Once-Queen Chrysalis has had her schemes blow up in her face yet again. Naively, she thought, this time would be different. Take their power for her own, and it would be a simple matter to enact her revenge. She did not expect to end her scheme crippled, starving, and in the hooves of the pests that ruined her life.
Twilight and her friends have had a rough day. An argument during their trip through the woods nearly had them at each others throats, but they pulled through together and laughed about it in the end. They didn't expect to end their day with them taking one of the greatest threats to Equestria into custody. And Twilight certainly didn't expect herself to be extending her hoof to another poor, lost soul, trying to help them find their way.
(Begins at the very end of 'The Mean 6', diverges from canon)
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Big thanks to flipwix for his help with editing and beta reading!
Cover art background credit Boneswolbach.
Cover art Twilight vector credit AndoAnimalia
Cover art Chrysalis vector credit CloudyGlow
This is very impressive for a first fic. Very interesting too, I like where it’s going
Liked, faved and following.
Very enjoyable!
I hope to see more
This is really good for a first fic!
I hope to see updates in the near future.
This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
You have piqued my interest. Let's see where this goes!
After weeks of trying chryssi manages to plant her eggs. Making a hive out of the friendship castle and making twilight her new concubine. Having will over the whole hive just under chryssi herself. Soon after, one by one all the mane 6 gets brought into the hive.
I'm always up for Chrysalis stuff.
It's also a very nice read for now
Should really amend that title to mention that Chrysalis got hurt Pinkie.
I like this, continue if you want!
Up-voted and tossed on my tracking shelf. Nice start.
Oh yeah, it's all coming together
still not sure if i like this story or not yet so ill keep reading for now
Ah, the ugly bug and his hopes for the good of the traitors.
Don’t really expect to see Chrysalis evade the obligatory “reformation”, but there’s always some hope I guess. I mean, even canon ending was much better than I expected.
Amendment complete. Aces.
so uh
next update when
I like where this is going! Please, please keep up the good work!!!
Ok, this one's interesting so far. Hope you decide to continue it.
Interesting, I'm guessing the warring sensations Chrysalis felt were the Elements debating between turning her to stone or some other effect (possibly mental) and it compromised with partially turning her to crystal.
This looks great so far.
Here's hoping they end up inviting a certain pink fluffy pony to help reform Chrysalis.
Why doesn't this story continue?
please make more
Surprisingly, the Tree of Harmony has mastered the technique of "meanly hitting in the back when the enemy does not expect it" quite well.