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    You'll never understand a pony until you walk a mile in their horseshoes. Or more appropriately, until a magical goddess forces you to switch bodies with the other in an effort to force the lesson upon you. That's right, its a body swap fiction! Starring everyone's favorite musical ponies, Vinyl and Octavia! (Partially narrated by Princess Luna)

    First Published
    15th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    15th May 2013

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    #1 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Deciding to do the AN boring stuff down here, because I'm a rebel and I live on the edge n shit!

    But no seriously, there's not a lot to be said. Although I must say I've never seen this done before, but if it has oh well.

    Shoutout to nobody in particular, because I'm a recluse on the site and have no friends/prereaders, and all my real life friends aren't this deep into the fandom, those that aren't haters that is.

    Feel free to leave your thoughts on this, and I'll more than likely respond because I love each and every one of you.

    And yes, before anyone asks, the actual body swap happens in the next part. Blame my love for a tiny bit of buildup and character development before throwing them to the fate of a crazy alicorn goddess.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I love this! It's funny and interesting. Please write more very soon. :yay:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1083390

    I'll be Your Friend:pinkiecrazy:

    This was also a very good story but I was surprised Ponies had Cuss words.

    I don't care really I just didn't expect it.:pinkiegasp:

    So Keep up the good work!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    "Isn't the point of a trout to weed out those who aren't cut out for the job?" Wow, I didn't know trouts were so musically relevant. Crafty little fishes they are :pinkiecrazy:

    Anywho, this looks interesting. Octavia going for the blood seems a bit too much, but I'm sure we'll get an explanation for it when we look deeper in the personal insecurities and all that. Thanks for dropping the link to Nightmare Night btw, never heard it before.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    well that was a nice read, waiting to see what happens next. Big Fan of this type of storys

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Heh, interesting story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next, I doubt it will be pleasant for either mare but humorous none the less.

    :rainbowwild:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sounds interesting, but I don't really tend to read incomplete stories until at least 3 chapters have been written. I'll be keeping an eye on this, though.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    All of my yes. I'll be watching this one carefully. :rainbowwild:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1088400

    You're quite welcome for the link. As far as insecurities from Octavia are concerned, it'll become clear soon enough. In later chapters. So the only way to answer that question is to keep reading :trollestia:

    MUAHAHA! I'm a crafty bastard.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1088687

    Depends what you mean by "pleasant," but as for humorous. Yes, I will try nonetheless.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1088687

    Well I suppose it's better than nothing :rainbowwild:

    Don't worry though, I've actually had this story in my mind for weeks, so several chapters are still in the wings.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Also, not to spam anyone but more to complain, this was supposed to be approved by 5 my time before I went to work. I was hoping for it to see a few more people but noooooooo, this was approved an hour ago :flutterrage:

    I was hoping this would be up during peak viewing time but oh well, not gonna stop my writing.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Okay, was that Mic the Microphone, Wooden Toaster, and LivingTombstone?  I'm not up on the music scene since I'm more a reader but I think that was who was walking in with Vinyl.  

    I likes this and the idea appeals to my odd sense of humor.  My only question is why no Lyra to make it worse?  

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1088578 I shall honor this gift. The future generations will hear the legends of the legendary Gift of Fucks to Give you have bestowed upon me :trollestia:

    >>1088745 Well, we wouldn't want all the secrets to be unveiled on the first chapter, would we? That would be no fun. Tho now I'm wondering if there will be scenes with the parents...

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1089040

    *cough*

    I can neither confirm nor deny that allegation, but I will ask you to stay out of my head.

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1089011

    To answer your question, yes that was they. And there might be more of them later on. I decided to put them in so Vinyl had a crowd to hang with like Octavia had hers.

    ...

    Well it makes sense to me!

    As for Lyra, I don't have a place for her. Yet. Who knows, maybe she'll end up sitting on a bench somewhere for like 0.5 seconds.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1089252

    No complaints here.  I think they would hang out with her if they were there.  I just wanted to make sure I knew who they were since I'm usually terrible at placing things like that.

