Spanish is my first language, and I have no real experience with English grammar. So I hope you understand and forgive my mistakes in translating my stories.
Sunset Shimmer has abandoned her studies, and has crossed a portal into an unknown world.
But the place she has come to is not the one we all know.
It will be the Crystal Prep students who will have to deal with the influences of Sunset
And Princess Twilight will have to face the new challenges that Sunset and this school will have for her.
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Super short, but I do see a lot of potential, so I'll stick around.
P.S. Red, you created "Sunset Among Shadows and it was a huge success! You really shouldn't worry about any grammar error, because I didn't find none in that story, so I'm positive I won't find any in this one
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Thank you my friend
I know it's short but I just wanted to show the beginning The next chapter will be longer I promise
And thanks for your words.
Still I know some readers are bothered by my grammar and just wanted to avoid those future problems. SAS was edited by someone else, but this time, for the moment I am alone.
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Who's care about them, if they can't handle errors (that don't really exist) then it's their loss, not yours, I'll have my support as always
Damn, what a way to make a impression on the first day, pretending to get almost raped, so two bullies get expelled right away was quite the statement. This was worth the wait and I can't wait to see what happens next
I really dislike the fact that you just jump right into the main plot point of Equestria Girls, without giving some sort of inside of what happened before hand. The beginning felt so rushed just to have the princess already there.
But on the other hand, I do like how confident and how much Authority Twilight (aka Sci-Twi) has gained from spending time with Sunset. I wish you would focus more on the bond those two had made, instead of whatever this is.
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hehe hee don't worry, I'll surprise you in the next chapter
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Okay I'll wait & sorry if I sounded harsh, it was just weird to see you take a shortcut on a chapter.
Pretty cool flashback chapter, but I still want to see when Twilight became confident, strong, and was able to put fear in her fellow students before the princess showed up.
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Don't worry, this won't be the last we see of young Sunset and young Twily
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Excellent news
I am incredibly intrigued, this is a great job, and it knows how to interest) With great pleasure I would read its sequel, but, apparently, will not. This is very sad because the potential is huge. Anyway, thanks a lot for these chapters)
(I'm bad at English, I use a translator, sorry anyway))
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Thanks a lot!
And I'm sorry I left the story like that, it's just that I couldn't find the strength to follow it.
But this story has not been canceled or abandoned, I have plans to resume this and other works that I have left unfinished (not only on this page) Hopefully, after finishing other projects I will be able to continue with this one.
And don't worry, I don't speak English either, heh heh
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Oh, great) Anyway, good luck with your future work)
This story is wonderful. Unfortunately, there is no follow-up.