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During her stay in Canterlot, and while she should be making a Birthday dress for Twilight, Rarity is instead mingling with the elites of the capital. But among those prestigious faces is one who, quite frankly, she'd hoped to never meet again.
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Hehe. Not a bad take on a possible burying-the-hatchet at all.
I really like the idea for how Celestia apparently helped Blueblood to some sort of realization about his behavior, that feels pretty in-character for her.
Not bad. Blueblood does have some potential, on the vanishingly rare occasion that he chooses to exercise it.
Not much I can say other than excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up in this "Sweet and Elite"-set one-shot. Yeah, I could definitely see a scene like this between Rarity and Blueblood.
Yeah I always found that funny back then. Man is a blast from the past
It's always good to see more character development for someone like Blueblood.
Seeing Blueblood in the crowd shots during "Sweet and Elite" always did raise my curiosity as to whether or not he mended his ways. This is a very possible way for it him and Rarity to make amends.
I feel like you need to run through this for some quick editing fix-ups again. There's homophone confusion at a couple of points and some of the paragraphs are needlessly excessive in size when it doesn't suit the style. I would recommend splitting this up. Other than that, this is a nice, positive dose of a slice of life. Thank you for sharing.
This is a pretty good story. An interesting take on the reason behind Prince Blueblood's cameo alongside Rarity in Season Two's "Sweet and Elite". Your depiction of the interaction between Rarity and Prince Blueblood is actually quite entertaining.
I never really paid much attention to Prince Blueblood as a character since he never made a significant reappearance on the show beyond his debut in Season One's "The Best Night Ever". Nevertheless, I found it enjoyable to find the occasional fanfic and fanart which depicts Blueblood in a slightly-positive manner beyond his common depiction among the fandom as a "hate sink"-type character.
I'm curious. Have you ever read IDW's Friends Forever #26 written by Jeremy Whitley? It is interesting that the comic gave a balanced portrayal of Blueblood as a narcissistic and snobby twit who is nevertheless a competent and clever diplomat who can be charming and charismatic when he wants to be and ends up becoming friends with Shining Armor.
On the very slim chance that Prince Blueblood reappears in a significant role in IDW's Season 10 comic books, I hope the comics will expand on his depiction in Friends Forever #26 by again presenting him as an arrogant yet useful and somewhat-loveable snob whom we can grudgingly accept and tolerate.
Again, great job with this story!
10199943 I've only read a few of the FiM comics, and that one wasn't one of them unfortunately
Rather good wee story. Some good ideas there and I think this could lead somewhere..
And then Twi showed up and danced. Blueblood felt the need to comment but suffered a nervous breakdown when he couldn’t think of a single polite utterance. Twilight’s moves became incredibly popular among the rebellious youth of Canterlot as a result.