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EquestrianKirin


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This story is a sequel to My Little Universe: Season 8


The Elements of Harmony and the Crystal Gems had come a very long way. Earth: a colony planet for a renegade Diamond, now in watch and care by a 16 year old Human boy and his team of Polymorphic Sentient Rocks. And Equus: a planet right from a storybook in charge by the Princess of the Sun, now in watch by her most faithful student along with her closest friends of all three Races. A princess of Friendship, and a Prodigy of Care.

They've done so much to get to this point, and they're so close to being finished. Corruption still needs to be healed, old quarrels still need to be mended, and still looming is an army that is bent on ruining everything they've built up to this point. Can they make it to that Happily Ever After?

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Oh my goodness! I have SO many questions! :rainbowderp: FIRST OFF: GROGAR IS FLIPPING ALIVE, AND HAS GARNET WITH HIM!!!!!???? HOW? WHAT? WHY? WHEN? jkdnocvnefiu;evndfjbvh!!! :pinkiegasp: SECOND: If Spinel isn't at the garden then where is she? In the movie, she only left because of Steven's broadcast, so....how tho? :derpyderp1: AND THIRDLY: WHAT'S with all the red mist??!! :duck: Other than...well all that, I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

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excellent. Leaving so many questions :rainbowdetermined2:

How did the Dazzlings get here? Do we get to see Sunset Shimmer too?

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Sorry, only the Dazzlings for this story

So...before I go back and talk more in depth about the last couple chapters, let's get one question out of the way now since you decided to bring her in. How is it that Spinels were a naturally occurring if highly rare gem type? Pearl clearly knew about them since she recognized this Spinel as similar to the one Pink use to play with. So then how come when Pearl fused with Lapis, they decided to call themselves Spinel? I know this is partially due to you selecting the name before Steven Universe: The Movie came out, but I am interested in having an in universe explanation on how the raw gem is a bundle of energy, but the fused gem is essentially Lapis and Pearl working out their issues calmly and serenely.

WOW!!! Ok, I-I MAN THERE'S SO MUCH GOING ON HERE!!!! I'll just say one thing at a time! First off, OH MY FRICK!!! That's horrible with what happened to Spinel! I REALLY hope White apologizes to her personally! :twilightangry2: Secondly, Steven pulled a Kion/Jasiri from Lion Guard! I'm so proud of him! :pinkiesmile: Also, Grogar pulled a Chrysalis....why am I not surprised?... :ajbemused: Thirdly, wow, those two problems were handled really quickly....some....something more threatening is gonna happen huh?...Oh boy. :twilightblush: And lastly, oh man, most of the gems got reset didn't they? This is going to be SO interesting! :pinkiehappy: This chapter was so chock full of good stuff, I can't flipping WAIT to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

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an intriguing question indeed … :raritywink:

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this roller coaster's just getting started x3

By the way, (this is probably a little late to ask this) but are you going to put Escapism somewhere in the story? I just really like that song! It's ok if it isn't though, just asking. :twilightsmile:

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if I can figure out a way to work it in

"Well yes. And no," said Red Diamond, "They are out of my grasp … for now. If nothing changes, then I will be able to reach them. Which isn't good for her."

you know gems can't die right? the fact that shards can be used to make gem mutants means that the shards even when separate still have life, if a shattered gem just died then gem mutants wouldn't be possible, the shards still hold memories and the energy they took from the planet they just sit in limbo unable to form which is far worse than death

edit: sonata is the only one of the dazzlings that I can see actively changing for the better in the future

"Let's go!" said Spinel, and soon they both were on their way from there, Pinkie and Spinel off and out of sight on their tour together. The rest of the group simply watched her go off on her way.

oh noooo there is two of them and one of them is currently clinically insane this is going to go quite badly when she finds out that the crystal gems have made up with the diamonds and with white diamond in particular.

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😨 … you know, you pointing this out, actually makes the mental conflict coming up much stronger than I thought. thanks ^^

Does pearl imprinting on Connie mean no Stegg?

Cause I like Stegg though I wonder if the remade pink diamonds d would become a rose quartz instead also I always imagined a corrupted spinel being a big stretchy excitable dog with heart ears, a fluffy tail with a heart on the end, the ability to stand upright for maximum hug potential, aposable thumbs when it wants them, a big pink mane and a collar with the gem in what ever location though it would be very appropriate for it to be on the neck

And no I'm not saying it(you know that obnoxious word people like to say when they are the starting comment)

Wow! This is...quite a mess for poor Steven to clean up huh? Poor Steven...:applecry: Though I do have to say, it will be interesting to see a memory wiped Pink Diamond. I wonder how her memories will be brought back, since she technically isn't the actual Pink Diamond. :rainbowhuh: Also, DAAAAAANG!!!! That Water Tower scene was amazing! Looks like even in her amnesic state, Spinel can still dodge attacks without breaking a sweat! :raritystarry: Lastly, there's going to be SOOOO many feels when they try to get Spinel's memory back huh? I don't think I'll ever be ready for that..... :fluttershysad: As always, awesome chapter EquestrianKirin, and keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

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All of a sudden I'm imagining corrupted Spinel looking like Disney's Pluto fused with Mickey Mouse and I don't think I can change it … :rainbowlaugh:

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the problems just keep piling up, don't they?

