Page generated in 0.014 seconds
Total duration
794 users online
723,173 hits today, 2,879,217 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Ok this one I know is a comma before the dialogue
Change the first period to a comma then take out the comma in the second sentence
First period needs to be a comma. And it’s Applejack. One word like the drink
Should be or
This was a funny and chill first meeting with the main six.
10099191
Was trying for something different, compared to other stories I have read here. Tried to keep the general friendly tone of the show, and how welcoming they are. At least for the start of the story. Personalities are likely to change a little as the story goes on, due to events and character growth.
That is, if I can do my ideas justice.