Happy to have you back, Darf. I've missed your particular brand of pony unf, and this was a nice return to form.

If I had one thing to critique it's that Sweetiebelle seems to know a couple of terms and phrases before Rarity actually explains them. But beyond that, I enjoyed it. Ah, young love. And perverted older sisters.

Hope you're doing better these days, dude.

--CG

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i LITERALLY was going to edit that in and then forgot. lemme try to fix it right now

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yass. now no one will be the wiser. >>; thank you fam

darf? I remember a darf!

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no such thing! >>;

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Glad to have you back, you old perv!

Unf

Loved it. That's good stuff

Seems like Rarity left out a really very important lesson about what sex is all about...but depending on the laws of magical genetics, they'll probably find out soon enough.

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we thought about that and then decided a throw-away line by rarity somewhere about 'because it's a pony and dragon' then = no babies. it's honestly a bit of a cheap fix, but since that wasn't the focus of the story it seemed easier to brush it away than to spend a whole possible 500 words explaining it. good catch tho. <3

Loved working with ya darf, thanks for the fic!

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Overall, pretty good. It kinda sucks you deleted most of your older stories, but I hope you write some more and can, over time, grow your list of stories back to or even greater than what you used to have.

This was interesting to be sure. I would like to see a follow up to this. I am thinking I could see one with Sweetie now wanting the other CMC to experience what sex is like and the only one she would trust with her friends is Spike. So he gets to have some fun with the CMC and make his own little herd. I could also see a squeal to this set at the end of the show with adult Spike and Sweetie. Maybe Rarity is feeling down and thinking she will always be alone. Well her little sister and brother in law are about to return the kindness she showed them ten fold by bringing her into her life and show her why a dragon is SOOO much better than a stallion lol. I would also love to see you do some Sparity stories to be sure one day.

darf!

Best names for the two chapters ever

Nice!

Perhaps bonus chapters?

Ah, to be young and have unlimited stamina again...

Spike and Sweetie shared a look that said something like "We can do this together as much as we want?"

Oh dear...

This was quite a good story.

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Sweetiebot?

Haven't read the story yet

Sweetie looked at Spike, who's eyes were hungry than she'd ever seen them. His legs were splayed and his cock pointing straight up at the ceiling.

"Who's" is a contraction of "who is". The word you meant to use is "whose". Aren't homophones a pain?

PS: Best chapter names ever.

Another PS: looking at the stories to the right of this comment section (particularly the ones you wrote), it sure seems like you use the phrase "with sexy results" in your stories' short descriptions. You should do so more, for LOLs.

Sweetie rolled her eyes and sighed. "We already did that part. Yes, I consent, it's fine, I wanna get fucked, gimme that dragon dick!"
Spike and Rarity both went wide-eyed.
"Well... You heard the lady," Rarity said, after a moment, smirking.

Here you go, Spike!