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Peace Poet

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Pete100
Pete100 #4 · Apr 16th, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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"Well, I learned karate, ninjitsu, kung fu, animal kung fu, tai chi, muay thai, Shaolin martial arts, and much more. Pop and Mama taught me, and then their masters taught me at the Shaolin Temple, Thailand, and Japan", as he finished, Celestia and Luna were really impressed and amazed at how much martial arts the young man has learned.

God damn. Also, I’d like to point out that ninjutsu is not a martial art.

"Unfortunately, not many humans come to where the school is, because it's in a different dimension from this one. I'm sorry.", she said sadly, as she looked down at the floor. But Hank had the look of determination, as he said, as he looked at Celestia...

What dimension are they in now?

"The schools here on Earth states that if you fight in school, you're either suspended or expelled from school. It's not the case at our school. While you're on school grounds, you can fight whenever anyone can challenge you, or you can challenge them. You'll get a grade in skill, power, and money from teachers, students, and even us, depending on how much you want to bet.", Luna finished her explanation, as Hank looked at Peace, then looked at the women, as he said...

Lucky.

"Peace, this is our true forms back in Equestria. Me and Luna are ponies, and we are both princesses of Equestria.", she said, as she and Luna spread out their wings, as Peace and Hank have more amazement on their faces. Then the men noticed that the ladies have horns on their foreheads. Luna spoke, as she cleared her throat.

Then, why is there a principle celestia and vice-principal luna tag?

"Bo staff, ninja and samurai swords, clubs, nunchucks, daggers, baton, sickles, spears, and that's pretty much it. I guess they're a little extreme, huh?", Peace said with a little hint of dissapointment in his voice, as Celestia said...

Wow.

"Yes, there are vehicles near similar to the ones here. So yes, you can bring them with you to Equestria. But our fuel is far much different than the Earth's, and more efficient, but I don't think it will harm the performance of your vehicles.", Luna said, as Peace exhaled a sigh of relief, as he said...

What’s the fuel?

"Of course, Peace. The dorm house does have a garage, and there's a parking garage next to the hospital. But we do have storage units there, too, if you want to use them.", said Celestia, looking at Peace with a worried look on his face, as she thought, "The vehicles must be important to him, and he reminds me of some pony I know.", she giggled a little on a comparison of the pony she's thinking of to Peace. She and Luna were zipping up their bags, and are about to leave.

Who?

"Yes, we felt his power, and we're sorry for speaking out of turn. Like you, we're also worried about Peace. And this is the first time in twelve years we've seen him.", she said sincerely, as Celestia looks at Hank also with an apologetic look.

Wait, so they already knew him?

One day before school started, Peace got his new custom sword that has a reverse blade on it, and it's made of tungsten steel.

Reverse blade?

Ready as I'll ever be. Let's go.", the boy said, as Celestia held out her hand, and with a bright light, a portal appeared right in front of them. Peace gave Hank a thumb up, as Hank did the same, as a "see you later" gesture, as Peace and his guides walked in the portal, and the portal disappeared in a second.

Wait, but how will he get back?

"We'll start by taking you on tour of this dorm house. That way, you'll remember where to go, or who to go to for help.", said Luna, as they exited Peace's room, and showed him around the house. The house has eleven bedrooms with their own bathroom, three dens, two kitchens, a swimming pool, and of course, a living room. The dorm house is also made of crystal, but with a touch of stones and marble. What Peace couldn't believe that on the left side of the dorm house is a car garage, and it was just as big as the dorm house. The only vehicles that he sees is his own, three of them.

Does he have roommates?

"That's wonderful! I hope you'll find more experiences like this one. Now, let's go to the school.", the younger princess said, as they boarded the train, as the train took off slowly and headed to Canterlot to Equestria Universal High School. There weren't many passengers on the train, as Peace sat beside Luna in one seat, and Celestia by herself in the other seat, which made Celestia pout with a hint of jealousy. She shook it off, and spoke to Peace about something.

