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Some might think that a pony without much to say doesn't have a lot going on in their minds. Those ponies would be wrong. In fact, it's usually the quiet ones that think the most.

Marble Pie thinks a lot. Most of the time, she thinks about rocks, and how scary everything else is.

Big MacIntosh thinks a lot. Most of the time, he thinks about apples, and how complicated everything else is.

Now, throughout the good times and the bad times of Hearth's Warming, they think about each other.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 97 )

Sad yet cute so far.

Awe so cute! Loving it so far.

Oh my gosh, this is literally the best Hearthbreakers fic I've read. This is actually so carefully thought out, unlike the usual fics based on new episodes. Liked and favourited!

This story is listed as incomplete. Does that mean we're gonna get more?

It's both cute and sad how close yet so far they are from taking any steps forward. Of course, they are both shy by nature, but said natures can contrast enough to help them both. If I had to guess, it's probably Mac who'd break the ice. Oh he's shy enough to keep this going for a bit, but he is a bit more 'backboned' than other shy ponies in the show...of course, this is probably one of his first crushes and love can make you a bit loopy.

I rather enjoyed this little story and I can't wait for more of it soon. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by MrAskAPirate deleted Oct 26th, 2015

Congratulations on second page of Heat

6569125 Eeyup.

Over the next few days, I'll put out a few more chapters detailing the thoughts of Big Mac and Marble during certain scenes of the episode, and possibly even a little further beyond.

6569550 Think you double-posted there, buddy.


6569408 Glad you enjoyed it! If all goes according to plan, there should be more of it very soon!


6568494 Many thanks for the esteemed honor of being the best you've ever seen, though I'm sure you are exaggerating!

6569663 I can confidently say that this was my favourite story based off of Hearthbreakers. :pinkiesmile:

6569780

*fav's.*

same. I saw the two together not once, but twice, and mentally shouted "RAISE THE ANCHOR, THIS SHIP HATH SAILED!)

the writers KNOW we will jump on this sort of thing.......

6572229 You are very much the awesome, though I believe the green streak in your hair was a mistake. It really clashes with your palette.

This is why I don't dye my hair.

6572243
Awesome? Eh, only sometimes, but thanks :pinkiecrazy:
Eh, happens when you go swimming in toxic goo for too long. :rainbowlaugh:

6572229 technically 3 times.
1st: When Pinkie put them in a team
2nd: When they were alone during the race. (who knows what happened during that time. ;) JK)
3rd: At the end when they wished eachother a happy Hearthswarming.

This is beautiful. Love it!

There will be more chapters, right? RIGHT?!

6577423 Oh, yes. In fact, if all goes according to plan, there'll be a new chapter within the next four hours.

6577539 And I shall eagerly provide!

I just want to say that you are among the rare smart ones WHO ACTUALLY GET THAT EARTH PONIES HAVE MAGIC! THANK YOU!

6578828 You're welcome. Honestly, it always seemed obvious to me.

First MarbleMac read so far since seeing the episode, so far just what I had hoped for: 20% cooler than CheeriMac :D :pinkiesmile:

6578953 If that weren't a meme, I'd be shocked that you place MarbleMac only 20% above CheeriMac on the coolness meter. It is at least 40% cooler.

Not this story specifically, I mean the ship.

Celestia on an ice cream tricycle xD xD xD Just the thought

6578978 It's actually surprisingly hard to think of really absurd stuff to say.

Also, though your icon is hilarious, the incest argument is irrelevant. http://www.fimfiction.net/group/209138/marblemac-shipping/thread/216147/incest-i-think-not

6578966 Completely true. I could definitely see it as about... Say, 42%... more perfect together? If that makes any sense. Cooler is a completely different way of saying things. And not the fic, the ship.

Clever title by the way.

Comment posted by DiscordedUnicorn deleted Oct 29th, 2015
Comment posted by DiscordedUnicorn deleted Oct 29th, 2015

6579020 What's with the two deleted comments? Did you somehow triple-post?

I love how there's just a silent understanding between them. Amazing story 10/10 would ship again.

Big Mac began to wonder if Tartarus had admission fees.

HANDS DOWN one of the best and wittiest lines I've ever read on this site. Had me grinning like a fool. Especially since I despise Tirek for what he did to my precious Discord and thinking he probably got in for free.

I LOVE THIS ENTIRE STORY AND IT'S ONLY GOT 2 CHAPTERS SO FAR. You pretty much know this ship perfectly and it's only one episode. I love it. Gosh, I've such a weakness for shy or silent characters with hearts of gold.

And your descriptions of their silent interactions are just perfection on a stick.

6581100 Oh stop it, you're making me blush! :twilightsmile:

6581200 An appropriate response to my review, since blushing between two adorable silent ponies is what got us here in the first place. :raritywink:

6579039 Yeah I did somehow triple post.

6581525 Huh. Didn't think that was possible.

6581532 Well then I guess it is with a really slow lag spike xD

Wow, they're really overthinking this whole interaction thing aren't they?

Talking to girls was easy for me... Well, at least it was easy when talking to the one girl who would eventually matter the most to me.
In fact, I can even remember the first time I asked her out!

"Hey, Rebbecca, I was wondering - would you like to go to Grossplatzenfeld Park and hock rocks at pigeons?"
"Absolutely; that sounds great!"

Memories.
:)

6584396 Grossplatzenfeld Park returned literally no Google results.

Well, it's a lovely story.
I hope to see more of it at some point.

This sounds like a good story.

And here we are again! I know it's been a while since the last update, and I hope this new chapter satisfies any Marblemac itch you might have been feeling!

And also, I want to take this moment to thank everypony for the overwhelming positive reception this story has received. You guys and gals and various unspecified gender types are awesome.

Whoah, whoah! Ah said Whoah! :applejackconfused: When ah says whoah, I MEANS whoah! :flutterrage: (Yosemete Sam quote!)
These two are taking things WAY too fast! they need to settle down and think it through! :pinkiegasp:
And all that talking isn't helping... :facehoof:

:trixieshiftleft:Seriously, they should get a room.:trixieshiftright: That much sweetness should be illegal. :raritywink::twilightsmile::yay:

6654525 To be fair, they've both lived lives that don't allow for a whole lot of emotional expression, and the story will now push them back apart until spring has come and Granny Smith has done some research on the Choosing Stone.

6654535 I know that. Big Mac had to grow up fast, although the show will never have a canon scene explaining what happened to the Apple parents. Marble has her family's strict and austere upbringing to deal with. I do apologize, I was trying to be funny, not critical of the pacing. It really fits these two to take time and see where it leads.

Sorry if i gave the wrong impression.

6654542 Oh, no worries, I suspected your true intentions.

But this is the Internet. It is safest to take everything seriously.

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