Love ponies and writing. So why not put them together?
Trixie is found by one of the 6 mane members and has moved to Ponyville. Trixie give up her show off behaviour as she wants to fit in. However most ponies have a grudge on the show-mare and has labelled her as a out cast.
The story is inspired by this Comic
Hope you enjoy this!!
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after the umm sure bit. it repeats.
Fluttershy seems quite a bit out of character.
"Must be" not "Must've be"
I don't see the point in mentioning the iron will workshop. I mean you could in the sentence before but it just seems like it's out of place.
I had a Déjà vu
1298290 Blame me, I'm the editor.
I figured it was either Twilight or Fluttershy that finds Trixie and brings her in. Serves Angel right, for worring Fluttershy like that. It's going to be a rough morning for her and her guest.
Ponyville has two Ls
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yeah its all of my editors fault, blame him lol
Also how so is fluttershy ooc?
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I fixed it, happy?
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Just. Reading her. It doesn't feel quite right. It feels like she's still her but...Just...argh it's hard to explain.
1299707 Hey you came up with the story, I just revised it and made it grammatically correct.
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Take a joke!!
I like it. Especially Angel Bunny getting booted outside for the night. Little bastard had it comin'.
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glad you like it. feel free to check out my other stories just a idea
I'm sorry, old friend. But from my side, it's hard to edit when I have no time to even write for my own story. I know you are deeply disappointed in me, and I hope you find a more qualified editor. Looks like I don't get the Element of Loyalty.
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Or generosity but forgive you but i"m really annoyed at you right now.
2011175 I have midterms, which I am very stressed out about. Please, understand how I feel when I can't even find time to finish my own story, then expect edits to be made to another story. But from my side, you kinda threw a whole new story idea at me, and a new chapter. Please don't be annoyed, you have potential, and I was honestly holding you back as your editor. Great, now I'm going to sleep sad.
Well, I like where this is going... But it feels... I dunno.
If you would like, I could try being your new editor. I think this story has potential.
True, writing, or in this case, editing fics that are completely back before even season 2 aren't usually my thing, but I'd be willing to try.
Pm me if you'd like my help
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Okay I'll you a shot. I'm working on a chapter right now. I'll send to you when I'm done
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This was of my earlier works it's not that good. But I'm thinking of bringing it back.
Not bad. It's good to see that you're continuing the story. Keep up the good work.
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aaaaand then it was marked canceled.
5911448 Sorry i just don't like this story. I keep losing interest in it.
I'm confused, this is up o the updated section of the home page...but no recently dated chapters