Don’t they have Chariots?

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom
OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #5 · Apr 17th, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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10773051

Actually, it IS a Martial Art! It said so in Google, Wiki and everything. I mean, Ninjas do have their own type of Fighting Skills, so it is technically a Martial Art.

Pete100
Pete100 #6 · Apr 17th, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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The wiki? Have you tried maybe asking martial artists or professionals?

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom
OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #7 · Apr 17th, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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Okay, I look around. And found a Website ( https://www.wayofninja.com ) that has a long article. But, the short summary is this:


Ninjutsu and martial arts are two distinct disciplines for historical ninja. They are not the same thing; ninjutsu is not a martial art. This is backed not only by historical sources but also modern practitioners (of ninpo and Banke Shinobinoden ryuha).

Pete100
Pete100 #8 · Apr 17th, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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10774050
Good. Thought I was going crazy.

Peace Poet
Peace Poet #11 · Apr 17th, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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10773051
OK, good to know that ninjitsu isn't a martial art. Thanks.

Pete100
Pete100 #13 · May 6th, 2021 · · · The Tour of the School, Reunion, Meeting New Friends, Opening Ceremony, and a Challenge ·
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"Forgive you?! Well, pardon moi for not wanting anymore cupcakes and apple fritters in my mane and tail again. I told you a hundred times, Blueblood, I will NEVER forget how you've treated me, nor will I forgive you! Now, if you will excuse me, I have to go to my family who are waiting for me. Good day to you, sir!", she said with a "harumph" with her head held high, as Blueblood got angry, and grabbed the mare unicorn named Rarity by force, as she was trying to get him off of her.

Something tells me she’s forgiven worse.

"My stars! He might be as fast as Rainbow, maybe quicker. This is no ordinary human being I'm seeing, but he is nice handsome, and caring. And also-- Oh dear! I'm late!", her thought ended, as she looked at her phone, and looked at Peace, and said...

Also what?

"No prob, Rarity. It was nice meetin' you, too. And maybe we'll see each other here sometime. I hope you'll have a good day.", Peace said, with a sincere smile, as Rarity smiled back and waved goodbye, as she ran off to find her family. Peace kept on smiling, and thought, "She's a pretty girl; beautiful in fact. Strong, courageous, won't take crap from anyone. Although, she's outta my league, but at least I gain a new friend.", Peace thought, as he walked back to his friends, as Golden and Glori were giving him the "who was she" look, as Hype just stood there, as Peace explained.

What kind of look is that?

"Yup, but Blueblood is our "he's our brother in law's son, but we want to put him in his place so bad" nephew. We love our brother in law, but his son, our nephew, still a question mark on the love part.", Celestia said, as she sees the rest of Peace's friends.

We all have that one family member.

"Hyper Active, a known DJ and best friend of Peace Poet for five years. Glorious Miracle, also a best friend of Peace, who was born in Mexico, but came to Manhattan as an exchange student to learn more about American culture, and to teach Americans about Mexican culture. And Golden Heart, another best friend of Peace, who is a girlfriend of Hyper Active, and a singer. I say, you have great friends, Peace.", Celestia said honestly, as Peace nodded in agreement, and said...

Is she a stalker or something?

"Si, I'm the groups manager, and they perform very well, Senora Luna. Hype can also rap as well.", she said, as Hyper nodded in agreement, and said...

Ok, so hype is a spitter.

"I'm sure you four will think of a name one day. And I hope that you're group will be successful, as well. This school does have music classes, four of them, and about five poetry classes. And Peace, I know one teacher is going to like you when you go to her class.", Luna said, as Peace and his friends are happy to hear about this. Celestia looked at her watch, and said...

Oh god. Who is it?

"If you defeat the challenger, you will earn fifty thousand bits and a week off from school with a trip of your choice of your destination. It doesn't matter if the challenger is a female or a child, you have to respect and honor their pride, mettle, and strength of what they do against you.", Luna finishes her speech, as Celestia speaks again...

