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Wandering Pigeon
I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...
Wandering Pigeon
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Well, it might not be your King Lear but it looks promising already. I can't wait to see how it goes next.
Really good start I am waiting for the next chapter. Poor AJ
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Poor AJ indeed. It's not about to get any better for her, either.
At least there is Sweetie Belle to help her out of that outfit.
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Right...
Holy celestia was that a great story! I love adults/ teens forced to dress like babies/toddlers & embarrassed. It’s my fetish!
Well, with writing, no single person can truly be like another. We borrow from the works of others to build our own talents. So not being a Shakespeare is a good thing. :)
Moreover is how you have a genuine talent for writing out scenes, like this one, the banter back-and-forth was wonderful and the play on being 'Rarity's Muse' with all the different vocal inflections and expressions truly brought this tale to life.
I also had my guard down thinking AJ would just be able to take off the clothes and go. However I had forgotten about the mits…
...and now Sweetie Belle is seeing more than AJ would ever want the Freshamn to see.
I also like how you paired Suri with Coco. It is akin to how a bully may use psychological warfare to get someone to do their homework. However, for suri, she bullies Ms. Pommel to make quality clothing.
Ready to hit the next chapter! Woop!
Oh, wow! Though I don't blame Sweetie Belle for wanting to get back at AJ for making fun of her and her friends. There is also how getting AJ was also getting back at her sister. So it was a total win for Sweetie Belle.
Now we must wonder if Rarity will be able to get the phone away from Sweetie Belle? What will happen with AJ as a result of making so much blort into her own panties? Will she 'have' to wear a fresh diaper so that Rarity can get her update done ASAP?
Onto the next!
I'm so sorry for her underpants
Sweetie should have given AJ a spanking but still this was a amazing series.
Been a while since your last story. Glad to see something new from you!
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well this was interesting
It would be great if, through some stretch of logic, Rarity decided AJ should stay in her suit and diaper for longer, perhaps as punishment for entertaining Sweetie Belle's hostage situation or (more reasonably) for messing up her thread room... maybe the reason she fainted is because of the "excitement" she got from it. 😏