
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Yeah, I wish I got my job that easily!
Maybe you could do Hall of Fame for the next time she plays the piano.
https://youtu.be/v8WxSQW45xg
Here's the link.
and also this would fit perfectly for the story, because her goal was to be in the team and she is singing her heart out for what could've been her future but was stripped away from her. And she's singing this to let out some grief.
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Yeah, I love that song! Maybe it will be played soon...
Well done. I think this is a good start.
Monk
"Mavis, for crimes against royalty, I hereby sentence you to the sushi bar!" the judge said, as chains wrapped around her, and dragged her away." -darkmage1997
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Thanks!
Yeah! A new chapter??
Heck Yeah!!!
(After Reading 📖 It.)
I hope he will bring all his human ideas to make his own bits and company, it would suck a lot of all the entertainment in the human world is not in Pony World.
....
I just realize, what would happen if he sang a very depressing song...
And all the sad stories or movies in his world, how will they react if he actually made a movie 🎥 from his world but pony version.
Will pony’s cry? How about the other Creatures who can watch the movie? Or book?
So manny Possibility!
With is fanfic!!!!!!
All the merchandise!!!!
And Art!!!
Like Think 💭 about it!!!
Holly Cow!
Still waiting for the other chapters because this story is good and very underrated, it deserves more likes!
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I agree since he did appear in the now official comics canon to the show back way long ago he wasn’t really bad at all and is best friends with Shining Armor. The whole situation of what happened to the Gala was in fact he wasn’t interested in mares who think he was something they read in a book or gossip which is understandable
Okay it's funny how the reception it's named shining maybe it's a cameo either way it's funny how that name thank you for making this I'm going to go read more of this everything's all good here I love reading lesson I hope you make more of this and others :-)
Love it hope it continues
Love it. Hopefully the next chapter is coming soon
Nice choice on the music. You can never go wrong with Adam Young.
It's okay. Hockey is a garbage profession anyways.
I make no apologies.
Vanilla Twilight. Good choice.
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lol
it's dead, jim.
Well that gender-bending put this back on my read it later shelf.
I’m wondering if this story really is dead…
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Al fin alguien que puede ver las cosas como son en realidad.
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Si, es una lástima que no desarrollaran el personaje como se merece.
Poor Winter, she just found out hockey isn't a thing in Equestria. But don't worry! ponies have their own sports like Hoofball...Running of the Leaves, and....stunt flying! eh-heh. I think ponies don't have many sports for obvious reasons, or maybe i just don't know the others.
Good story Colbbie. I hope the story gets updated in the near future.
Please for the love of god please UPDATE! I need this story I need more!!
Hopefully this updates. Good stuff though!
Aw! I really like this depiction of Fleetfoot and really want to see her show MC how cool she is and for MC to be like, “oh hey. What’s up with your leotard? Are you going out in public with that? You know this is some sort of athletics event, right?” Lol
Too bad the new chapter never came out.
Damn, another one of those "backwards knee" trope. No offense bro, but the analogy between horse limbs and human limbs is literally one google away.