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First dreamworld paragraph
It looks like the entire village
The second thing he noticed was (take out is)
Seems like that first sentence ended a bit prematurely
Put a hyphen after did and before poof as its still one sentence but split between two characters
Honestly not sure about this one but I think that should be a comma and not period before the dialogue
This is a interesting and awesome start
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Thanks. Just happened to have the Tantabus episode playing in the background when found my old game notes.
It gave me the idea for the story and just went with it, to see where it leads.
Wonder what might be in store for Spike in this fic?
About the moon mentioned in the description, I wonder what effect would it have on Luna specifically? Due to her being the princess of the night and moon there. And her being associated with darkness there.