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"Show my head to the people, it is worth seeing." - Georges Danton

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GoreaTheAuthor, please tell me that there will be another installment of this. There is not enough good gore on this site, and certainly, nothing that generally has a balance to the grotesque.

blease

I think in this case, there is only one proper reaction:

*Chef's kiss.*

Absolutely delightful. I do so love an evil Rarity, and her voice is just so wonderful when used in a context like this. I would read an entire series of adventures between Twilight and Rarity.

This worked way better than I was expecting it to. Really nice work, you pulled off a concept that would've been easy to make super cheesy/edgy quite well!

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It does kind of lead to a much bigger story, doesn't it?

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Evil Rarity is :okhand:

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Thank you for the kind words. i'm glad it did not come off cringy XD

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It does kind of lead to a much bigger story, doesn't it?

You say that like there's not only one answer.

I haven't read this story yet, but it sounds like it's about cannibalism. If that is the case, then why make it anthro? To me at least, I think a cannibal would work better if it was a normal pony.

I really enjoyed the thriller air here, and It’s a fascinating villain in Rarity

I'm not a big fan when turning main cast characters into villains but this one was done so well that it actually caught my attention. And as sad as it is that Rarity is practically cooking a piece of Pinkie pie in front of Twilight it makes the scene that much more twisted, I find myself hoping you make a sequel to this from Twilights perspective because it'd be interesting watching Twilight hunt down one of her friends and try to find a way to save her at the same time. and considering how skilfully Rarity was able to avoid detection and it's obvious the way this story ended that she did actually feed Twilight I can see Twilight slowly becoming corrupted to the idea of doing the same thing Rarity does and this ending with a successful romance between two very twisted ponies. But even if you don't continue this I did enjoy it and while it would be sad to see it end where it is it was delightful to read none the less. Also considering they both admitted to having feelings for one another even though it did turn out as dark as it did a romance tag would be fairly appropriate here.

Well, damn, that was really well done, Rarity felt pretty Hannibal Lector-y but still Rarity enough to keep it just on the edge of believable, good work.

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