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My mind is broken
ahem...well then
Awesome
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You get four Spikes
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Well... that's certainly one way to enjoy an apple pie.
That was so hot, I came. Food? Of all things, when did it get so sexy? Thumbs up!!!
At first I thought, "Oh a spinoff of Equestrian Pie, huh?" But....it was damn good. Maybe...too good...
-looks at his erection-
Excuse me, I'm going to get me some...apple pie
I now have the feeling that Applejack has never sold a pie to a stallion who isn't interested in having sex with it. This is now a thing. At the very least, there's a Pierutters Anonymous in Ponyville or something.
I'm usually pretty shitty at leaving comments, but I really had to with this story. I read it kind of hoping for a fun little Pony 'X' screws Caramel's brains out; you know, just another M/M Clop
That said; this was a million times funnier and witty than I'd ever hoped it could be. Fuckin' grade A stuff, dude!
Keep up the great work
2106867 Ja
Ok, i'm fine with f/f and even m/m, but when have one of my favorite characters fucking a pie, that is just plan errotic. This goes into its own special catigory in the good story bin. Good story and all, grammer didnt see many mistakes, and my appatite for the pie I recently bought has recently be aroused.
2514585 I didn't see grammar mistakes in the story, but there are a shit ton in your response
Examples of bad grammer in this story, since some people who read are blind. Again sorry for being a 'grammer nazi'.
(This is not to be offensive to the writer, but to prove a point)
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delicious, sexiest pie = delicious and sexiest pie
to build up speed ...= to build up speed(period) ...
…family apples in them," = family apples in them." (Period again)
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These are the grammatical errors I was talking about Rippy. Maybe next time you should pay more attention to the story before you say anything.
2650603 I don't think blind people cane read
Cane? And, yes they can, it's called braile.