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Cyndaquil


"From the moment I picked your book up until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Someday I intend reading it." Groucho Marx

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Changelings feed on love. Ponies have a Princess of Love. Even though she failled at the Canterlot wedding, evil plans are worth trying again.

Chrysalis wants to steal Cadance's identity again.

Cadance insists that she do a better job of it. This time, she will not stand for sub par acting.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

Why is the first thing I think of ether have Chrysalis watch flurry or do court when Cadence is done the teaching part

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Well, if no pony wants the job, then I guess a princess could just draft a babysitter.

more alarming part, cadence captured chrysi without exerting effort outside of making the necklace... yet shining is losing sleep following smoke

What Chrysalis did not know, is that Cadance could not use the subjugation necklace without feeling pain herself.

I found it kinda weird that Cadance was totally okay with choking Chrysalis (I know she is an enemy, but still) just like that, but I guess this makes it a little bit fairer.

Well looks like chrysalis is holding on to a few cards.

Wonder what she's up to?

Nice read. Interested in where this is going.

All it said was: We’ll wait for you.

This was really nice on Ocellus's part, considering that Chrylisa just tried to strangle her.

It contained two types of books: harlequin romance novels,

Needs ponification.

So why does Cadence have a changeling eye?

Here's a scary thought: this is an independent changling that has out-Cryssied Cryssie.

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That is scary.

The eye is how she sees whatever Chrysalis is doing.

I understand that it is how she sees what Chrysalis is doing. How does she have it? What is it? It's not a normal pony eye.

Cadance made a mocking smirk. “Okay, so step outside, and see if any pony thinks you’re me.”
Chrysalis decided to do just that, only first she gagged Cadence, then tied her up, then stuffed her in the closet. Flurry laughed, as thought it were all a fun game.

Cadance: "Well, it is a fun game..."

“No babies have been born in the hive since you left.”
“Obviously not.”

Almost like there was no queen present...
Maybe the hive should have kept a few under-queens around in case the queen is unavailable.

“You think you can replace me!” She screeched. “You’re mine, you’ll never…”

Wasn't it you who ran away after being offered the place as a queen?

Apparently, Chrysalis’s brand of evil does fall into one of those sub categories where she could not be left alone with children.

Chrysalis didn't do anything to Flurry, did she?
At least nothing Cadance noticed yet...

“If I announced your capture, you’d be sent somewhere else. I’m not even sure where. Right now, I have need of you.” This was all the answer she recieved.

Cadance: "Ruling an empire is hard work, and if I can send someone else to do some of the work for me.."
Chrysalis: "Like entertaining your husband?"
Cadance: "Don't even think about it!"
Chrysalis: "Too late..."

This was unexpected. No pony should even know that Chrysalis was her prisoner.
“Thorax, lord of the changelings, delivered it personally.”

I almost expected Chrysalis getting in rage about "this filthy traitor" just from hearing his name.

Chrysalis eyed the jar, that was sitting on her desk. She opened it, and took a sniff, wanting to verify that it was not fake. This small jar must have been at least the years entire supply.

Normal honey (then the hive must be really struggling right now) or for some reason the royal jelly?

Woah, this story just got a lot more intricate. I love it

That was a good chapter goodluck with the next one.

this story has a rather interesting concept. I have read all available chapters and didn't notice it. Of course, I am aware that there may not be a continuation, but now I will wait for it.

“Just like me.”
“I’ve become you.”
“No, it’s still just a disguise.”

Chrysalis: "For now. But for how long?"

“Do you really think he can synthesize the royal jelly.”
“It’s not magic, its just a chemical. Give him a jar, and he’ll give us a bathtub in return.”

Are they trying to turn themselves into Changeling Queens and Kings?
I'm sure that would lead to interesting results.


Good chapter!

At first I thought those rouge Changelings just wanted to become powerful for the sake of power, but now it almost looks like they just wanted that power to eventually overthrow Chrysalis and become better rulers for the hive.

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