This is awesome, and you should feel awesome for making this.

I love it so much.

Though, I wish it could've been longer.

But that's just in my opinion.

That's it?

I mean... I liked what I read. I was interested in what was going to happen. But nothing.

Is this a sort of "test the waters" fic? I'm curious if you'll expand on the concept.

>>11869531186953 >>11868901186890 Can't really extend this much. I was meaning this to be a one shot chapter...but if a lot of people were to say they love it so much, maybe I'll change my mind.

But I'll probably dig my own grave since I have one other big fan fic to work on.

I admit, I was expecting a bit more straightforward comedy. (Also, I don't really see why is it tagged as [Sad].)

Could you please give me a link to the full cover image?

>>11870371187037 I had to borrow a part of it from a T-Shirt ad.

Image: http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQIJdqxvBvkA8HNhbXO-lkdoQBb1DUA9bgz7R0XlBReHqDvyhOSsQ&t=1

>>11870681187068

I see, thank you very much.

I instantly imagined this is a noire film style.

more more please

interesting writing style, that.  Of course, Rainbow would be into it.

Sweet Celestia, that wasn't a fanfic... it was Fluttershy's diary disguised as a fanfic.

HOW DARE YOU READ MY DIARY!!!

hehe now come on Fluttershy, be cool we're all friends here

>>11890691189069 The Flutter-Mafia is going to kill us all.

Awesome. I thought it was one of those Spike-told theories.

It would be intriguing to read a full story based around this idea.

I approve!

Oh god. Run for your lives!

*picka up sniper rifle* Where do you think you're going?!

>>11891901189190 throw them in the meat freezer

looks like things are about to get... 20% cooler *guitar solo in background*

really now Rainbow... really

This is a great story.

I vote for a sequel or a full length story expansion.

My reaction upon reading desc:

Image: http://images.wikia.com/theamazingworldofgumball/images/1/18/Jackie-chan-meme.png

While reading the fic:

Image: http://i.imgur.com/lvN3I.png

After I finished reading:

Image: http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lihmuesM7O1qdxmv1o1_400.gif

This story is amazing and you should feel proud of it.

>>11893711189371 So what shall we do with them?

>>11978141197814 bring the cement, theyll be swimming with the fishys... not to mention Mr. Gillsy's fin is healed and he'd like to get back home.

>>11879001187900 I was thinking of Max Payne narrating and The Godfather while writing this.

The fact that I actually managed to read the entire mafia part in Fluttershy's voice made it that much more hilarious.

Yeah, longer or more, cuz It's kinda in the middle of where ya can go with this; interesting premise, but it feels like its only the premise, and nothing's really happened yet.

oh god, if oley it was longer, it be sweet

>>11890691189069 ( pick up a 12ga shotgun with 12 shots in it ) DID ANY PONY TOLD YOU NOT TOO LOOK AT ODERS SUFFT!!!?

Pretty good. I like what you did with the cliffhanger. I liked it.

Honestly, this is a good idea; I'd be interested in seeing a serious continuation. Perhaps Fluttershy has moved on, but her past is going to catch up to her?

>>12200231220023>>11890691189069 YES

>>15474801547480 Ah, hello! Glad to see you've enjoyed it.

>>15474981547498 Very much so!

http://balister.deviantart.com/art/Godpony-Fluttershy-257614337

An alternate photo for the idea. And by the way:

So Awesome

>>18068701806870

Huh, not bad. Wish I'd use this earlier.

Alright... At first I wasn't sure how I'd feel about this...

But after reading it: Oh my god yes. I love you for this.

Makes one really wonder. Is it truly fanfiction, or memories disguised as fanfiction, her life insurane should the Shy family ever turn on her in her exile. It would also explain why Angel is such a badass and such a hardass, with the help of magic he may have been her bodyguard or personal assassin for decades.

I'll write a sequel/spinoff story of this if I get enough likes and favorites.

I suspect it's unintentional but this feels rather unfair. If you want to write more then write, don't act as though folks on this site should have such control over the things you write.

>>18113701811370

I never said how much is enough.

>>18113751811375 That's kinda my point though:P for all we know nothing will be enough. I just feel like you're kinda ransoming off more story until we say we love you enough

As well actually the stalking came about after I looked through your stories and realized i wanted to fave most of them XD

>>18122661812266

Yeeeaah, I kinda do that a little bit.

But it's kinda normal that I would ask people to check out the other stories for a little bit right?

There are a couple other people that I can name who does this and are pretty well known.

>>18123771812377 *blink* okay you lost me. This wasn't asking us to check out your other works this was asking us to shower your fic with praise in the hopes of getting more of it. And yeah I know other more famous bronies do it and when they do I tend to speak up then too. It bugs me because to me it feels like an author is saying "Stroke my ego and I might write you some more fic, but if you don't stroke it enough I won't. and by the way i'm not telling you how much you have to do it" It just feels kinda mean y'know? I accept my head is a weird place But i'm also mouthy and can't resist speaking up.

>>18124031812403

So you're saying that you think that I'm just asking people to like it a lot for another sequel.

Well, that's not really my true intentions at all. I was just saying that if I feel like people do like it a lot, then I'll write another sequel.

In fact, I already had planned one, it's just that I never got around to it.

>>18125941812594 Okay to me your author's note said exactly that.

7/12/12

I'll write a sequel/spinoff story of this if I get enough likes and favorites.

>>18126471812647

Well what do want me to do? Update the author note saying that I have a planned sequel, but it might take a while to get around to that?

Actually wait...that's not really a bad idea.

>>18126801812680 *laughs* Sounds good ta me

Awesomely cute and still cool!!