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Cadencebutterfly


A budding FiM writer. I don't do mane cast lesbian shipping, and I don't do long stories. Expect a reasonable (non-marysue) OC per story and lots of drama.

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An odd request from Princess Celestia stirs up a new hurdle in the life of the mane six.
With one month until the next Gala, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and the rest of the gang are given extra tickets. Why? Simply so that they may ask their special stallions to attend with them. But with one month until the Gala comes one month to choose who to bring.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 424 )

This looks like it's gonna be a fun ride. And, judging by the picture, it'll feature one of the Pinkie ships I like!

Toss in Fluttermac and it'll be brilliant. :yay:

Fancy pants...somedragon gonna get his hart broke:applecry:.

Oh shit, this is going to be good:pinkiehappy:
Good luck with the story

Hm... I see a bit of grammar and spelling errors here and there, but the story itself is a pretty fun read. I'll be keeping up with this one.

Huh, new idea, or at least I haven't seen it done before like this.
Seems promising so far. Keeping my eye on it... :derpytongue2:


P.S.
It might be worth mentioning to your friend Rarity that Prince Blueblood has asked me to inform her that he is not going to be attending this year's gala and she should really consider another stallion.

:raritystarry:

:moustache:
Dear Princess Celestia,
As Twilight's number one assistant, I think you know that I'm responsible for writing her letters. Because of that I get to write neat comments whenever I want, because she never checks the letter (silly unicorn). And here's my note, about something I didn't understand:
You sent SEVEN tickets for all seven of us, but only SIX tickets for the date? That means you think somepony's not bringing a date. And I think, fromv your letter, you believe that I will be the one not to bring a date. I'm offended, here's a drawing of my offended face :flutterrage:
...
Okay, maybe not so offended. But still, I CAN get a date if I want to!

I'm a little torn about this. 1. This looks like it could be interesting, but 2. I hate soarindash with the heat of a thousand suns.
I'll at Lear read to determine what the deal is and give my verdict afterward.

Well I wanna read more then the beggining of the seccond chapter, but something called school is comming :applejackunsure: I'll read latter and decide whether to follow or not.
P.S. nice idea though!

So far so good, still dreading though.
We'll have to see.

please have fluttermac it's my fav ship that and soarindash or any other girlXguy ships:heart:. you just don't see very many:fluttershysad:

Straight shipping? In an MLP fic? I should look outside to make sure reality isn't collapsing around me.
My sarcasm aside, I'm liking what I'm seeing. I'm very particular with the shipping pairs that I like, but so far, so good. Can't wait to see what shenanigans happen next.
Also, I too, am rooting for Spike

Me datesta.
I cant wait for the next chapter

I'm excited to find out who Twilight will take.:twilightblush:

Is it weird that I´m more interested in the cold- opener story about Fluttershy learning not to be so sensible? :trixieshiftright:

Oh yeah, there´s also some shipping in here, right? :pinkiehappy:

Oooh, haven't read yet, but Pokey Pierce is adorable! I really like his mane! Is that what you called him? I shall be baqq~! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting, I think this is going to turn out to be a pretty good story, I'll like it even more if you add in Fluttermac :yay:

Doctor/Twilight!!!! DocTwi!! there both brilliant!

Don't find straight shipping that often. :P

This looks interesting, I'll track it to see how it goes. :pinkiehappy:

543492 Thank you.

I really only will every do Straight Shipping. I like it more, you know?

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Due to popular demand, I'm starting to consider it, but no, it wasn't in the original plan.

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Plenty of it.

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Then you have come to the right place, my friend! I only post girlxguy! :pinkiehappy:

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That was a personal favorite line of mine.

543502 Oh I understand completely. I feel the same way. :twilightsmile:

This has potential, please write more soon :pinkiehappy:

I'm excited to see where you go with this. One small suggestion; you don't really have to go to those extremes with A.J.'s accent. We all know what she sounds like, so you don't have to go to extremes for us to get it.

Ya'll should probably go tell the others.” Nodding in agreement, Twilight slowly turned to leave the scene. Ya'll is plural. It is a shortening of you all, so either make it "You had best go tell the others" or mention Spike.

Pinkie is a true bro. She's throwing a party just so her friends get a chance to casually pick a stallion up. Brohoof Pinkie!

...You were inspired to do this by the pictures at the wedding, weren't you?:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

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Nah. Was something I had planned since like episode 3 of season 2

Poor Spike doesn't know what's gonna happen to him... :fluttercry:

I shall be tracking this! :pinkiehappy:

Not bad. :eeyup:

This is entertaining, I shall look forward to reading more and being entertained further. :moustache:

Lets get this party started! :pinkiehappy:
And it's kind of strange. I never really imagined Dash as the type to not know how to flirt, etc, but it actually really suits her. All that bravado of her personality just covers her insecurity.

So looking forward to next chapter

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Damnit, man/girl, I can't stop laughing now :eeyup: :pinkiehappy:

On an unrelated note... there's gonna be a PokeyPie pairing here. I'm not against it, in fact I pretty much love all pairings (except M/M. Shudder. Sorry) but I think I'm beginning to understand what BlackM (awesome author right here) was going on and on about....

Hm... pretty good up to now, although I don't get that last line: "However, with so many ponies being in one room, the two were clearly overwhelmed and just stuck to each other, getting lost in their own minor conversation, ignoring the rest of the room."

I mean, it seems to mean Pinkie and Pokey, but I don't understand how Pinkie would be overwhelmed.

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To be honest, I wanted to end it there but I wasn't sure how to. I read it aloud to others and this seemed to be the option of how to end the chapter they liked best. I agree that it sounds like it's out of character for Pinkie, but when I think about it, Pinkie did mention that it was the most ponies she'd invited over at any given time. Maybe there were so many ponies around that she didn't know where to start.

i like a good pokey and pinkie together ;3

PokeyPie? Potential FlutterMac? YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!

Twilight dont feel insecure ill love you....... :fluttershysad: but anyway this is really good

It's all good so far, but I really want to know what's going on with Rarity. And who will AJ get as a date. Good luck there buddy :pinkiehappy:

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Good things come to those who wait, as they say. Don't worry, I'll wait. :pinkiesmile:

Sounds interesting, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

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