This was a fun and chill chapter .

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I had fun writing that one. Just tried to think, what would Pinkie Pie do? Then toned it down a couple of notches.
Spacing out chill chapters and exciting ones.

So far so good, let me give you some advice. Remember this is just my opinion.
Your fic is great in exposition and dialogue but there is too much inaction. We are in chapter 4 but so far we haven’t seen enough conflict or drama to get the blood pumping. There is not enough hooks. Maybe state his powers to let us know more about him, or write about a difference in ideals between him and the princesses to give some adversity. Or give him different opinions or life style that would collide with the ponies way of living and acting. I won’t called you fic boring but it’s too tame. Try to spice it up a bit.

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I thank you for the advice. The conflict will come, I am just not that experienced in moving a story along yet and seem to take my time with it a bit too much. Should be something that improves with experience.