Boy, if I wasn’t a regular human I would probably say f*ck my old school and sign up immediately.

"Now, there are clubs that you can join, if you want to join, depending on what you like in a club; like poetry, sports, martial arts, cars, science, history, any club that you like, you can join, but it's entirely up to the club president to decide. School starts tomorrow, and I know all of you want to show us what you got. So as of right now, the ceremony is over, and your journey here in Equestria Universal High School will begin tomorrow morning. For today, you talk to your friends that you know, and friends that you made here. Enjoy your rest of the day, everyone, and be true to all!", as Celestia's speech ended, as did the ceremony, the crowd applauded the princesses, now principal and vice principal. Everyone gotten up from their seats, and some stayed to have conversations. As for Peace and his friends, they were quiet, as they got up ready to leave, as Twilight called them.

Those are a lot of clubs.

"I'm cool, just makin' sure that a certain someone keeps his paws off of another true mans girl, is all. I was challenged by the Diamond Dogs tomorrow, thanks to your "lovable" nephew, I accepted it, and I'm ready for it.", Peace said, as both aunts looked at Blueblood, as he had a innocent smile on his face, as Celestia had a flat look on her face, and said...

Is that how it worked?

"PRINCIPAL Celestia, Blueblood! In Equestria Universal High School, you will address me as Principal Celestia and Luna as Vice Principal Luna. Your father, Beaureguard, is already on edge on what you do here in Canterlot, so don't disappoint him anymore as it is! And one more thing, if you lay a finger on Rarity, or her friends, I will PERSONALLY see to it that you will be severely punished, understand?!", Celestia said, and she was really pissed at how much of a headache Blueblood is, as was Luna, which she wants to punish him now, but couldn't, cuz she would go to Tartarus, even if she is a princess. Blueblood scoffs, as he said...

What if he challenged them then? Would he still get in trouble?

"Believe me, I hope so, too. But after years and years of bein' bullied by those douchebags, I've waited a long time ta do this. Anyway, Twilight, can I take a rain check on hangin' with y'all? I'm gonna go back to the dorm house and set my room up.", Peace asked nicely, as Twilight and the others nodded in understanding, she said...

I thought they were already gonna practice.

"Yes, it would exhaust us, but thanks to Starlight and her friend Sunburst, they made special energy drinks that'll not just refresh you from exhaustion, but will restore your magic energy, strength, and heals wounds, severe or minor.", she said, as Peace was amazed on that kind of energy drink. Then Pinkie spoke...

Wow.

"By the way, be sure to talk to the landlord that you're in your room, that way you let her know you're in.", she said, as Peace and his friends waved at Celestia, Luna, and the rest of the girls goodbye, as they entered his room, and the door shut itself. Pinkie opened it, and on the other side was nothing but brooms, mops, and cleaning materials.

Why? Does she like to sneak in or something?

"Sorry, amigo, but you're like a hermano mayor to me and Goldie. We just don't wanna see you get hurt again.", Glorious said with worry in her voice.

Then, what was with the kiss on the cheek?

"...You're not a tool, just try ta be cool Like you're playin' in a pool, not like them other fools That'd be jealous of you just bein' you Be yourself with your special glow, and be true..."

Damn, this man spitting.

Pete100
Pete100 #14 · Jun 28th, 2021 · · · The First Day Of School, New Friends and Enemies, Rhymes, and Fighting Dogs ·
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"Hmmm, this milk taste good, like it has a hint of sugar in it. Whatever store has it, I'll get it, cuz this is good milk, better than Earth's.", and when he said that, not just Applejack and Fluttershy were blushing a storm, but so were Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity, Starlight, Rainbow, and Sunset when he mentioned milk. Twilight spoke, and said, which is trying to change the subject...

Doesn’t the milk just come from cows?

