• Member Since 26th Feb, 2012
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Scarves


I enjoy reading more than writing. Even though I sometimes wish it was the other way around.

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When everything is lost and it all boils down to the bitter horrible end.
What do you feel?
What do you experience?
What do you fear?

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Comments ( 23 )

sounds like an interesting concept, but i have no clue as to what you're writing about... it could have been a potential monologue or something... but.. eh... i... don't get it. I got that you're human-entered-pony-world, but then u just died o.o...

like i said, interesting concept, but is this meant to be like an epilogue? :rainbowderp:

2446600 Now that I think bout it I didn't give it any context. I always forget one important detail. I guess it was the human thinking back on it all. Not sure. I will think about some more. Thanks for raising that point.

2446621 Can I use that? To finish it properly? I sort of left it hanging a bit.

A bit strange... not quite sure what you're trying to get at here. I like it, but it needs more focus.

Also- that picture of the shattered eye creeps me out. A lot.

2449209 Yeah. I realize it didn't have much focus now that I reread it after others have read it and pointed it out. And the picture was meant to freak people out. So it has done it's job. Happy nightmares!

Let's just say your style of writing is unique. I can see what you're getting at but I facepalmed at the zombies, it just derailed me out of the zone. I felt really cliche and needed a lot more adjectives and... well it's hard to explain. You know me so you know what I'm getting at.

2450641 I get that a lot. But you know, it's a learning process.

2455241

Personally, this was extremely meaningful to me.

You have no idea how much this is relating to my life right now, and I must sincerely thank you for writing this.

Good luck, and Thanks. :twilightsmile:

2466300 Wow. I have no idea what to say to that actually. Except thank you. Thanks!

Comment posted by KnobBoy12 deleted Jun 29th, 2016
Comment posted by KnobBoy12 deleted Jun 29th, 2016

2490201 Yes it was. I have nothing to do sometimes.

2490396 that was some pretty deep stuff.

2995016 How so exactly?

2996841 I was talking bout the story.

2999896 I know, but I wanted to know what you meant exactly, why thought it was deep or whatever.

3003539 I cant describe why it just is.

3005129 Okay. I understand that feeling alot.

3010549 39 weeks it took me to realize why this story is deep and so close to home. death? came to terms. friends? dread the day i raise a fist against them, but my greatest fear is my self, the day i lose control and wipe out everything in my path, friend or foe.

4380678 To reuse a phrase, that is deep. But thank you for commenting again, I now know that my story has actually done something.

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