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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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The three rulers of the Hearths Warming Eve tale have returned, and are as hateful and disharmonious as ever. Unless the Mane Cast figures something out fast, these three cold hearted mares are going to plunge Equestria into civil war. I HATED those three pony leaders! I WANTED THEM TO STAY FROZEN FOREVER! Their advisers deserved to rule more than they did! So, I wrote this Fan Fic, where everypony will get to see how evil and heartless they really are.

Oh, and this is VERY important. THE RULERS ACTUALLY DO LOOK LIKE RARITY, PINKIE PIE, AND RAINBOW DASH. This will actually be important to the plot later. Anyway, the episode was really great, and I hope you all enjoyed it. Hopefully its success will rub off onto this Fan Fic.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 43 )

I know this is Chapter 1, but you should seriously try to make the chapters at least 1,500 words or longer (titles and notes do not count.)

Keep it up though. *Tracking*

Good job. Love it so far. 4.0 Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

Oh boy, things are start heat up

Its like three nazi-germany's in war with each oher. And you all know how crazy nazi-germany was...
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It is also interesting that most of the ponies are fighting out of fear; they don’t want to be frozen. Reminds me of this (I was listening while reading Hurricane's speech, it sent shivers down my spine"

were the fuck is Celestia and Luna during all this

hmm, i understand why you dispise those characters in particular, but if you did seen the episode, you'll know they reformed their ways after they're hearts were touched by how their advisers have worked togather to stop the windeos. yes, they were arragont, but not evil. just ignorent. it was also back when Equestia was very medevil back then, and, appearently sometime before Celestia's and Luna's reign. (and appearently even before Discord) i don't question your theory or your opinion, i am just stating the record.

you shouldn't insult characters that don't even have their own forms just because they made a few bad desidsions. it was because their subjects were stariving and they were not aware of the Windiegos till the very end, and before that, they assumed it's because of Weather control negglet or Unicorn soccery. they were on the verge of starving and ain't aware that they were tormented by the Windiegos.

sorry for the wikipedia like lecture, i just wanna set the record staright, and, making these characters evil just because of bad opinion seems atad rough, don't ya think?

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They're frozen by the Wendigoes!:facehoof: :ajbemused:Pay attention please!:scootangel:

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Well, you're kinda missing something here. This story is based on the premise that the ending of the Hearths Warming Eve story was WRONG.
"if you did seen the episode, you'll know they reformed their ways after they're hearts were touched by how their advisers have worked togather to stop the windeos. yes, they were arragont, but not evil. just ignorent."
But according to my premise, the whole ending becomes an unreliably:derpyderp1: told unreliable:derpyderp2: tale told by an unreliable:derpytongue2: narrator. In other words, the "record" you are stating cannot be trusted. Hearths Warming Eve happening SO long ago, that who's to say Platinum, Hurricane, and Puddinghead weren't pony versions of Marie Antoinette (let them eat cake!), Adolf Hitler, and Stalin / Benito Mussolini or not?
As the writer of this fanfic, that decision falls to ME:scootangel:. Also, CANON may be they had a heel face turn, but my FANON happens to be AU (alternate universe), and it's one when they're all cold hearted dictators. So, that's my logic in writting this story. I just hope you keep reading and hopefully enjoy it anyway. :yay::heart:

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Well, if they were immune to Wendigo magic, then they could just go ZAP and throw the three jerks in jail. Then we wouldn't have much of a fanfic, now would we?:derpytongue2:

346899 and that's YOUR opinion. let's all remember that this fic is based on a KID'S show, so, it's not kosher to add coverseral stuff like Tyrants, Dictaters, or whatever. that is why i believe they were just arrigent leaders that cared for their kind for good reasons, they didn't understanded friendship back then and Celestia OR Luna wasn't there to send them on the right path. if your gonna hate on characters who just made bad desidtions and meant well for their own people (in some cases) then hate Luna for nearly destroying the world just to have her night appreisated, hate Twilight for only going nuts and caused a fight in ponyville trying to create a friendship problem to solve to write for her friendship report, hate Fluttershy for taking bad advice from a Minotaur and turning into a jerk just so she won't be pushed around so much, hate Pinkie pie for accusing her friends of ditching her and hating her parties, hate the Cutiemark Cusaders for love poisoning Big Mac and Cheerilee, and also hate the Cutiemark crusaders for releasing Discord in the first place, hate spike for being prosessed by greed and turning into a Godzilla parody, and finally, hate angel for leading fluttershy to go though that certain episode in the first place for pet/owner domastic volience! see what i mean, alot of this characters made bad desidions or acted like jerks or did something wrong, yet nobody hates them (at least 20% or so) and, now, your telling me, your hating on characters, that don't even have their own forms, that was explained by Young Dragon (who i think did a reasonable enough job), though a understandingly low budget play, in a KID'S show mind you, for making bad desidions?!