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1089261

    Well you hit it on the nose, and I will take this time to recommend their music to you, as they are quite talented. Them along with Archie, Aviators, OmniPony, PinkiePieSwear, Alex S, Eurobeat Brony, MandoPony, and ArtAttack.

    Yeah I'm a big fan of the music community :twilightsmile:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1089195 Aww, but there are so many buttons and bright lights to play with! :pinkiecrazy:

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1089486

    ...oh good, it's not my mind then. My mind is full of pony, and I'm perfectly ok with it :pinkiecrazy:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ok, when you told me about this, I have to admit I was skeptical... but if each chapter is as well written as this one, this will be an amazing story

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1090438

    Well it's about time you showed back up! And I have to ask where you got your Colgate emote, because I wanna steal it

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Best intro to a story I have ever read. I can not wait for more and there better be more.

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #28 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #29 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Once again you make a brilliant story that combines a sense of humor with romance. Keep up the good work.

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>1094401

    You flatter me too much, really :twilightblush:

    I just write whatever crazy idea comes to me in that blissful land that I find myself in while pushing shopping carts at work

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1095771 What can I say, I like your writing style. Many of my best ideas come from the blissful land that I find myself in when I am working as well.

    #32 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yay an update! I want to apologize for the huge delay between chapters. I even cut this one down from its intended length slightly just so I can keep this thing going (but don't worry, I didn't skimp out on quality). I want to apologize again because updates will be infrequent at best, as this semester's classes have dumped a huge load of reading on me. For those of you who know about Mr. David McColough (author of Pulitzer Prize winning biographies Truman and John Adams), I am reading two biographies written by him, and the biography of Oppenheimer for one class. For those of you who don't know about those books, it means I have about 1800 pages of reading for one class, and that's not counting the papers and other readings I have to do for the other 4 classes :pinkiesick:

    But I will continue writing this in what little free time I have, because I really do enjoy this story and I'm pretty sure you want to see what happens next. God forbid that I throw this away just because of school. I need some way to stay sane after all

    But yeah, tl;dr school is fucking my free time in the ass, so no guarantees of when the next chapter will come. Though if you do follow my blog posts I will try to keep you all updated.

    <-- gratuitous ass is gratuitous.

    #33 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #35 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Freaky Friday anyone?

    #36 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1216706 Well this much is obvious, but still the question is is it un welcome?

    ...

    ...

    Nah I'm enjoying it

    #37 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1216706

    Curses! Someone found out where I got the idea from! ABANDON STORY!:twilightoops:

    ...

    Nah I'm just screwin' with ya

    #38 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1218524

    Heh heh heh, what a card! :pinkiehappy:

    Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Well, actually I can. That just means I've enjoyed what I've seen so far and expect to see something good in the future.

    #39 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1218742

    Well it'll be a bit, if you read my author comment after chapter 2 =/

    School blows mate, especially taking a couple 400 level college classes

    But I've already started the next one, so it's not like progress hasn't been made

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 5d ago · · ·
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    And so it begins. And now Octavia will realize that Vinyl is more than a party pony after seeing the terrible conditions she lives in

    #41 · Chapter 2 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Liked

    Faved

    #42 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Finally had time to finish this chapter. Hope you all like it, because it took some valuable free time to do

    Also, is it wrong that I think of the jokes first, then write the rest of the story around them? Nah, it's all good

    Now to drown myself in music

    #43 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    i absolutely love this, and cant wait to see more. :pinkiehappy:

    #44 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1323355

    this is absolutely the most hilarious fic i've read all month.

    if you're gonna keep this up, you'd better be ready to pay the medical bill for my broken ribs!

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #45 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #46 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ah, the brilliance. It will be fun to see how their relationship develops over time...:pinkiehappy:

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    (•_•)

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    #48 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh, the adventures to come.:rainbowlaugh:

    #49 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Princess, I have one that's been bugging me since this thing started. If Octy and I were to bang right here, right now...would it be gay? Or the highest form of clopping possible?"

