I'm glad to see how much this improved compared to the draft I went through. This is a much stronger version, and here's to hoping that you and Octavia keep up the fight, broski.

When does the non-can tag come into play?

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Having Soaring explain to me what you meant with the last scene in particular was a god send. Totally was able to see your perspective after he explained it to me. Did a re-write of the parts that weren't needed, and kept focused away from anything that could be considered in bad taste for the scene.

And thanks, broski. Writing this has helped a bit, I'll say. Honestly some of the hardest to write, cause the subject matter. Oh boy.

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Chapter two. The last scene. It's not written as smut. It's written as horror. But this is a warning, cause it's a real heavy scene. I don't blame you if you wish to not read it.

The return of this frightening story, with one HELL of a second chapter! I may be biased as both your friend and pre-reader, but I mean it :p

I really like the use of different font colors and everything else you improved on since my last pre-reading. Keep at it my dude.

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sounds good

broski

Here's your long overdue promo blog, broski.

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WOOOOOOOOO. THAT'S WHAT I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR! THAT'S WHAT IT'S ALL ABOUT!

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Poggers poggers poggers.