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Ehh the idea I was trying to go for was more of a teddy bear build but spinel is based off of rubber hose cartoons so I can see why you went there :twilightsheepish:

:rainbowderp: WELP!!!....THAT HAPPENED!!!......First off, I guess the Storm King couldn't stand a chance! Makes sense, considering he went up against three Alicorn princesses and an extremely powerful Unicorn! :rainbowlaugh: Second, tiny WD reminds me of that one comic, where YD and BD are holding a tiny WD and she just simply says 'Genocide' or something like that! Having her small is just plain adorable. :pinkiehappy: And thirdly, DANG!!! THAT'S ONE BIG TORTOISE!!! That thing reminds me of the giant Torterras in the Detective Pikachu movie! Good luck to the Harmony Gems when they try to talk to him a second time! :twilightoops: Awesome chapter EquestrianKirin, and keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

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"Good luck to the Harmony Gems when they try to talk to him a second time!"

You know, if Your Great Honor doesn't stomp them again first XD

"An electric-type Monster," corrected Peridot matter-of-factly. They paused and looked to Jasper for a bit, the orange Quartz still trying to ponder what the heck happened herself. Emerald, being her "boss", went right over to her and checked out the still seemingly puzzled look on her face. Jasper herself actually didn't notice Emerald there until he was directly in front of her field of vision.

-+- is that a Pokémon reference I see

Oh my goodness! Fairy Spinel is something I never knew I needed! SHE WAS SO CUTE!!! (Especially with Lion! So cute!) :rainbowkiss: Also, I wonder what's up with Sapphire? I hope she's ok... :rainbowderp: Finally, Ronaldo...FREAKING RONALDO is going to be a part of the Harmony Gems?! Well this just got more interesting than it already was! :duck: Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

This chapter...was SO EMOTIONAL!!! OH MY GOODNESS!!! :raritydespair: Flint almost getting shattered and getting saved by Sapphire, Steven getting beaten to a pulp to try and prevent Spinel from getting shattered, and Spinel being the awesome Gem that she is trying to save Steven in the end! I JUST LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH!!! :raritystarry: Also, Grogar hasn't learned anything.....why am I not surprised. :ajbemused: This is by far my favorite chapter this season! Keep up the awesome work EquestrianKirin! :pinkiehappy:

To quote Lawrence of Arabia: "nothing is written." And nothing is certain until you give up. Then again, Flint was kind of a grade A fatalist for a good long while. A pawn of white, a runaway with Jade, a refugee from homeworld, a colder calculator, a distainful freedom taker. Yeah. If nothing, Flint/Azlet was the embodiment of skepticism in your universe. And that skepticism could be useful in thinking ahead carefully, but also hurtful when trying to truly change. And it's here, facing death, that he caused the futurist to suddenly remember what she believes in.

For it was in the shock of strong emotion that a rejuvinator can truly be reversed. Fear and hope that brought Sapphire back to strength to run in and create...Cloudy sapphire? I have a hard time thinking of what grey and blue would make a good gem combination to. And the ponies were happy.

Then, after Flint got his love poison snap on, "normal" Spinel got a strong reaction of sadness, and from that, got her thoughts straight again. Almost to a detriment, but in this case, the face of evil always gives context to your own problems, and makes the anger and pettiness fade in the face of bravery and love. I guess this continues to show that despite her purpose being to be a fun gem, Spinel was made to be a warrior without peer.

Which, again, makes me wonder, what's the difference between a natural spinel, and a fusion spinel, and how are they so different in height, ability and personality since pearl and lapis did choose the name, and yet it's something so different how can that be reconciled?

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I'm happy you two are enjoying the story as much as you are ^^

So, this must be the introspective chapter. Which is important since Steven is definitely a focal point for this chapter. A lot of moping, and wandering, and thinking about the past. Which I guess creates a cool contrast to the fact that it's the end of things that ends up being who gave Steven the push he needs by reminding him of his duty, and that the work isn't done yet.

Although, there is a small part of me that kinda wishes that Steven did kill Garnet and learning to live with that. That he truly had consequences for giving in to vengeance and that it wasn't just another trick.

Oh and look. The dazzlings are also on a character journey after what happened during the everstorm. Checkov's gunmen!

