A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.
When Big Macintosh's van gets stuck in the snow before he can reach his old home in time for the celebration, he decides to set up camp and wait for help to arrive. Little does he know he'll get a visit from an Angel this winter, wearing the face of an old friend.
Grab yourself a hot mug of coco, sit by the fire, and let yourself relax as you fall into a world of warmth and safety from the cold.
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Well, that was adorable. I've always loved Marble, and I love how you wrote her! Her thoughts sounded almost like poetry, and I think that fits her really well.
I don't know what the literary term is, but the way you changed HOW you were writing, to reflect WHO you were writing, is really interesting and I don't see it used very often, especially in third person. Thanks for writing and Merry Christmas!
A nice story, too bad Sugar Belle had to come along in canon and spoil everything, lol. Oh well, of course these are humans so maybe this is the EQG world. Still, it's nice to find that one special some pony who makes everything different.
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The term you’re looking for is character voice, and it’s a technique every writer should strive to master.
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Ooh, I didn't know it actually had a name.