    Princess Luna facehoofed, while Octavia took the liberty of smacking Vinyl upside the head.

    you know thats a really good question, too bad we will never see the answer to that

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    YEAH! DJ Pon-3 in the HOUSE!!:moustache:

    #51 · Chapter 2 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hooray for Luna being an interfering, overbearing bitch!

    #52 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Who else is up for seeing Luna get bitch-slapped? The fuck kind of place are they living in, Airstrip 1? "OOOO, I think I'll rip your soul out and shove it in a different body! And then I'll laugh at and prank you while intimidating and blackmailing you! Hehehehehe!"

    #53 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Luna, don't ever change.  You are perfect.  

    Heh, this is going to be an interesting ride I think.  I wonder how Octavia's surprising fighting skills might come in handy while stuck in Vinyl's night club djing body while I wonder how long before Vinyl tries to spice up a classic in middle of a concert.

    #54 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1323576

    That is the greatest thing anyone has ever said to me in the history of everything ever ever :twilightblush:

    >>1323856

    It's technically gay, as there are two different bodies. Just thought I would give you some closure on that

    #56 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #57 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ah the old Gay vs super clop question....

    Takes me back to when this story was still in the "awesome idea" phase :D

    #58 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1325441

    ..you mean...it's not awesome anymore? :fluttercry:

    #59 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1088687

    Third chapter's up. Your move mate.

    #60 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    MOAR

    MOAR

    MOAR

    MOAR

    #61 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Okay, the whole, "COME BACK HERE SO I CAN LOVE YOU!" is now my favorite catchphrase, gotta use it from now on.

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    There is a brony musician who need more coverage and recognition : YourEnigma. Plus, he produces quite a bit of classical music, so he can be a counterpoint to Vinyl's groupies.

    Anyways, the story is starting really well, even though I seem to remember another story in which Luna exhchanges two minds (Rarity an AJ, if I recall correctly). Now to read the rest !

    #63 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #64 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: five moustaches to you

    >>1323355

    #65 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1325510 I mean that it's moved from awesome idea, to awesome story :rainbowlaugh:

    you used the correct item and it evolved

    #66 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1328796

    The correct item is beer?

    #68 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1324628

    >>1324615

    i'm glad to hear that my compliment was taken to heart! this truly is a gut-bustingly funny story, i'm going to enjoy following this immensely.

    :pinkiehappy:

    #69 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1324189

    It's all in the name of friendship!

    #70 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1326612

    Holy crap, pony jazz! I haven't heard jazz since I was in my high school jazz band (I was a trumpet player).

    #71 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Vinyl raises a good question. Thoughts?

    #72 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I see what you did there.

    Was that "Come back here and let me love you" from Opus/Outland?

    >>1335719

    I wouldn't mind a parody chapter of that.

    #73 · Chapter 3 · 34w, 4h ago · · ·
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    "'Princess, I have one that's been bugging me since this thing started. If Octy and I were to bang right here, right now...would it be gay? Or the highest form of clopping possible?'" Absolute gold! Can't wait for the next chapter. :derpyderp2:

    #75 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1354997

    All dem broken links. FUckin' funny junk.

    #76 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1355537

    I know, I wish there was a more reliable source for the gif =/

    #77 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Did somebody say major update!? With some character development!? I sure did!

    Also feel free to comment and tell me what made you laugh, or speculations. I love speculations. Also, happy finals week everyone.

    #78 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · 1 ·
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    Alt. Title: My Roommate Is Myself

    #79 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I was beginning to think this was dead. Thank Luna it isn't! Nice to see an update after sometime. I will now get some sleep as it is very late or very early.

    Onwards and upwards, my children!

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I swear I've heard the 'brooms up flank cleaning closet' remark somewhere before. Zero Punctuation's review of two Xbox Live Arcade games, DeathSpank and Limbo to be exact.