"Ladies first.", as they each opened their own garage door, and they stood next to their vehicles, and Peace was impressed of what vehicles they have. First was Applejack, as she and Apple Bloom were standing next to her candy apple red Dodge Ram 3500 dually Cummins with two six inch smoke stack in the bed, Rarity and Sweetie Belle were next to her purple Mercedes-Benz G36 AMG SUV, Fluttershy was standing next to her aqua green Honda Civic Type-R, Rainbow and Scootaloo were stand next to a blue C6 Corvette ZO6, Pinkie Pie was standing next to her pink Cadillac CTS-V sport wagon, Sunset is next to her red Fox Body Ford Mustang GT, Starlight has her white Scion TC, and Twilight and Spike were next to her navy blue Range Rover Sport SUV. Peace looked at the cars, and liked all of them.

I’ll admit, those aren’t bad.

"Which car are ya gonna take? While you were at the school yesterday, some of the ponies filled up your tanks yesterday, started all your cars, and they're all runnin' great. And they drained the Earth fuel, of course.", after hearing that, Peace was glad to know that his cars are running fine, and gave Peachbottom the answer.

Is draining the earth fuel a good thing?

"Let's see... I have music class first, poetry class second, gym class third, and auto mechanics and body fourth.", he said, as he showed Hyper Active, Glori, and Golden Heart his list, as both his old and new friends said...

Those are classes?

"Discord, I understand you want the students to like you, and want to make a little chaos, but we told you about your customize hand buzzer. Don't bring it to the school, unless it's a normal hand buzzer. Now give it to me, before Luna gives you something to buzz about in the night.", she said, as Luna showed an evil grin, and Discord gulped in fear, and quickly gave the hand buzzer to Celestia. As he shook hands with Peace and Glori.

He’s scared of luna?

"Year, after year, after year, you Dogs have bullied, abused, traumatized, and just brought more pain to people who were weaker than you. You've showed no remorse or anything, y'all just love givin' people, or ponies, pain, and make them suffer. And it's true that you Dogs have great strength, I get that. But the only problem is...your strength is like a shit stain, and I'm lookin' at stains that needs ta be cleaned right now! But now that I felt your power...", as Peace got in a different fighting stance, more stealthy than the last one, as a blue aura surrounded his body. Gasp were coming from Twilight, the girls, the princesses, and even Blueblood, as they felt Peace's power.

Didn’t know a fighting stance could be stealthy.

"You hit me, you asswipe!", Fido barked back, as Rover held them back from each other, and calm them down.

That sounds familiar.

"How dare you... HOW FUCKIN' DARE YOU MAKE A FOOL OUTTA US!!!!!!", Rover raged, as he and his two canine fighters charged at Peace. But then, Peace charged at them, but he was much faster, as he held up two fingers, hitting each of the Diamond Dogs in the back of the neck. After Peace did that, they all felt to the ground face first, but the Dogs were still conscious. But none of them can move from the neck down.

What happened to the third one?

"Honestly, I was usin' about two to three percent of my power. The Diamond Dogs was at full power while fightin' me.", Peace said sheepishly, as he rubbed behind his head. Twilight got in his face with a disbelief look on her face.

Then how much did he use to block the blast last chapter?

"Great! Then I'll let Discord work on the paperwork while we're at the party. That'll be his punishment for trying to get you with a hand buzzer.", Luna said, as she's still upset with Discord for trying to shock Peace.

"Well, that's our husband for you.", Celesita simply said, as Peace looked at them with a shocked look on his face.

Husband?

Pete100
Pete100 #15 · Jul 23rd, 2021 · · · Getting To Know The Elements Of Harmony And The Element Bearers ·
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"But the gems look great for us when we got them, and that's all that counts." Starlight said nervously, trying to lighten the mood, as Sunset showed a sad smile on her face. Peace was going to ask what's wrong, but he left it alone, since it's a party.

Is she still upset about not being a princess?

