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BelleofdaBall


Just your ordinary lass who loves Disney movies, the color pink and writing weird stories.

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This story is a sequel to I'll Stand By You (Anon-a-Miss AU Story)


A week after Sunset Shimmer disowns her friends, the Rainbooms meet up to reflect on the happenings during Anon-a-Miss's reign of terror, and why they turned their backs on Sunset. And even ask themselves a question that'll sting.

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Comments ( 47 )

Well, time will tell.

10111302
That it will, that it will.

Ok while i did like the other one, i do have to say this one is a lot better.I think Twilight would still be angry at them but hearing that give her hope.

10111362
Thank you.

Yeah, I may or may not write a story of Twi interacting with them.

booh, hiss

Ya dun gav en ta dah peer pressure meh boy! Why?

Really wanted to see more of this and if sunset will except them

10111523
I am planning more, trust me.

10111432
Um, I'm sorry?

Also, I'm a girl.

Glad to see a remake that makes sense.

While it's your call on whether Sunset forgives them or not, but honestly, i prefer that Sunset DOESN'T forgive them. Had enough of forgiving stuff.

10113191
If she ever does, it won't be for a good long while.

30 years later
Sunset:... No

Applejack sighed. "I talked to Big Macintosh an' Granny Smith, an' they both agreed with my wantin' to ban Babs from Sweet Apple Acres for a long time. Plus, her folks took away all her electronics an' are sendin' her to military school." She frowned darkly. "No less than that little varmint deserves." The other girls nodded in agreement, then went back to silence.

Slight bone of contention here; military schools are not meanrt to reform delinquents. They're training centres for cadets, and Babs is the last sort of person they'd want, given the importance of trust in the military. When I was a schoolteacher I helped run a cadet unit, and we teamed up with a military school periodically. They made a point of quality, going as far as to say on their website "do not send your problem kids here. We are not a juvenile detention facility."

10157060
Dang. Really. I thought the Military School Instructors will teach Babs, a PROPER LESSON on Humility.

10202227
As I say, just about the last person the army wants.

10202236
Okay then. 😐 It's just in the story, She is going there anyway. But, I want to know what do YOU think in a realistic case, what the Military School say to the Apple Family, that they CAN'T take her. Because of what you just said??? πŸ€”

10202249
Well, they'd speak to whomever Babs' parents are, they'd point out she's not military material.

10202261
Yep. Makes sense. πŸ‘ But, how will Applejack, Applebloom, and their other Apple Families react to that? And how will they make a alternative, and "reasonable" Punishment for Babs??

10202271
It seems cliched, but boarding school?

10202273
I thought about the Juvenile Detention Facility really. But, whatever. 🀷

10202305
Why? You can only be sent to juvie if you've been convicted in a court of law, which Babs wasn't. They don't live in North Korea.

10202307
But, what about that WHOLE Major Cyberbulling, and having a innocent Student(Sunset) get framed and got bullied as well?? I mean, Discord did say that he will call the Police to have a FEW words with Babs in the previous story. So, I thought she'll get a BIG punishment after all the Crap she have done. :trixieshiftright: :twilightangry2:

10202329
IF she doesn't comply with the assembly. She complied at the assembly, thus the police were not called.

10202340
I know. I forgot to add that.

It's just besides being Banned for ever going to the Apple Farm, Expelled from all of the Schools, and BEING grounded by her Parents. I think she got it WAY TOO easy of a punishment!!! :twilightangry2: :flutterrage:

She needs a MAJOR Beat down after threatening the CMCs like that. And saying garbage to Sunset and the others!!!! 😠😠😠😠😠😑😑😑😑😑

10202355
I don't deny what she did was wrong, but offenders need to be rehabilitated as well as punished. Judging from her attitude and dialogue in the previous story, Babs believed the entire world was out to get her. Excessive punishment would only reinforce that.

Did you know that 75% of those who are released from prison in Britain go on to reoffend? That's because British society is more interested in punishing people, forgetting that one day these people will need to reintegrate into the community.

10202363
I'm not really interested in ours(U.S.A), or other countries dealings in the Prison and Criminal topics. I'm not into that, sorry. 🀷

But, If Babs wants to change for the better, like her Pony counterpart. She will have it HARD!!!!! Because, the city and the CHS Students will really HATE her for all the Crap that she have done to them. I mean, I seen other Anon-a-Miss stories, that the CMC get treated like total trash, 1,000 times more than Sunset. Because, there are the real culprits. They even get the threat of sueing by the student's parents. This will likely happened to Babs as well.

10202377
Move her to another city. She has no immediate future in Canterlot.

10202382
Understandable. But, then there might be a case of the parents Sueing the entire Apple Family, for screwing with their kids. :twilightoops:

10202387
Strictly, Babs isn't an apple. She's an Orange.

*Their, not there*

10202389
Thanks for the grammar.

But still, Bab's parents will get sued in the court. By the Cyberbulling Victim's parents.
I mean, it happened with the same thing to the CMC's Families in the other stories. And is realistic in any case.

10202397
Nobody wins in this scenario.

10202400
Possibly. At least the REAL culprit got what She deserves I guess. And Sunset found a REAL friend, along with Twilight. Do you think the Main 5 MIGHT have a chance for Sunset's forgiveness, later down on the line????

10202454
Maybe. Then again, I'm not hugely invested in Danielle as a character. Bit too Mary Sue for my taste.

10202502
She doesn't sound like a Mary Sue to me. :derpyderp2:

10202546
You think? She has no personality faults, is always right, believes Sunset when nobody else does, and succesfully floors trained athletes (who for some reason don't jump her all at once), and is seemingly trained in asset suppression tactics.

We can have flawed OCs, you know! Then again, we are dealing in a genre that relies on everybody being idiots. If people acted in character, there would be no story.

10202552
She could know Karate, or Hand to Hand Combat methods. And she doesn't have the "Idiot Ball" Trope, like the rest of the CHS students.

For the personally thing, I don't know. If I was her. I be Pissed as well on how Sunset is treated. I know she is bad, and a Bitch last time in the past. But, she was WAY smart, and the subtlety NOT to get caught for many years. Until Twilight and Spike show up to expose her. What Anon-a-Miss is doing, are amateurs. And are TRYING to make it like that Sunset did it. P.S. IF they just use their brains for once. WHY would Sunset herself screwed up her Redemption, for this petty, and stupid Cyberbulling.

But, you are right. The entire Anon-a-Miss original story sounds way OOC, and a Bad Fanfic Comic, that is trying to make a Canterlot Wedding, or Mare Do Well scenario.

Like you said, it's NON CANON!!!!!! But, it did make a lot of good Bashing Stories. 😏

10202598
Now then, the author could have spiced things up with Danielle initially falling into line with everybody else on the issue and THEN having a change of heart. That's never been done before.

The comic is universally acknowledged to be pretty stupid.

10203132
Maybe it's hard to come up with Original ideas, in this type of topic.

And yeah, it is dumb. But like I said, made some good Bashing Fics. 😈😈😈😈

10203184
Ever read CapnTilfy's Anon-a-Miss stories? They fix the bulk of the problems inherent in the comics quite cleverly.

I’m interested in seeing a sequel. Also, I like seeing characters question themselves.

WHEN WILL THE SEQUEL HAPPEN

When I first read the comic, I was like, β€œOMG! They all betrayed there elements of harmony! Twilight’s gonna kill them!” It’s nice to read about them actually confessing it themselves, good job on the story!:pinkiehappy:

10720884
Honestly, something I never understood about anon-a-miss with twilight involved is how come they never tune her out?

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