On a final note, it's always appreciated that you go the route of Don't fear the reaper when talking about Red. Hmm. If that is true, then there's a cool contrast between Red and the other diamonds. White's a creator, Red's a taker, Yellow's solid, Blue's soft, and Pink? She's the creative, "human" one. Though this does make me wonder whether Red is like the mistress and the other gods or just a really advanced Gem forgotten by history. Or maybe both.

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Although, there is a small part of me that kinda wishes that Steven did kill Garnet and learning to live with that. That he truly had consequences for giving in to vengeance and that it wasn't just another trick.

Grogar's not gonna be giving anyone their wishes THAT easily. XD

Is this really the last story in this series?

This was a cute and epic chapter! :pinkiesmile: I love how everyone reacted to Spinel being back! It got me everytime! :rainbowlaugh: Also, AWWWWwww!!! Rhodonite and her components were so cute and brave! Rescuing Yellow Pearl like that was so cool to see! :heart: Speaking of cute, can I just say how adorable Spinel was when she was sleeping with a stuffed toy?! THAT WAS ADORABLE!!!! :pinkiehappy: Finally Steven got to make up with Sapphire. That was so sweet to see! (Now we just need him to make up with Ruby.) :raritywink: Overall, I loved the way this chapter turned out, and I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

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"My Little Universe II" yes. The last chapter? Not even close

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the abords are strong with this one x3

"Of course, my Diamond," Yellow Diamond said, before she sprung off ahead of them, barely even disturbing the sand as she went off ahead to scout the area. Rhodonite just stood there, glancing up towards Yellow Diamond as she crossed her arms, one finger tapping impatiently again.

Shouldn't that be pearl

I noticed, after some thinking, that we haven't seen Amethyst for a while.

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Hmm … that's true isn't it? ...

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Well, perhaps she is just exploring, or maybe she has gotten up to some mischief.

OH MY GOODNESS!!! SO MANY FEELS IN THESE CHAPTERS!!!!! First off, Spinel and Pinkie Pie were so cute in this, it's just xtdcjghfjyfcfgc!:pinkiesad2: Second, do...do I WANNA know how Celestia was feeding the Wyvern since he said that he on a gem free diet?...:rainbowderp: Third, LAPIS IS BACK!!! HECK YES!!!:pinkiehappy: Fourth, I loved all the songs you put in here. ESPECIALLY the last one! Oh man, that last part had me smiling AND tearing up. It was beautiful!:fluttershysad: And finally, Merry Christmas/Happy Hearth's Warming EquestrianKirin! Your writing skills are through the roof, and it always brings me joy whenever I see one your stories update. (I don't get like that for a lot of stories...) As I always say, I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work, and have a very Merry Christmas! :twilightsmile:

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^^ I'm so happy you're enjoying yourself Angel. Merry Christmas to you too ^^

Woohoo! All aboard the awkwardness train! CHOO!!! CHOO!!!:yay: I absolutly LOVE everyone's reactions to seeing Pink Diamond in her default form! It was priceless!:rainbowlaugh: Also, it was cute seeing all of Steven's pets trying to help Pink understand what was wrong. So cute!:rainbowkiss: Thirdly, can I just say how HAPPY I am to not be the only one who sees Steven and Spinel as siblings! I mean, throughout these last couple of chapters, they've just been giving off MASSIVE sibling energy, and that just makes me really happy!:pinkiehappy: And finally, I can't wait to see how they're going to get Amethyst's memories back now! It seems like she gained some back, but clearly still has a ways to go. As always, keep up the excellent work! :twilightsmile:

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the awkwardness is strong with this one XD

FCYdcbhdbviYDYCYvudvcudueygvFCFC!!!!!!! Hessonite! HESSONITE!!? HESSONITE!!!?????? All of my yes! Just take all of my yes please!:pinkiehappy: Also, Ruby just straight up threw her wedding RING away!? They gotta go find that!:twilightoops: Thirdly, Le GASP!!! Spinel doesn't want to go with Steven for once??? Something's up, and it's making me worried about her...:fluttershysad: Fourthly, OH MY GOODNESS!!! I HOPE PEARL WILL BE OKAY!!! That was WAAAAaaaaaay too close for comfort! :pinkiegasp: Lastly, wow!...that's a LOT of stuff they have to do! Good luck to all of them. Something tells me they're gonna need it. :pinkiesmile: Great chapter as always, and keep up the awesome work! :twilightsmile:

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And i'm sure they do. Good luck to them

Hhhmmm hhmm hmmm if hessonite is here what about the first prism of light because those games are canon to the series so are those pyramids going to show up

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they might, they might not. Remember though the Hessonite here has a different history than the canon Hessonite (the canon one didn't get corrupted). Good thing to think about though

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I also consider the prisms to be highly advanced gems because they like gems make light constructs just on a larger scale and without needing to be directly connected to them

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That and they're also self-aware and conscious somewhat too, at least when given the freedom to outside of being a weapon. Just look at George :3

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