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I think you got a few grammar errors in there but otherwise good story so far
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I'm sure there will be errors. I correct them when I can, but my priority tends to be fixing the run on sentences I tend to make.
Will go back now and then to see if can spot new errors to fix, but only have one set of eyes. It will take time.
Thank you for liking the story so far.
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Want me to put the ones I find in comment?
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Would be appreciated.
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Think I got all the ones you pointed out. Tried fixing the line with Rainbow Dash stretching her arm, as it felt weird to me too. Just didn't know how to fix it, and planned on going back to it. I'll double check the fixes in a bit, as sorta have a few things need to do.
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Just don’t work yourself too hard
And you could probably turn it into a single sentence and leave it by itself or possibly add it to the previous paragraph
Also if u need a cover image let me know I think I got one that would work considering the whole multi-world/reality thing
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I try not to work too hard. But have been home sick for most of the week, and going a little stir-crazy. Writing has been helping with that, as well as RPG games.
Cover art would be appreciated. Have not found something I liked or had permission for, and am not good at art. Heck, even my avatar was a Christmas gift from a friend.
This is getting more and more interesting.
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I think you'll like the next two chapters.
I wonder, can Spike see the black moon too?