Well, it might not be your King Lear but it looks promising already. I can't wait to see how it goes next.

Really good start I am waiting for the next chapter. Poor AJ

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Poor AJ indeed. It's not about to get any better for her, either.

At least there is Sweetie Belle to help her out of that outfit.

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Holy celestia was that a great story! I love adults/ teens forced to dress like babies/toddlers & embarrassed. It’s my fetish!

Well, with writing, no single person can truly be like another. We borrow from the works of others to build our own talents. So not being a Shakespeare is a good thing. :)

Moreover is how you have a genuine talent for writing out scenes, like this one, the banter back-and-forth was wonderful and the play on being 'Rarity's Muse' with all the different vocal inflections and expressions truly brought this tale to life.

I also had my guard down thinking AJ would just be able to take off the clothes and go. However I had forgotten about the mits…

...and now Sweetie Belle is seeing more than AJ would ever want the Freshamn to see.

I also like how you paired Suri with Coco. It is akin to how a bully may use psychological warfare to get someone to do their homework. However, for suri, she bullies Ms. Pommel to make quality clothing.

Ready to hit the next chapter! Woop!

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