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Andrew Joshua Talon


A fellow traveler...

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For a thousand years, whenever Celestia looked at herself in the mirror, someone else was staring back. Giving into that someone's demands could always be a challenge. But who else could understand this struggle?

No one... Until her sister returned.

Just a dramatic one shot I wrote in about an hour. Please comment and review.

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That was a pretty damn good character study.

I’m admittedly a bit of a sucker for good Sunbutt stories, and this one certainly scratched that itch.

Reminds me of another one-shot I read here many years ago, before Daybreaker ever showed up on the show. Celestia was taking a walk through the woods, and talking to mostly to herself; there were only animals around. And she mused about how easy it would be to just... let go. Stop restraining herself, stop caring, keep the sun up forever and just burn the world and laugh while it goes up like a match. And then (IIRC) she went about why that would be wrong, even if it would feel oh-so-good, and how she would never do that.

Maybe.

It ended with her walking off, and the animals staring fearfully at the sun, hoping it would set that day.

This story was amazing! Celestia seeing her dark side like that, *Chef's Kiss*. It made me tear up, it was so good. :fluttershysad:
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

It's beautiful. Spontaneously written, and yet without grammatical or spelling errors. :twilightsmile:

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YES! That is, in fact, the very story I was thinking about. I knew I had read it, but couldn't find it in my shelves anywhere.

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