Oh this is rich! So listen to this, I'm just your run of a mill guy who is surprisingly living a decent life, despite all this falling economy crap. Now this is where things get juicy! For some reason I got hit by something and now I'm in a completely different world, where Ponies are the most prosperous race. Crazy right? But you know whats really funny? I'm now living in a monstrous wolf body and some 'Goddesses' want me dead.... absolutely brilliant.
*UPDATE 1/19/2013*
This story has been cancelled, due to my declining interest into MLP. Thank you all for reading the small amount of chapters I provided and I apologize for bursting your hope for this story. Peace out Bronies.
Chapters (4)
And now we have the first of Predatory's copycats. Oh joy
1051716
I assure you, I haven't copied anything from anyone else's story.
Good story. Can i has more?
OH SHIT .... its the magic man takin yo away for bumpin into him and sayin sorry excpectin a pologieeeee he juse zapped you bizzneitch!!!!
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I like this, but there are too many grammatical mistakes and homo whatever confusions.
1052108
Would you be so kind to point out a few?
1052115
"I brought my vision back to the puddle and the same whelp was their gazing back at me."
there
"The Elements of Harmony are on their way to the castle, I have sended"
sent
And a couple more.
You copied this story
1052222
Not this again.
1st: I have never heard of that story till now, so its a mere coincidence that both our main characters are canines.
2: He's a brony in a wolf body. Mine is a non brony in a Fenrir, a mythological creature body.
3: My story is not based around wanting to become friends with the main six.
4: I don't see Discord making a role there.
So please think before down thumbing me for a making stupid and thoughtless accusation.
1052257
ill give the story a shot
also im feeling like rabbit might taste pretty good
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1052257 A fenrir?
Well, I want to get nitpicky and point out that Fenrir was, in fact, the name of an individual wolf-god, but then again the same was true for Pegasus, so...
1053906
So are you going to let me off the hook?
1053934
i realy like this,
keep up the good work
Asum chapter. i personally didnt spot any horrible mistakes but i guess i wasnt looking out for them.
Very nice development, cant wait to see what will happen next
U got my attention please continue
I wouldn't mind being a proofreader, also, I spotted this mistake.
“Wolf's! They attacked my family while we were migrating-”
Wolves
All right, this is a pretty decent fanfic beginning, but I have one problem with it. Please pick a tense and stay with it, as it's very difficult to tell at this point if you want it to be in present or past tense.
1059078
I appreciate the heads up.
this story is swag
if you don't what swag is it's this
So Wonderful And Great
update please
Nice you're the one who gave me idea to make a human shapeshift into a wolf at will but it was a spellfrom trixie that last forever thanks for the inspiration.
Best fix I've read so far
1051734
There is a startling similarity in the story, I must admit, but if you're going to have a huge wolf in a story, there is a chance naming it Fenrir will cross your mind.
1052257
1. Fenrir was a huge wolf in norse mythology, I believe the name can very well be a coincidence.
2. A brony in a HUGE wolf body, by some accounts, the same as the Fenrir of mythology.
3. Uh, I would say it's about Fenrir trying not to kill and eat the mane six, but whatever.
4. Yet. He might just make an appearance, or not. I'm keeping that card close to my chest.
Seriously guys, the premise is a huge wolf appearing in Equestria. It's basically just mashing the square block into a round hole and enjoying the chaos that ensues. I would love to see more of it.
1051716
EEE! Can I has copycats? Admittedly, I was here first, but the idea is something that can bedone differently enought for it to be interesting. Gotta love the picture, though.
1078725
Maybe I should of gone with a cat
but thank you for not bashing it straight away and calling it a straight copy.
1078946
No prob.
Update plz
Tirek?
1053934 Hey you forgot to mention that Satan brought a snowglobe with him.
i needz to know what happens TELLl ME
GOOD LORDY THAT CLIFF HAS A HANGAR IN IT!!!
Dude, you're welcome.
ARGH SEND ME THE NEXT CHAPTER TO PROOFREAD THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
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love it :D
i like where this is going
but seriously flutter shy is going to lose her shit when she finds angle missing
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To bad you lost interest its a great story though. I hope you contineu at some point.