This story is a sequel to A Dash of Pie
Caramel and his friends must repay a debt to the Apple family . With Applejack and the three greedy guts remaking pies that they ate the craziness begins.
Kindly edited by aurorablaze
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Lady Brony
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Stalion, get yo ass in that kitchen and make me some pies!
2824606
lol I did make her sound a bit psycho whoops.
2824972
A bit, but Caramel and the others kinda deserve it. Applejack spent almost a whole day, which is a lot time that could have been doing many of the other things on the farm, working on those pies and they just eat all of them. That's time and money wasted right there.
And then Caramel acts like a frickin 8 year old, not a smart move on his part.
Anyway, story is cute and hope to see more.
2825123
yeah,I was sorta of going for that. Anyway I'll post more when my editor is done.
2825224
Do me a favor and light a fire under his ass. Thank you.
2825229
PS thanks for the fave!! =)
2825243
Oh I could go one forever; nails through fingers, pouring fire ants into cuts made by rusty razor blades, and on, and on.
My mind is a scary place.
2825266
!
I'm going to turn my story into a cupcakes ripoff just so you know. That story messed with me in unspeakable ways
2825291
You mean a story similar to Cupcakes? Or a parody?
2825300
Now thinking maybe I wil my story into a parody. This will cute and funny ir make feel you sick
!
2825318
Huh, trying to see how that would work but I can't since I never actually read cupcakes.
2825337
I meant without the whole cupcakes things
2825347
Well when you usually plan to do the opposite of something you should read it first so....
Though about the cupcakes, why not have those blobbies take their place?
2825396
Okay that works too
2825565
And you can have this moment where Pinkie has a knife and is going after Rainbow Dash, but only takes a few locks of her mane. Which is then fed to a parasprite and voila, blobbie Rainbow Dash.
2825588
forget it I don't anything to with it now. Dumb idea on my part.
2825693
K, but I think the parasprite thing would be cute to do.
2825723
That is maybe I'll just steal it (evil laugh)!
2826231
.....fire ants, rusty razor.
Nah, if you want to do it, go ahead.
2826247
You could write something like that if you like. It does sound a little funny and cute!
2827540
You know what? I think I will. It would be about bloody time I put something on this damn site.
Would you mind if I ask you to pre-read it later?
2827898
I would love too!
BTW thanks for the watch it made my day! :)
2828375
Any chance you can discuss over skype?
2828406
i dont have skype
2829018
Awww, that sucks, you should consider getting it. Anyway I'll try getting it done in a few days.
2829018
Awww, that sucks, you should consider getting it. Anyway I'll try getting it done in a few days.
2829222
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Alright I'll be waiting here for it
2829222
i caved, i got skype but i have no idea how to use it
2830411
Well, what's your skype name?
Hmm, loved it. 10/10, would read again.
4737853 Thx
4737875 No prob.
4737876 But please do read it again
4738406 I will if you want me to.
4739640 no you don't have to
4739909 Oh okay.