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Northguard


For all I have and all I am

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A mare named Blaze Firestarter comes to Ponyville and immediately befriends Lightning Dust, Rainbow Dash and Spitfire. She also starts at the Wonderbolts Academy.
Blaze seems to be a normal mare until she begins to do things very few can. She can tell how a pony is feeling just by making eye contact and she's better than Applejack on spotting a liar.
Twilight, Applejack and Starlight begins to think she's hiding something from them, but finding the truth about Blaze proves to be way more difficult than they expected.

Blaze Firestarter:
Personality: Bold, selfless, empathetic, cheerful and a little impish.

Good traits: Born leader, athletic, empathetic and loyal.
Bad traits: Explosive temper (literally) and impatient (at times).

Cutie mark: A Phoenix surrounded by a fire circle.

Bio: The only thing known about about Blaze is that her mane shows how she feels. When the mane looks normal she is either: Happy or feeling neutral. When the mane falls completely down and dims in colour she is sad. When her mane is moving around like a dim flame she is angry, when her mane moves like a bonfire she is furious and when it literally bursts into flames........well......I won't tell.

Design: A mixture of Starlight, Spitfire and Cadence's design. Her mane and tail is nearly identical to Starlight's, her colours (except her iris and coat) is mostly the same as Spitfire and her overall design (except the mane and tail) is the same as Cadence.


Warning: Some ponies burn to death

Big thanks to LSTS Connor for helping me improve the chapters before publishing.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 61 )

Pretty good looking forward to how it evolves but if i had to make a complaint its that in my opinion it went a little to fast. I think it could have been better if it didnt get right into it it removes the whole "whats wrong with her something is up" thing.
Other wise its good.
But again i think it should start out slower instead of getting twilight involved straight away.
Again otherwise its a good start cant wait to see how it develops :D
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But thats just my take.
cant wait for the next chapter ;D

10187854
Thank you. I shall edit it right away, but don't worry there's more secrets about Blaze than what has already been revealed.

10187859
Cool if you want an idea of what I mean. Something like Blaze comes to town and gets a place to stay with just a quick hello to twilight. But she notices something is off with blaze but doesn't jump straight to tests and all that. Just overall the story unravels at a slower pace.
But again that's just a suggestion :D
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10187877
A good idea. Thank you for your suggestion.

10187877
Editing done. Beginning on the second chapter now.

Daww. Poor Blaze. I can't wait to see what happens.

LSTS Connor has kinda become my partner with story.

¯\_(ツ)_/¯ guess i have XD

Huh. I'm looking forward to seeing if Lightning Dust makes amends. And what Rainbow's reaction will be when Blaze walks out with her biggest rival.

10225782
Yeah. :rainbowlaugh: I hope she and Lightning can make amends-it did seem like Dust was genuinely sorry...

10225788
Blaze and Dust will be in a 'Starlight and Trixie' situation because RD doesn't want Blaze hanging out with her greatest rival.

10225802
Of course they will. But Twilight did eventually come to terms with Trixie-I mean, she approved of letting Trixie become the new guidance counselor for her school, she could have easily denied her the position. And she no longer tries to find excuses that stop Starlight from hanging out with her.

10225809
I won't give it away, but I assure you that the next chapter will contain some serious raging

10225813
Alright then. Looking forward to it-I at least hope Spitfire vouches for Dust's "second chance" while not altogether disagreeing with Rainbow. Dust went behind her back too.

10225816
I do not plan for Spitfire to take Dust's side. She will take both sides.

Dust's side: Because it was Spitfire who agreed to give her a second chance.
Rainbow's side: She doesn't trust Dust that much.

10225818
Yeah, that makes sense.

10225857
I didn't even know that story existed:rainbowderp:

It's just a coincidence

Though it IS inspired by Stephen King's 'Firestarter'.

I didn't see a reference, sorry. But I agree, short but necessary. Hoping for a new chapter soon.

10225857
Now that I've read a little bit of it I can point out a few differences.
1. Nova's irises are golden while Blaze's irises are crimson.
2. Nova doesn't like parties at all while Blaze loves parties.
3. Nova has trouble with her past while Blaze has put it behind her.
Firestarter was only inspired by the movie based on Stephen King's novel of the same name. images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/51wLgH81V9L._AC_.jpg

Firestarter: Gets new chapter
Me:

"I don't see why I wouldn't come with. Just gotta go and take off these uniforms. Come on Dust! I'll race ya." Blaze said as she started to fly towards the locker room.

"You're on!" Blaze said as she flew after.

Pretty sure this is supposed to be Lighting Dust.

10319166
I can't believe I missed that:facehoof:

A great new chapter!

10352746
I take it that you are shocked.

10352857
Yes! But then, if Twi's magic was surpressed by an Alicorn...either Cadence (most likely not) or Celestia would've...:pinkiegasp:

10352860
No more secrets in the next chapter. So just wait.

10352874
Due to a burst of motivation it won't take too long. If I don't finish today then it will be finished some time next-next week.

10352887
See ya when the next chapter is out!

When will the next chapter be released?

10521297
The next chapter has paused at 562 words as I've hit a writer's block.

10521298
Writer’s block? I’ve heard of that before, but can’t remember what it is.

10521299
Meaning that you can't find out how to continue. Your brain just slams on the breaks.

10521302
Maybe try listening to music while you are writing. Whenever I do it, I don’t think about what I’m putting down, it just happens almost naturally

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