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This story is a sequel to My Little Universe


We all have dreams. That sate of mind where logic and reality are thrown out the window for your subconscious, and even your true conscious to run wild and run free. For young Steven Universe, this concept was no different; an average half-Gem with a good heart.

A young child's mind can go many places, but how far can a child's mind wander before it gets lost?

When the Gems discover Steven wasn't waking up, the situation becomes far more dangerous than anybody could imagine. With Princess Luna for help, the Gems must go in after him. Can the Gems rescue their Steven before it's too late, or will they all be forever trapped in the nightmarish realm of Limbo?

(Even if it has an E rating, be wary of creepy stuff in it :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:)

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Comments ( 16 )

Woah. Suddenly 23 K words out of nowhere. I'm looking forward to reading this. Just a bit unfortunate with the timing, it being April 1st and all. Almost thought this was a short prank fic, but that word count makes me think otherwise.

7085302 believe me, there's a lot here! No April fool tricks here :pinkiehappy:

7085311 Yeah, I know. Currently reading it, I will however comment on some stuff that catch my interest (for better or for worse).

"Listen. Steven's not a pony like you, and therefore I'm unable to connect your species's dreams to his."

Non-canon compatible. Spike was connected to the same massive dream as the others in the show. While it's nothing big, I'd just like to point out that it would make more sense if it was because they're from different worlds and only 'Lucid' is an exception.

"If the sun rises to the next day, then you'll be cut off."

By adding a time limit, it only made me think of the movie "Inception." While it's nothing directly negative, it does kind of divert some focus from the story by making me think of it. It already gave me a few expectations that might, or might not disappoint me just because I began comparing this story to that movie.

[quote"We have to go in deeper."]If you deny this story being inspired by Inception I won't believe you. Sleeping in a dream to go deeper... Just like in the movie.

7091731 Well I made it clear Inception was an inspiration when I announced this, so, comparisons are evident X3

Search for the first without your nose, and the second without your eyes - you will find you'll be surprised.
"Without your nose and eyes?" Lapis questioned.
"That's not how flowers work,"

So... where were flowers mentioned in the clue? Or how did Steven come to the conclusion that the note meant flowers? Am I missing something here?

When does this take place in s2 of the story, and where are the other gems? Fulgurite? Flint? Jade?

Three things I’m wondering; why was peridot the only one to see pearl dream clearly, what was jasper fear and... okay actually that it make that two

Good read

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The OCs aren't involved in this story. And this takes place between "Fusion Confusion" and "Beyond the Stars" of Season 2 of MLU.

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