I can no longer remember my name.
I know I had family and I can remember their names.
But it has been years since I have seen them.
My name is Monster and this is how I got my name.
This is a rewrite of the first chapter of MY NAME IS MONSTER.
I didn't like how some things sat and I wrote a prologue to help explain some things better. The second chapters will be turned into a second story.
Cover image goes to Cosmic Unicorn. From her Discordantly comic series. All credit for the image goes to her.
Chapters (2)
My first attempt at sad/deep and meaningful.
Let me know how I did.
I was almost in tears writing this myself.
1155869 I was almost in tears reading the description, mate. Let me fix it up for you.
What is your name?
What does it mean to you?
What do you do when you name is stolen? Forced away from you.
What happens when you forget your name? Only to have it changed for you.
What do you do when you're called a monster?
Also, in the title, names are almost always written with capital letters.
So sad...........This CANT END AS A ONE SHOT.Not even a epiloge can be proper for this.We need a story.A full fledged story.
nice one shot
1156720 agreed, if it wasn't for my amazing control of my emotions I'd cry right know bravo bravo indeed
cliche as fuck
shit, man now you got me full of feels :'(
1155869 gj, it gives a deeper meaning to the lables put to us in school.
1156691
Oh my goodness!
Yes! I will take you suggestion and use it.
1156720
After I had published it I was considering making an epilogue.
Or giving it more of a story. But I am unsure as to how I would do so.
1158558
How so? Also how would I un-cliche it.
1160605
Well what the absolute fuck? You make an amazingly deep tale like this and don't put a story behind it. FUCK! WRITE ANOTHER ONE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!
1158558
Your comment is cliche as fuck!
1167001 Best. Comeback. Ever (sarcism)
1166908
I am currently writing a sequel/continuation to this but I might post it as a separate story. Just a penny for your thoughts
Should I continue this or make another story based off this?
1167001
Agreed.
And you!
Should I continue this or make another story based off this?
1167037
Continue this please. I want to know everything that happened. And if possibly do something that makes him come back, like some sort of reverse spell. I don't want him to die, I want him to go out happy. TO MANY FICS WERE PEOPLE AND PONIES DIE!
1167031
Sarcasm doesn't work against the truth. Seriously! There have been so many fanfics made that any new story that is written is cliche. I'm also sick of all the cliche comments that people post which makes them cliche too.
I think the Captain has an image that he showed me a while back that said something along the lines of: "Content posted in the brony world is original for about 10 minutes before it becomes cliche" or something like that.
1167037
The concept veiled inside this unique piece of literature has encouraged my intellect to voice its opinion that this text should be reconstructed into a full pledged story. Knowing you though I'm not sure you could do it.
1167047
Read the happy ones then!
1167518
I hear you
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1167518
I do, but it always seems like someone dies....
The story really hit me hard... If your going to make part 2 please make it moar forgiving for the poor guy.
1197195
I am. Don't worry, I am.
For me this was a swing and a miss. To me it was like you skipped all the parts of the story and went directly to yanking on every heartstring you could find. But obviously for a lot of people you hit it out of the park. I guess they have more susceptible heartstrings?
3487896 keep in mind that this was thought to be a one-shot and there is elegance in simplicity.
Woohoo! Monster time!
4079501 Wow. That was fast.
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I saw that a chapter had been posted and had to read it!
4079739 Your enthusiasm for my chapters has been noted.
Time for panic from the peer pressure! ARGH! *Insert whilhelm scream*
Not really, but now that I know there is someone like you out there liking my work encourages me to work faster. Well, more frequently to be honest. Still, thank you so much!
Nice. I am exited to see where this is going.
However, may I suggest that you make a new one-shot story that is the first chapter of "my name is monster"?
I think it was Great enough to continue living in the archives.
4082558 This story will remain as it is, just being two chapters. The prologue and the one-shot-that-didn't-really-turn-out-that-way. I will rewrite the other chapters to fit the modified stroy-line and post it a separate story to this one. Perhaps as part 2 or under a different name all together. But I can still post the original up if that's what you mean. Anyway, thanks for your comment!
I liked the older
I had it faved, why did you remove it?
more?
5138157 Soon.
5142462
yay