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This story is a sequel to Sunset Among Shadows
The Anon-a-Miss era is over, and Sunset is happy in her new life with her new friends.
But a new challenge will make her return to the place she left behind, and face those who were her friends, and a strange but well know person.
The GAMES are going to start, and there can only be ONE winner.
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Intersting.
Sunset with black glasses?
Human!Sunset showing up after everything, and to CHS, and right before the Friendship games? Intriguing.
Me: Excited squealing.
Oh damn.
What a fun start lol. Gonna be a hell of a collision when the two Sunsets meet.
You may want to change your scene dividers. It was okay in the previous installment, but the current abbreviation spells out a rude word.
And we're off with human Sunset making her long-awaited debut! I cannot wait to see what this sequel has in store for us!
Let's see where this goes, it is certainly new to the human sunset kind of replace the pony one, I want to see how this plays out, I liked sunset among shadows, hopefully this is on par :D.
I like where this is going.
I enjoyed Sunset among shadows.
Keep up the good work.
I’m excited for the sequel, but may have to wait until you get an editor or fix up the grammar mistakes.
New story, new adventures and our familiar flamed haired girl with company returning this year. I can't wait!
This looks interesting I hope she and the rainbooms make amends.
Nice interesting sequel. Your title is misspelled however.
I don't know how I feel about this... but please, keep going. Hopefully, it will be as good, or at least close to as good, as the prequel.
We do get an explanation as to where Human Sunset has been all this time, right?
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Yep. It's mentioned several times that she went to Trottingham her whole life.
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Actually, in the prologue, she says that she has already changed schools 3 times
I REALLY don't like Abacus Cinch.
Cool story. Just read the 1st one and jumped to this one. Added to my read list.
I can't believe I'm 5 days late to read this, but it was glorious to read, especially the duet between the Sunsets! I can't wait for more & hopefully I'll be able to read each new chapter sooner than later!
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So I'm doing my job well, heh heh
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Thank you very much
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Hello friend, thanks for reading this fic too, I hope you like it
Well those are some different games indeed.
Also a very awkward photo in a nice chapter.
'Sour grunts and clenches his teeth.' I didn't know Sour was a guy.
The team are now set & ready to battle CHS! Three things stood out in this chapter that I really like in random order.
1. Suri still has biggest crush on Sunset & still can't control herself around her (the obvious reason Upper Crust is on the team).
2. Twilight no longer cares about that private school & is on the team by choice to support and be by Sunset's side.
& 3..... Seeing Sonata being her goofy-lovable self by shoving a whole orange into her mouth!
Can't wait to see who will join the Rainbooms & Human Sunset for the games.... Quick question, how come Sunset didn't know the F.G.? Is that something that's gonna explain or no?
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1. Suri is still too young to control such strong emotions, and Sunset is too naive from it to understand. But they are a cute duo in their own way.
2. Twily and Sunset just work too well together.
3. Sonata is fun to write
I have interesting plans for the team.
Quick answer, in the original movie Sunset didn't know about them either so I just left it at that.
But as a possible answer, Sunset simply focused on her world / planetary conquest plan and ignored any information on it.
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Really? I must have not remembered that part, because it has been a few years since I seen either Equestria Girls movies. Anyways thanks for answering, this was a lot of fun to read just like the previous chapters and I can't wait for the next one!
Don't worry about the fact that some words are so far apart. That's been happening in pretty much every story lately.
i think that was a bad move. she is going to be mistaken for the pony Sunset and could be harassed or attacked.
ugh the whole glasses thing. why?
'"You have mastered every sugarcube class." Says our well-known farmer.
"And you are earning everyone's affection." Add the dressmaker.
"Um, affection… I'm just… try to be king." The new girl comments as wanting to downplay the situation.
"More than kind you are charming." The dressmaker confirms again.'
First, I think you mean; you have mastered every class, sugarcube.
Then Sunseen are saying king and then Rarity says that she is kind.
The teams are ready. Now let's wait for the butchering-I mean, the Friendship Games to begin.
Nice update.
The teams are set, secrets are revealed, & Twilly might be breaking her promise to Sunset about investigating the magic at CHS..... But also importantly.... Sunset KISSED Twilight on the nose & cheek!!! I can't remember, if Sunset has done it before, but it looks like Suri (& the other girls have a crush on Sunset, I think Sunny was one of them) has to step up her game or else, Sciset (right ship name?) for the win!
Yeah dislike that Sunseen has glasses to. Give her a different hair style
Nice chapter.
Very good chapter, I'm looking forward to the start of the Friendship games, keep up the good work!
I'm not sure what stood out the most, the fact that Twilight when against Sunset's wishes and going rogue to investigate the magic, or Twilight yelling and giving the rainbooms above necessary and unnecessary Guilt Trip for what they did to Sunset, or or the fact that human Sunset interact with the magic portal because of Twilight......
You know what I'm going to say everything Twilight did was a standout moment. Anyways great chapter and happy New Year!
P.S. sorry for reading this a couple days late
Well this should be fun, two sunsets under the same roof ooh boy this is going to be really fun
Collage to high school???
What? What the what?
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Yes, I know I have a terrible grammar, you don't need to criticize it, everyone knows it, thank you
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I was thinking wrong words maybe? Violet instead of violated. Or are we saying her hair has been violated? Top/bun instead of toupee? And yes, I have plenty of my own issues. I wasn't trying to criticize so much as stating the sentence has me confused.
Not bad, any plans of continuing?
You missed this passage.
Mientras la música suena, la chica de hebras doradas toma a la otra por la mano y la acerca para luego ambas bailar con cierta elegancia pero sin perder el ritmo de la canción.
Rarity gira sobre si misma y luego Applejack la toma de la cintura y la acerca hacia sí.
Apparently this update and I was sooo excited then it died down when I got hit in the face with HIATUS STATUS!? 😭 WHYYYY!😭
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Thanks, Fixed
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No longer is
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Hmm? Oh yeah Hahahah🤣
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You're welcome.