On a normal day, Rainbow wakes up and realizes she forget her anniversary. Which is tomorrow. She needs to think of something and fast. Or be a lousy marefriend for life!
Love ponies and writing. So why not put them together?
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Dashing for pie sounds like a ship fic with pinkie and dashie.
Is that a 'gulp' ponytail!
cute
keep up the good work!
5543468 OMG it really does.
5543547 Why yes it is
5543690 Thanks
The story's pretty good! Short and sweet with the fluff every SoarinDash fan desires
The only thing is that you switched verb tenses a few times, for example right here:
Wakes: present tense
Realized: past tense
Other than that, it was so cute!
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Grammer has never my forte!
no offense, but this needed a proofreader.
Like for Soarindash anyway
Some grammar issues here and there but over all entertaining and I agree with Soarin. Keep up the great work XD
558245 Are you talking about the pre made piecrust? Thanks for the fave BTW
two of my OTPs in 1 fic i must be dreaming.
Also i LOVE the humour in this. If i were a pegasus I'd never use my front door! XD
5611493 I wouldn't either. I had a blast writing this I also wrote a sequel "Good Pie insanity", It's funny as while.
5612216 AWESOME! I'm, totally adding it to my bookshelf!!
Great story, but you need an editor bad.
Upvoted anyway.
5545616 I have a question. Actually, I have three. This isn't just for the author, by the way; anyone who has an opinion can contribute.
Question 1: If you were added to an editing group by someone else, would you be offended?
Question 2: If you were added to something (bookshelf or group) titled "Stories I'd like to edit" or anything similar, would you be offended?
Question 3: Which of the above would fit better, a bookshelf or a group?
The reason I'm asking is because I see plenty of stories that are great in principle but have terrible proofing errors.
5729090
To answer your first question . No i wouldn't be offended if someone added this or any other of my stories were added to a editor's group.I've done it myself but I do want edit on my own. one of these days. However I expect people to ask my permission first before doing
Second No it's fine with me
Third I don't know the difference between the other. Which gets more attention I guess.
5730505 You want people to ask permission before adding your story to a group?
5732520 No to edit
5732590 I don't think you need to worry about that; I'm fairly certain that nobody can edit your stories without your permission. Most people use Google Docs to share their documents with people who they've trusted to edit their stories. I don't think it's possible to edit someone else's story on this site; you would have to somehow get the author to do it.
5732708 I guess that's true
IT NEEDS A SEQUEL!
5891661 Ok what should be about?
5891674 About the date they had and how it progressively worsens.
Classic cliche, but cliches become the way they are, because they work!
Awww~~
This was amusing and adorable, though due to how it ends, I don't think I'll fave it.