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ViTheDeer


My name is Violet, I'm a transgender fanfic writer and aspiring artist from Sindelfingen, Germany. I'm a mare of many facets, I hope you'll want to learn about them all!

Comments ( 27 )

First!
That is all.:trollestia:

gay clop... ehhh... no thanks...

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since im straight im only gunna coment your like the first person to write a gay clopfic i think.... good luck:moustache:

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I don't think we Love and Tolerate like that...

Even if I'm straight I gave this a chance and thought it was fine so I liked it, Good job :twilightsmile:

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Thank you BlackMirage. I'm glad you liked it.
:pinkiehappy:

1113525 I'm sorry that was mean of me:fluttercry:

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It's okay.

...and you're not wrong :twilightblush:

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Thanks. And they are rare, but they do exist, I assure you.

And are marvelous :raritystarry:

:pinkiehappy::twilightblush::raritywink::heart: I LOVE YIAO !!!!! cant spell BUT CLOP CLOP CLOP !!!

D'AWWW, such a beautiful pairing!

The Don of Flammingos approves!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the fave!

Is it odd that I am drinking Southern Comfort right now as I read this story? Anyway I have to give you six of five mustaches. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 'nuff said.

P.S. Thumbs up and faved my friend.

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:twilightblush: Why, thank you, that's so kind!

1775477 No problem and I was smashed by the end of it! :facehoof:

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Holy crap, a fic about my crackcrack shipping! (The shipping that seems like crack to crack shipping)
We need more SoarMel... MOAR... :twilightangry2:

Better than I expected.
Could stand to be fleshed out a bit, and could use a pass from a good editor. But I'm giving it a thumbs up. If you ever want another Soaramel clopfic, stop by my library.

1889228 why thank you, I appreciate the feedback. And yeah, I'll admit, this was a first draft ^///^ I'm glad you liked it though, and I'll be sure to check out yours ^_^

1885837 it is a cute ship. I need to flesh it out as bit though, since this was really just clop.

^^ This was cute, I liked it

Something to keep in mind with future projects is that in some cases multiple uses of 'he' referred to both characters in some sentences, causing some slight confusion. Perhaps using variations such as their names or, as I've seen done before, referring to their colour or species could be something to look into.

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Thanks for the feedback, I tried to avoid just that sort of thing, but I'll redouble my efforts in the future :pinkiehappy:

I hate leaving reviews that'll be all pro and then end with a con. Who wants to read about where they messed up?

I think this is really good. Its what the kids are calling a 'crack-ship', and it worked really well. Caramel is cute. Soarin is charming. The smut was smutty. Everything went better than expected.

I'd like to see more stories like this from you, dude.

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I'm smiling so hard right now :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the feedback!

The last line really pushes the story even further, even though it's just a single line. It made it seem more emotional than it would initially. Very well done. :twilightsmile:

Short but very sweet. Sometimes all you need is a bit of fluff to make you smile.

I've read some one shot male on male before. They were good... but not good enough for a fav. I know these are old Vi, but you'll be seeing them linked very soon.

Maybe get the creative juices flowing again? Four down, and still excellent. Why'd you Stop?

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