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I sent u a pm with the cover art
This was a adorably awesome and chill chapter.
nice chapter but we need to step up on the action, drama or at least romance. So far the best way to describe the fic is either slice of life or chilled. This is not bad but it’s not good either. Still the whole thing about the goddes of death being sealed inside him is gold material to work with.
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Again, thanks for the critique. I'm hoping my next few chapters will start to be more exciting for you. Trying to alter my writing style a little, but that won't be readily noticed right away. Don't want the change to be jarring.
Working on chapter 10 right now.
Older chapters will go through some editing after getting more used to story writing.