    #81 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Amazing... Im rarely very impressed with many fanfics, but this one was incredible. Wonderful storyline, complete with humor that made me laugh so hard i almost woke my grandpa up from his nap. All I can say now is MOAAAAARRR! :flutterrage:

    P.S. This made me look up Handel's Sonata VI on Viola. So beautiful :pinkiesad2:

    #82 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1768884

    And you would be correct in that assumption. Allow me to hold your head under the putrescenct waters of knowledge; I liked the joke and incorporated it.

    #83 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is excellent.

    :twilightsmile:

    #84 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Quite excellent.  Though.

    I've seen several fics where Vinyl Scratch has a secret talent, such as playing classical music.

    I've never seen one with Octavia having a secret talent.  Would it be so much to ask?  It doesn't even have to be dubs.  Maybe she's a great baker, or she knows how to Snorkel like a pro.  Or maybe even is a black belt in Maretial Arts *rimshot*.

    Though, to be fair, I've read enough fics that they've each been just about everything, including one where Octavia is a Mob Daughter...

    Anyways, liked and favorited.

    #85 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1769114

    I do have a twist in mind for Vinyl's playing of classical instruments, but it won't be revealed until at least chapter after next. For Octavia though, you have given me some interesting food for thought. I'll have to mull this one around, but it all comes down to what flows out of my pencil onto the paper.

    Edit: just thought of something. Boy that didn't take long.

    #86 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A story with over 125 likes and no downvotes or dislikes:pinkiegasp:, I did not thought that such a thing exists.

    #87 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1769131

    You know, actually, my Maretial Arts thing *all groan* wasn't an entirely bad idea, now that I think about it.  In that, one thing you did was have it be their own minds, but in each other's bodies...which is to say that Octavia-in-Vinyl reacts to a hangover in the same way as Vinyl does--hence how cold water needs to be splashed on her.  So Vinyl-in-Octavia getting mugged and suddenly finding her reflexes kicking butt, or anything that would involve some aspect of that knowledge coming with the body, or not coming with it (Ocavia: Watch out, I know Kung-Fu *fails because Vinyl's body doesn't have the reflexes*)

    Or something.  Anyways...

    #88 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1769710

    Can't say I've heard of Octavia being a martial artist, but then again I've read a story (Blue Angel) where she is a world class fencer. You wanna talk about strange...

    #89 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A comedic story with possible character depth and conflict on the side? Count me in!:rainbowdetermined2:

    WARNING! This story may contain traces of Pinkie Pie.:pinkiecrazy:

    #90 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Another amazing chapter! (told ya people would want this updated)

    also? is that a portal reference I see? :pinkiehappy:

    #91 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Arg. Mysterious mysteries. Also lots of lolecules.

    #92 · Chapter 4 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    my specualtions are that the next chapter is gona be good.

    #93 · Chapter 4 · 21w, 20h ago · · ·
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    Moar. MOARR, I say!:flutterrage: This is friggin' perfect.

    #94 · Chapter 4 · 21w, 11h ago · · ·
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    As flattered as I am to have this story called perfect, I can't help but disagree. Then again I always dislike my work the more I read it. It gives me  motivation to push myself to make it better, which is a good and bad thing. Like now, I have the next chapter written on paper, but I'm trying to improve it as I type, which has left me stuck for a bit. Hopefully I'll figure it out soon though.

    #95 · Chapter 2 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I think this Starswirl and Clover story needs to happen, please and thank you

    Ciao darling :raritywink:

    #96 · Chapter 4 · 20w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1883849

    I was considering it...

    #97 · Chapter 5 · 17w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Just....brilliant.:twilightsmile:

    Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

    #98 · Chapter 2 · 17w, 9h ago · · ·
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    and one odd blue box about the size of a phone booth

    Reaction : YESYESYESYESYESYES  YES!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

    #100 · Chapter 5 · 17w, 8h ago · · ·
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    I was expecting a witty meme to pop up :applecry:

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