Twilight is looking forward to unwinding after a long day at the library. The bath is filled, the candle is lit, and her favorite book is waiting on the tub-side table.
Just as she slips into the hot water, she wonders why she hadn't seen Fluttershy all day...
Just a little quick piece of fiction I dashed off in response to a prompt on Tumblr.
FIRST!
I admit it was interesting and somewhat humorous. A bit too short without any of the sweet for my tastes. And maybe just slightly disjointed. I've never really read any Twilight/Fluttershy stories, not that I'm against the concept. Now, I can say that I have. Sort of.
I thoughly enjoyed this story I think it was... Diffrent... But it was enjoyable! Very since I agree with MariusIoannesP it was a first to read a Twilight & Fluttershy story before!
Good Luck Writing Everyone!
4016198 Interesting. This was just a little exercise, but I could probably expand it in the future. and inject more sweet. I'm glad you liked it though.
It's a bit short and rushed, but definitely captures that oh so sweet feeling.
4016396 your avatars picture is so adorable, I love it!
4016525 why Thank you! Yours is Oh so adorable too!
I like it. You get a favorite.
Oh well, I was thinking that you were eating spaghetti. I mean spaghetti can be messy but I don't know why you have to take a princess's name in vain.
Having guests over when you are taking a bath. How awkward... Unless you want them of course... The feelings automatically mutual story element that's here is once again irritating, but for a writing exercise it's pretty good.
4016135 Is posting a "first!" comment fulfilling? Just curious...
What're you talking about? I don't have a dirty mind. Good story.
A bit too fast for my taste but not the worst twishy I've read..
I love the way Fluttershy manages to ask her question without ever going so far as to actually ask anything...
aw so cute, really enjoyable but too quick of a story writings decent and you nailed both thier characters perfectly i'd say good job all around
Adorable! That is all.
~Tobben
D'awwwwwwww Loved It. Wish it had been a bit longer so i could keep reading it.
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If all these comments are anything to go by, I think I need to make a sequel
YAY SEQUALZ! everypony chant with me!
SEQUALZ SEQUALZ SEQUALZ…
I have absolutely no clue what the heck I just did....but you get the point, this story deserves a continuation
Well that was fast xD
Cute though :3
Gay. :V
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Nope. It just means you're a loser who thinks it does.