Oh my... Silver that's quite the leap in logic. Granted there were clues. I guess the solution is for Rarity to take them both on? Silver could use some lessons herself.
1421709 Leap of logic, true, though for Di to be defending somebody who's telling her what to do? That's pretty extreme there. However, now that she's seen Di's reaction... well, that's pretty much a big ol' "yeah, I'm sleeping with her, and that's what my etiquette classes are covering for" right there. Gotta learn to control your reactions, Di....
1628504 Great to have you along for the ride! I just got chapter 6 back from my editor, so you'll be seeing something hopefully by the end of next week.
1716330 In all fairness, Di never Pinkie Promised, so you can't blame her too much.
1717904 I know, minus all the problems she's running into, she's quite lucky. And tell me about it, 7 months ago I never pictured myself writing about her!
This is actually a really well written story. I bet if you cut the smut and localized it to humans you could sell this story. Though it would require more background info on the characters personalities. MLP fanfic does benefit from a pre-existing history and characters.
Let me be clear that the sex scenes do add a lot to the naughty feel of this story mind you, and loosing them would make the story elements seem less exciting.
Comment posted by ServingSpoon deleted Mar 7th, 2015
I wouldn't be too surprised if Rarity decided to end this little escapade. It's clearly cutting into Diamond's happiness and peace of mind.
Oh my... Silver that's quite the leap in logic. Granted there were clues. I guess the solution is for Rarity to take them both on? Silver could use some lessons herself.
Wait, Twist and Snips? I always figured she'd hook up with Snails...
Aaaawwww shits on like donkey kong
Wow, I wonder what the next chapter holds. Good chapter Nackte!
Interesting development.
Threesome nao!
Diamond should have just owned up. That would have made it a metric shit-ton easier to end the relationship somewhat nicely.
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Leap of logic, true, though for Di to be defending somebody who's telling her what to do? That's pretty extreme there. However, now that she's seen Di's reaction... well, that's pretty much a big ol' "yeah, I'm sleeping with her, and that's what my etiquette classes are covering for" right there. Gotta learn to control your reactions, Di....
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Thank you thank you! The next chapter's underway!
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For sure, but then, she's way too hard-headed to do something simple and common-sense like that, isn't she?
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Snails? Even Twist has standards.
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brb, dedicating the entirety of the next chapter to a red-hot Twist x Snips x Silver Spoon scene
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Rumble in the Jungle: Silvy vs. Diamond
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She sure could. I guess anything could happen
1470104 YES!!
wat?
Came for the clop, staying for the story. Hope you update soon.
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Great to have you along for the ride! I just got chapter 6 back from my editor, so you'll be seeing something hopefully by the end of next week.
I am reading this with no shame. Now commence the spankings!
I never thought I'd say that ever, but except for the trouble with Silver Spoon, I wish I were Diamond Tiara.
This is exactly the form of D/s I love.
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Readin' this story?
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In all fairness, Di never Pinkie Promised, so you can't blame her too much.
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I know, minus all the problems she's running into, she's quite lucky.
And tell me about it, 7 months ago I never pictured myself writing about her!
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This is actually a really well written story. I bet if you cut the smut and localized it to humans you could sell this story. Though it would require more background info on the characters personalities. MLP fanfic does benefit from a pre-existing history and characters.
Let me be clear that the sex scenes do add a lot to the naughty feel of this story mind you, and loosing them would make the story elements seem less exciting.
well.. that could have gone better..