Canterlot Detective Academy

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Captain Lunar

Captain Lunar #1 · Sep 14th, 2020 · 4 · ·

Comickook

Comickook #2 · Sep 14th, 2020 · 3 · ·

All I can say is great job on this first chapter. Love the work that went into the characterizations, exchanges, general case wrap-up and future adventure set-up in all the right places. Absolutely loved the Vitriolic Best Buds-type banter between Twilight, Trixie and Moondancer as they were getting ready for their first day at their new school as well as their first meetings with Rainbow and Rarity. The group's teamwork on solving their first case was really good too. This was, all in all, a great taste (no pun intended) of what's in store for the gang over the next few years. Yeah, with mysteries like this, it is no wonder the school has produced a lot of great detectives. And, if they DO make it long enough to graduate, they'll DEFINITELY be ready for almost anything their chosen professions can and will throw at them.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter/case.

Purple Patch

Purple Patch #3 · Sep 15th, 2020 · 1 · ·

"Hey! This hat is my brand, my icon!"

Is that a Recess reference?

I'm Professor Cord!

Dare I ask his first name ? Dis?

"The fact that the glass, while it seemed perfectly fine, still had a trace amount of Berry residue behind on it. Her particular Berries, Wild Thornberry, are known to be extremely lethal yet taste delicious." Rainbow said as she looked for an open seat. "Making it more tragic is that they're also an ingredient in Aphrodisiac Drugs. So poor guy got a fun going away present."

Smmmmmashing!!!

"The lunch people say it's possible that the food they got was closer to being out of date then usual. Though they do try to keep their standards high slight mistakes are possible." Twilight said as she looked over a sample piece of food from the lunch disaster.

Is there going to be an Airplane reference?
Did Trixie have lasagna?

"Ugh.... I hate when she has a point." Trixie groans as she looks away. "Just.... say whenever you're done with your 'examination' you gross hobgoblin!" She retorted to Twilight who just shoots her a tongue sticking out.

'Gross hobgoblin'?
Not one of her best.

The sound of something clattering to the ground immediately caused her to jump as she turned around... only to see an overturned trash can. Cloudkicker breathed sigh of relief before reaching into her purse. "G-get together girl, y-you can still make this work..." She stammered, pulling out a small bottle full of pills and hastily opening it.
Once opened she tapped it to her side out fell the last two in that battle. "Thank god for that refill I got the other day... bottoms up." She whispered to herself as she popped them into her mouth. She then went to her bathroom and looked at herself in the mirror, showing a disheveled mess. "Ugh..... hmph..... alright.... no more fucking around. You go to the Principal and tell the truth." She said to herself. She then opened the window counter and grabbed her next full bottle of anxiety pills. She put them in her purse and closed the cabinet door.

You've put this twice.

Hmm...something is rotten in the state of Equestria!

Liking this so far. I like the dynamic you have with Twilight and her friends (Although they swear a bit more than I'd expect...then again, I never did much socialising in school)
And I love the references.

Are we gonna' see Fancypants and/or Fleur de Lis later? They're my favourites!

Venom Storm