(sighs).

this, is the kind of thing that gave people the wrong idea on Celestia being a Tyrant, a Molester, and an Internet's variton of a troll, but clearly she is just a good-humored, good natured, benvolient goddess of the sun that had the raw end of the deal in fandom. and, now, it's the turn for three characters that don't even have their own forms, and had to borrow from already established characters. now, do you understand my point why you shouldn't hate characters just because they make bad desidtions on the canon show? look, your entitled to your opinion, that's fine, it's just that, it seriously bugs me that some people used fanfics as a way to expressed it (again, your entitled) and just, share it and make people share those exact ideals.

i'm sorry for bitching, it's just, it's wrong to hate on misunderstood characters just for bad desidions or because you THINK they did something evil, when really it's not. now, do you get my point on this?:ajbemused::trixieshiftleft:

What about Chrysalis? Will she show up?

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Definitely not! Changelings feed on love. Windigoes feed on hate. You'd never find them in the same place, because they have completely different diets.

499001 aww... but Chrysalis could shift into somepony they used to know and troll them

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Hmmm. . . OR, Chrysalis could shift into somepony they used to know and HELP THEM, because if the Windigoes win, that's the end of all love, and the Changelings would either all starve or be frozen along with everything else.:pinkiehappy:
I might just use that idea! Thanks!

499118 by troll them, I meant haunt the leaders

wow great ending for the chapter. :pinkiegasp:

Hah! Clever trick with Chrysalis there!

I do rather like the expressions on the three rulers' faces when they are turned to stone.

I'm a little less thrilled about Diamond Tiara in the dungeons since she is a child. A spoiled brat of a child for certain, but still a child. I realize it's for comedic effect, but those are my personal feelings on the matter in general.

Hah! You actually used changlings! I feel accomplished now.

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Those other characters had mental break downs. They also had legitimate back stories that explained why they did what they did. They were not evil, only stressed.
The three rulers are Flat Cookie Cutter Rulers. They're just empty, with no real character at all. So, I have the ability to fill those three empty shells with whatever I want to. This is an AU fanfic anyway.
And I'm not forcing you to hate them anyway.

1325371 Again, sorry for over-reacting, it's just Celestia has a real bad deal in fandom and i assume the same is happing again for characters that don't canonly have their own forms. sorry for going nuts, i apologies. i am sure this is an interesting story reguardless.:twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::twilightblush:

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I have you watched Ponyville Confidential? She's a monster!

just one question
how did clover, pansy and smart cookie become princesses anyway?
when they decided to become friends become frozen where they made god like beings in the afterlife?

Can ya create another story about reforming the three evil rulers?:pinkiehappy:

So each leader has their own suck up. Surprisingly, all of them have a hatred to Ponyville. Or six mares that live in Ponyville to be exact.

Wow. One more chapter and this all ends. That seems kinda short.

Twilight's horn burst with magic as the heart-shaped Fire of Friendship appeared above them.

"Delicious. . ." Princess Clover whispered.

Uhh...:rainbowhuh:

"Perfect," Princess Clover said, "Our kind shall not starve."

There was ominous flash of green light, and there stood two Changeling, and their almighty Queen Chrysalis.

Oh. Well that makes sense.

Nice ending and twist. Brilliant! :twistnerd:

Blueballs paid the price.

Nice ending but didn't see Puddinghead's reaction besides the scream. Still nice.

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NO! Those three ponies are a bunch of racist, tyrannical, snobby jerks! I'd say a trip to the gallows would be more appropriate than being turned to stone. Well its just my opinion along with a thirst for fics with blood. :pinkiecrazy:

Can you believe my parents won't let me?

What? Sequel! MOAR! :flutterrage:

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It was Queen Chrysalis and two changelings in disguise. The last Wendigo appearance along with the failure of the attack on Canterlot would lead to their extinction. They need ponies to survive. If the three tyrannical rulers went in a full out war with the other pony tribes- they wouldn't be any ponies to feed love off.

Long story short: No ponies, no changelings.

Matthais Unidostres, you do know that you can set up an author's note in each chapter? Don't you?

How do you feel about this story, years later, now that Diamond Tiara been revealed to be a victim of Spoiled Rich, Trixie is not only redeemed but now best friends with Twilight's own student, Gilda is now best friends with Rainbow Dash again, and Blueblood is revealed to be a decent pony once you get past his classism?

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