Woooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!! All I can do is ask for more! So much more!

I love these stories cause Rarity just strikes me as a pony with repressed Foalophilia

Always be lovely, inside and out, no matter how you want to scream and shout, eh Rarity? I think she knows a lot more than Tiara thinks, though I'm not sure how much it affects her.

Then again, maybe she isn't either.

The course this story is taking I find very likeable with this particular pairing. I'm eager to see how it goes.

i would give you a tump up but i can´t destroy the number 66 sry ^^

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You'll be getting more soon! And yeah, I'm glad that Rarity's foalophilia is headcanon for more than just me.

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We'll certainly find out

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It's kind of funny how long I spent thinking about that how to handle that problem. Ponies seem to own either books and toys or weird statues and art. Anyway, I went back and edited it, thanks for pointing that out!

God I really like this story, but damn how I feel that it makes almost just as many wild swings with the bat as home runs.

I do really really love my pacing, and especially a slow one when we talk about subjects like dominance that this story is about, and I must say that how they treated each other after their little "session" was over was really really nice, is this moving way way to fast for me at times. I can understand why the first "session" in the fist chapter was so quickly paced, and how the theme of trying out boundaries and limits was important, how both of them (or well... properly not Rarity) saw this new thing and wanted a bigger bite of it after they had taken their little taster, but the second time... Sorry there where way to little teasing and mild humiliation, the scene where Diamond knew that she had done something wrong, and that the crop would land, the anticipation and at the same time fear was good, us waiting to see what there would happen with almost as much anticipation as Diamond, just to be teased, upping the ante, and giving Rarity even more control than she had before, now that the unicorn know what her teen filly want, was brilliant. And so was the scene where Diamond had to say sorry, that Rarity dosn´t dominate her physically, but knows how she are and hits her mentally was really really good, showing that Rarity knew what she was doing, that she had the control over Diamond, that she knew which buttons to press to make the filly purr. But sadly where those two scenes the only really good ones, the others in my eyes mediocre at best, if we are talking about the sex scenes, and they are after all a rather big focus.

All I can say is that this is a bumpy ride, but I must admit that I enjoy it, because when you hit it right do you really hit it right.

Ohh and you have a double space in "It is something we wear inside, demonstrated through our actions.”

really worried for Spoony here but loving it all the same! good drama.