"Come on, Spike! You saved the Crystal Empire twice, gave Ember the Bloodstone Scepter so she can be Dragon Lord, saved Applejack from a timber wolf, you've did many things great! You're a part of the team, and you've helped me and Sunset out.", Starlight said, giving the dragon a sincere smile.

How did he help them out?

"Sunset, your gem would be Element of Forgiveness. I know what ya did a long time ago was bad, but you made up for those mistakes. Some forgave ya, some didn't, but the girls and Spike forgave you for those mistake you made, even Principal Celestia forgave ya. I'm bettin' that it took a very long time to wait for forgiveness, but it'd be worth the wait when ya have a great amount of patience. Now you encourage ponies and creatures to forgive one another, and believe me, it's very hard ta forgive some that wronged ya, but sometime you have to put your pride in the back, and just let it flow.", Peace said, as Sunset was smiling with a blush at his words.

Technically, forgiveness doesn’t always have anything to do with pride.

There was one thing that Peace, Hype, and Spike noticed that made them blush and look away, Celestia, Luna, Twilight and the Element Bearers, Sunset and Starlight, are show a great amount of cleavage. The CMC had jealous pouts on their faces, but Goldie gave Hype a death glare, as he saw that, and just gulped in fear.

How did they not notice before?

The CMC were getting more jealous, but when they saw their sisters, their jealousy went away in an instant. Rarity's eyes went from sapphire blue to a green, Rainbow had that icy glare, and Applejack was looking "normal", and Apple Bloom knows that look well, meaning that her older sister was really pissed on the inside. Luna had an angry pout, and grabbed Peace, and said...

Green?

"They were nothin' but bark and no bite. Any dog would fight them...then again, I don't think any dog should.", he said, as they all laughed. But then Peace had a question for Celestia.

Why?

"What happens to the Diamond Dogs after I beat them?", he asked, as Celestia and Luna gave him serious looks on their faces.

"They are to be expelled from Equestria Universal High School, and banished from Equestria. After what they did to you and every other innocent child on Earth, it's best that they leave Equestria.", Celestia said coldly, as Luna spoke.

I thought they only get expelled if they kill someone in a fight.

Anyway, Equestria is truly a lovely place A place that's vacant for any race Accepted or not, just keep on fightin' barriers Fight hard like a Navy super carrier

Bars!

We all need friendship, love, and peace Fightin' hard to put unreasonable hate to a cease I may be from the hood But I know what I see is good."

He is?

All applauded Peace's freestyle, as everyone felt better and relaxed. Spike and the CMC were heading out going to their homes. Spike stopped and asked Peace a question

Don’t they all live together?

"Hey Peace, do ya think you can train me just the basics of martial arts? I wanna learn to defend myself, beside breathing out my fire.", Pike asked, as Peace gave him a caring smile, and answered...

Why not get some books?

"You got it, bro! This way I can combine Shining Armor's style with the style you're teaching me.", Spike said, as he ran off to the castle waving goodbye to Peace. Then Sweetie Belle got up front of Peace, and said...

What style does shining know?

"We train together in case of an emergency in Equestria, so the girls and I were wondering if you...if you would like to train with us? Since you live with us in the dorm, I thought I'd ask you that question. Whether it's a yes or no, we will respect your decision.", Twilight asked, as she, Rarity, Applejack, and the rest of her friends bowed in respect, as Peace thought for a moment.

Train how?

"There's a skill that can help you fight without hurtin' anyone, and this skill has worked wonders for me. I'll gladly help you train with this skill, so you can still help your friends. And since you love all types of animals, I have skills for that, too.", Peace said with a soft and calm voice, that Fluttershy calmed down with a smile of her own.

What?

"This'll be cool ta watch, if ya don't mind, bro. Me and the girls need ta work out ourselves, too.", Hype said, as Glori and Goldie both agreed with him.

"Sure, I'd like ta see how y'all are progressin' in your trainin'.", Peace said, and agreed with Hype as well. But then...

They’re trained too?

