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When Twilight adopts a troubled unicorn, Moonless Night, after seeing herself in him, she believes that she may be filling the role that Celestia played in her life. What she finds though is that no matter how far you go in life, there will always be new lessons to learn- and new friends to make.
Moonless Night just wants to prove to everypony that he isn't evil in spite of the uncanny tendency of almost everyone to be afraid of him. When he comes to Ponyville though, he finds answers to his dilemma that he didn't expect through his new friends. Patchwork, daugter of Rainbowdash and the fastest (and most uncertain) flyer in the little flyers circuit, Persnickety Pants II, son of Rarity and aspiring adventurer, Rhubarb "Ruby" Pie, daughter of Pinkie Pie, delightful eccentric and connoisseur of edibles, Newton, son of Applejack and definitely not boring thank you very much, and Honeycrip, daughter of Fluttershy who just wants to fly... now if only she had wings . With this hodgepodge of loyal ponies beside him, perhaps he might have a destiny of goodness in store for him afterall.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Interesting premise. :) I liked the choice of words.

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Thank you for you potassium rich, low in cholesterol, and good source of vitamin B6 response. I do enjoy a good banana.

I liked this- you set up Moonless Night well as a main character, nail Twilight and Spike's interaction down nice and quickly and even move the plot forward a bit. My only complaint would be the lack of characters- in such a deep universe as MLP a chapter with only three real characters in feels a bit too narrow in focus.

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Thank you so much! That really means a lot. Not to worry, there are more characters to come. Thanks again :)

I want a grape soda now. Some minor grammar mistakes aside, this is a pretty good start. Looking forward to reading more.

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