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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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Good start! I'm into it!

Spidey's

Okay! A Marvel story, I'm into thi-

Harem Adventure

Oh it's one of those stories isn't it? Alright, I'm gonna go and read something else because unfortunately this is not my cup of tea.

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Great start Israel! Looking forward to the next one! :raritywink:

"You know, I'm something of a scientist myself."

Fave line from the movie.

Okay, I just wanna say that Spider Man movie from 2002 was my favourite. I’m glad that you made a story based of that. Keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

The Green Goblin is born...sweet!

both spider man & green goblin are born. things are gonna be crazy in canterlot.

This is my now number one story on this site. Keep up the good work!!!

So far, not a good start. It's a scene for scene rip-off of the 2002 movie just with the names changed. As great as that movie is, this is just lazy writing.

I'll keep reading for now, but I'm pretty disappointed in this first chapter.

Much the same as the first chapter, this one is pure plagiarism. I'll give one more chapter a chance. Hopefully it'll be something original.

9958168
thanks, but who are the jerks that downvoted you?

9958168
If you think this story is anywhere near the best on the site, allow me to offer you some alternatives, which, due to you joining this year (at least thats what your profile says) you may not know about:
The Steadfast Sky
Exchange
The Hard Reset series
Discordant and its sequels
Gladiator
Your Human and You
Vinyl and Octavia:University Days
Ten Trips to Equestria and its sequels
The "Son of Eternity" series,
She's gonna kill me and its sequel
In Search of the Sun
Diary of A Madman (kind of a slog, but definitely worth it)
Static World (probably never gonna get finished but its absolutely GOD TIER)

Dont get me wrong, i mean no insult to the author of this story, but simply put, calling what seems like a simple nameswap story that is just the same as that spiderman film your favourite means that you either havent read much else on this site, or maybe you just really like spiderman or something i dunno. Either way, my suggestions are all really good fics, and I suggest you check at least some of them out.

Alright, you got me hooked.

9962427
I'm not a fan of Harem's if I'm honest.

Comment posted by MysticalMine deleted Dec 25th, 2019

Me coming back to give this story a chance.

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Do you still take requests?

10004629
only if it's for a special occasion

I hope this will keep going. I like to see how it goes.

9970575
It’s okay not everyone into harems

Ooooo. Smexy WallFlower and a new baddy. I like this already

Good, things are getting better, and the encounter was very sweet, wallflower has very low steem, Anon should realize that and at least offer her his friendship and support, sex or not.

Excited for the next chapter. And introducing Doc Ock already huh?

10025492
good point. Might as well throw that in there.

The last two chapters has a mixed review from the readers but this chapter is good, minor changes from the story of the original movie but I can say this will make the story get better for the next coming chapter.

If I gonna get a thumbs down for saying this, that's only because of my review to the story, so go easy on me for this cause that's what I think about this chapter

Good work to you and brony on

Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work!

man. who's this now??

Definitely an improvement over the last couple chapters. Still a little too close to the source in the first half, but at least you deviated in the last half.

P.S. You'd think Wallflower would be more popular if she had double Ds.

Great story dude, a good trip down memory lane.

Glad you all like it the chapter

Michaelangelo

Cowabunga...

Should've said this earlier, I'm hooked on this somehow. I like it!

Spider-Ass, Spider-Ass, does whatever a spider can.

Sight, welp, another very good clop fic I was waiting to read goes Mia ¬¬ lots of good ones ever finished. T. T.

Small question, but will the MC have a go with the Dazzlings as well?

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Most definitely and they're gonna give him one hell of a good time

10124644
Well that goes without saying

I am loving this so far and can't wait to see where this goes.

This was a wild chapter for both of them .

This was a epic and sweet chapter I wonder what's what's going to happen next (no rush).

Pls keep it updated I love the story

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