- Member Since 29th Aug, 2013
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Berry Delight
my smile met my eyes once.... but they didn't get along.
Berry Delight
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Ha, That was funny. A like and a fav, since I didn't really take it seriously.
That was cute. Predictable, but cute.
Huh?
Okay, I thought this was grimmdark, but it wasn't. 
What a cute twist.
7668165 Maybe that's why it has a Thriller tag.
Oh my god I loved it. It was so cute. Really nice story and good job : )
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Thank you all so much! I'm glad people are enjoying this; your feedback means alot.
My first thought when looking at this was dodgeball. My second after reading a little was paintball. I never expected this! Great story! Awesome! Wonderful job!
8007773 Wow, thank you! i'd hoped to keep people guessing.
Damn that ending thou..
This reminds me of the song by Sick Puppies, "You're Going Down." So intense, so hardcore, so serious, so desperate....over a water fight.
8271310 i wanted to show just how serious simple playground games can get with the power of imagination (from my own experiences). i trust i succeeded?
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Quite.
I suspected the ending....but wasn't entirely sure until I got there.
HAHA good job. It was great. :D
This was an absolute delight, berry.