My story written for May Pairing Contest 2021.
Principal Celestia has always had to be the mature woman, the responsible, the role model, and support for all the others who depend on her, she never imagined that she would find her equal in a woman, physically much younger, from another world.
Spin off of "Sunset Among Shadows". You don't need to read that one to read this one.
The characters are +18 years old
Update 11/29/21.
New edit and corrections made by my friend Arthor2017. Thanks pal!
Chapters (1)
It's okay. The big problem is there are a lot of grammatical errors. For example:
Should be:
Also, why is all the dialogue in bold?
10820192
Thanks for the correction, I already fixed it.
To answer, please read the author's note.
I do think you would benefit from an editor, but your ideas - the most important part of a story - are lovely. Good on you for making the ending bittersweet, most would lack the courage to do that.
It's a strange ship, but a sweet one.
10896197
I know, I have no ability for grammar. Sorry
Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you like it. Yes, I like endings like this.
And yes, it's weird, but I liked doing it.
10896262
No apologies needed. :) It was a lovely story, thank you for it.
You are welcome, buddy.