Twilight goes for a walk on her own, but is ambushed by the Dazzlings who place a fourth pendant around her neck. The pendants magic turns her into a siren, but there is a backfire for the Dazzlings that they didn't see coming.
Takes place before the battle of the bands.
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Interesting setup so far, love to see where this one will go.
Not bad, but I think it's progressing a bit to fast. Especially the change in charactar from Twilight.
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Don't worry. She will change more than she already has.
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I am not sure if this a good or a bad thing, but I will find out soon enough.
Do you plan to keep the Chapters this short or will they get longer with time?
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They will get longer over time.
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Glad to hear that.
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It's kind of my thing to start out small and go gradually bigger over time
Nice story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter!
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Next chapter should be out in a day or two
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Definitely agree
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Cannot wait. I am tracking this.
I think the first one is suposed to mean sing and at the second you missed something, or isn't it supossed to mean up to them
Also for the last sentence, wouldn't it sound better like this?: The Dazzling noticed this and meet them halfway.
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Done
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I agree. I'm sticking around to see where this goes.
When do you intend on finshing this story? How many chapters will it have? Keep fresh!
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I really don't know.
i always thought it was weird that changlings that eat love take it from ponys and the result is ponys that have draind positivity but are negative and lacking energy but when the sirens do it nothing changes in their feeding subject. also was always curious if the sirens can retern to equestria without their gems becuase without their gems on earth all that happens is they loose their magic and natural singing talent but if they went back without what can be assumed to be a vital organ or magic focus for a creature that main way of travel is flying there might be probles.
Ps hi sontana
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Wow...That was deep.
P.S: Hello to you too
Does anyone know of any other stories like this?
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Here
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Thanks!
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You're welcome
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Thanks for the follow btw!
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Likewise
Yay new chapter!
I wonder what happens next?
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You'll just have to wait and see
Nice i drick to that🥃
I like the idea of siren Twilight. It would've been really interesting if that had happened in the movie, and Sunset had to take up the hero role even more.
Eh, seems excessively one sided so far. I would never imagine Twilight to be such a pushover: especially when it comes to dealing with dark/mind altering magic, she knows that's dangerous stuff.
I am curious where this will go however.
Interesting...
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Quite possible that this is Siren magic at work.
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True
You now have my attention.
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Good.
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You're welcome.
Twilight looks awesome.
*In caveman voice* You write. Post chapter. *makes ape noises*
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Sorry about the long wait. I'm currently tossing around ideas of how to continue it. Again, I'm terribly sorry about the amount of time you have to wait.
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Your apology is accepted, I hope I got a laugh from you.
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Yeah XD that joke was funny.
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Glad to have amused you, I can give some ideas via PM if you like.
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Thanks. I'll send what I've managed to write so far first.
I reviewed your story!
That has when, not where, but where is probably its own story.
... What was that supposed to do other than make her harder to deal with?
... you mean the personality change from being changed into a siren and charged with negativity? ... seems mild.
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Thanks, Someone beat me to the Pun-ch (I was going to ask that.)
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And would have definitely made the Sirens a touch more threatening then the average Equestrian villain.
Plot twist: Sonata can see the future and made the pendant with her magic.
Jesus fucking Christ.