Ooooo. Smexy WallFlower and a new baddy. I like this already

Good, things are getting better, and the encounter was very sweet, wallflower has very low steem, Anon should realize that and at least offer her his friendship and support, sex or not.

Excited for the next chapter. And introducing Doc Ock already huh?

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good point. Might as well throw that in there.

The last two chapters has a mixed review from the readers but this chapter is good, minor changes from the story of the original movie but I can say this will make the story get better for the next coming chapter.

If I gonna get a thumbs down for saying this, that's only because of my review to the story, so go easy on me for this cause that's what I think about this chapter

Good work to you and brony on

Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work!

great chapter keep it up

man. who's this now??

Definitely an improvement over the last couple chapters. Still a little too close to the source in the first half, but at least you deviated in the last half.

P.S. You'd think Wallflower would be more popular if she had double Ds.

Great story dude, a good trip down memory lane.

Glad you all like it the chapter

Michaelangelo

Cowabunga...

Should've said this earlier, I'm hooked on this somehow. I like it!

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It's a good one

Sight, welp, another very good clop fic I was waiting to read goes Mia ¬¬ lots of good ones ever finished. T. T.

Small question, but will the MC have a go with the Dazzlings as well?

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Most definitely and they're gonna give him one hell of a good time

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Well that goes without saying

This was a epic and sweet chapter I wonder what's what's going to happen next (no rush).

Pls keep it updated I love the story

That scene in the janitor's closet, that wasn't in the movie, that's for sure.

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Nope, that's all me