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The Psychopath


My very first (self-published) book can be found on Amazon Kindle for 5 or 12 paperback! If you love dragons, give it a look! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CSM7QQ2M

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(This story is being reworked and the spelling and punctuation can be a bit...Atrocitus, at times? Pfffpbth. I'm working on the first three chapters for that, though.)

This is a collab between me and LucidTech (ex: N64fan). For me, this is a new thing, as I've never been too good with collabs. Perhaps this'll help me in the future when people ask to do collabs with me.
The characters come from Steamlord, as well as Techno Babble in Equestria.)

Two men with shockingly similar backgrounds find the cogs they both know so well turning uncontrollably around them while time forces its movements through the world. Forcing the men to make their choices. Live with their past or die from their future.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 61 )

I suppose it’s because of my uncontrolled entry into your

Into your what? I'm guessing world.
Otherwise good story so far.:twilightsmile:

CDR

Oh god, two steampunk geniuses? Nightmare Luna? Shit gonna hit the fan!

it this "inventor" a AU or is it spoilers from the story?

1134961 Inventor? Ask N64fan. Also, did you just pull a metroid prime 3 reference there?


1134965
wait what? MP3 ref? where?

1135146

Something tells me he means something else. Since I can safely assure you that that is not what Inventor is.

I'm gonna tell you somethin'....cuz of the description, gears keep turning.

hyol sheet brah wen mek one nuddah story:pinkiegasp:.
whatevas i gon try read um lata i hate da steampunk shit.

1135934 I know you're in a fad or something, but could you write NORMALLY?!

1135965

How do you know that isn't normal to him?

1136338 Even engrish has some sense into it.:ajbemused:

YES! Sequel wait....

Sequel/Collab/Crossover?
YES! DOUBLE SEQUEL ALL THE WAY!!!!

and if it weren't for the nice grammar in part 1, I'd say that YOU wrote it as it all seems like stuff our dear Psycopath would write....

1136338

I can't think of a single job besides maybe gangster or prostitute that doesn't require the ability to write a sentence with at most one misspelt word. Fucking paperwork is everywhere, man.

1136379 Why tha- you bastard.:twilightangry2: (This isn't the TRUE sequel to Steamlord anyways.:trollestia:)

1136379

Not sure if compliment or insult....

1136601

don't worry.... I'm apparently good at those....

without me even knowing if I compliment/insult

1136756

nah, your domain is fuckin with the reader's minds. Mine is to put logic where it doesnt exist..... and it kinda makes crap when combining with Twisted logic

1136774 Oh. You side with chaos. AWAY WITH THEE!:flutterrage:

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but isn't that your side as well?

1136794 Pff. Chaos is weak. ILLOGIC IS STRONG!

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and Lemons are stronger than Illogicity so Cave Johnson wins by default

1136810 I CALL HAX! You didn't flibbity flobbity beep boop shoobadoo jello pudding.

1136824

I call Scootaloo to the witness stand.

1136836

OVERRULED!! Scootaloo didn't even testify yet!

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yes, I said that the reason I called Scootaloo to the witness stand is due to her being an EXPERT on all kinds of explosives, even stuff that should totally NOT explode

1135965 brah das not one FAD, try come waimanlo i go show you why.:facehoof:
and by the way i can speak engrish very well, or is it very good..... aw fuck:derpyderp1:

lol this conversation is fun. but i think now i shall invade
army's of rot and disease forward
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I apologize for intervening...

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I just wanted to say that I like the story so far.

1140583>>1139209 ha i fear not these tiny black demons crazed minions of Khorne you shall both fall before the pustulant legions of Grandfather Nurgle
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SPACE MARINES NOOOOOOOOO then it seems i must call upon reinforcements
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take that you worthless angry marines

AH COME ON!!!!:flutterrage:

not this cliff hanger again!!!!

i hate them!!!!

but i love this story..... i'm so confused!!!??:fluttershbad::applejackconfused:

i cant hold all these feels!!:pinkiehappy:

1150706 You missed my cliff-hangers, didn't you?:ajsmug:

So, are these stories actually cannon?

Edit: I should say, I mean is this story cannon to the others Ie; Is this the official sequel, or just a matter of interest?

1153366 You can consider it a "middle" between the first Steamlord, and my planned sequel: "Steamlord: The ink mechanic". As for Techno Babble, I think N64 fan considers it a sequel.

1154466 So the timeline should look something like...

Steamlord cannon->) Steamlord ----> Steam Babble ------> Steamlord: The Ink Mechanic
(/\ (Non)Cannon / Intermittent side story?)

Techno Babble cannon ->) Techno Babble ----> Steam Babble -----> N/A
(/\ Cannon / Sequel)

I'm way too big a fan of these charts....

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