"I'm the one that should be thankin' y'all for keepin' my powers a secret, and not tellin' anyone who I really am. Truth is, I felt helpless for not beat those Dogs asses sooner, as they bullied y'all badly cuz of me.", Peace said somberly, as Goldie kissed his cheek, and said...

How is she gonna get upset at hype for looking at cleavage but do that?

"Great, now I have a crush on Peace!"

He’s too young, luna.

Ebonis
Ebonis #16 · Jul 26th, 2021 · · · The First Day Of School, New Friends and Enemies, Rhymes, and Fighting Dogs ·
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"Hmmm, this milk taste good, like it has a hint of sugar in it. Whatever store has it, I'll get it, cuz this is good milk, better than Earth's.", and when he said that, not just Applejack and Fluttershy were blushing a storm, but so were Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity, Starlight, Rainbow, and Sunset when he mentioned milk. Twilight spoke, and said, which is trying to change the subject...

Doesn’t the milk just come from cows?

What if the milk was Mare's milk? it might explain their reactions if it was from one of them.

Prince Jules Moonshade
Prince Jules Moonshade #20 · Sep 23rd, 2021 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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This is such an overload of information I’ve been asking the whole time “The hell is even going on here?!” Seems interesting an I feel you’ve taken some inspiration from that one anime where a none magical boy is in a school full of magicals thus the challenge thing cause I remember there were fights that ya were rewarded for winning..if I ain’t mistaken. Anyways let’s see what the hell is even going on here.

Prince Jules Moonshade
Prince Jules Moonshade #21 · Sep 24th, 2021 · · · Getting To Know The Elements Of Harmony And The Element Bearers ·
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"Great, now I have a crush on Peace!"

Wait what? Last chapter didn’t ya have Luna herself say that discord is her an her sister’s husband?

SUPERETHAN2
SUPERETHAN2 #22 · Mar 9th, 2022 · · 1 · Apples Dinner and a Heartbreaking Story ·
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"You wanted to see how I had my Pinkie Sense in your lab.", Pinkie said in a deadpanned voice.

Which you were ok with at the time. You can't exactly complain now in the future when you could have objected then.

Kamen Rider ohma ZI-0
Kamen Rider ohma ZI-0 #23 · Jun 3rd, 2022 · · · Apples Dinner and a Heartbreaking Story ·
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I have a bad feeling about this and also I have a theory I believe peace poet have the legendary super Saiyan if not he's about to go super Saiyan let's pray he won't hit hurt anyone opponent you

Powerfull3000
Powerfull3000 #24 · Sep 30th, 2022 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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¿¿¿Eh???
Encuentro incongruencias en todo este capitulo, uno tras otro.
Simplemente No.

Mr Lore miser
Mr Lore miser #25 · Jan 5th, 2023 · · · Getting Ready For The New School ·
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Agreed this chapter is way too much of an info dump heck it might even chase some readers away

Peace Poet
Peace Poet #27 · May 6th, 2023 · · · The Night Before Going to the Crystal Empire ·
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11576470
Working on the next chapter, but it'll be awhile. Glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you!

SunFlare Knight
SunFlare Knight #28 · May 6th, 2023 · · · The Night Before Going to the Crystal Empire ·
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You’re welcome, keep up the great work, and take your time.

Prince Jules Moonshade
Prince Jules Moonshade #29 · Dec 25th, 2023 · · · The Crystal Empire, Day 2: A Generous Day Out with a Rare Mare ·
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Curious what’s up with this Japony mare, ex maybe?

Anyways great couple chapters and eager to see more!

ImClinicallyDepressed
ImClinicallyDepressed #30 · 1 week ago · · · The Crystal Empire, Finale: The Night of Slumber and Departure ·
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Guys guysguys.

I wonder where the author got the mc's name from.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Maybe from a random name generator?

Anyways, this story's interesting to say the least. I got caught off guard by the start but hey! The more original the more fun it is. Or the more liberties it makes, which makes more fun!

:twilightsmile:

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