20 years later, things changed. Never to be known, the Earth has crumbled. No one was supposed to know who did this, unless someone escaped to tell the story. I will do whatever I can to let inhabitants of my new home know of the danger that is soon to consume them. I must stop it.
Rated teen. Includes strong language at times. Also includes violence. Will add characters as the story progresses. Switches from first-person to third-person ever now and then.
Picture ONLY to show what Shade looks like with his armor on. Shade is a character that I created, and yes, I know that is a Hellgate London soldier. I've never played it before and just searched up "hunter" for some reason and found this.
This is supposed to be short by the way. It's an introduction chapter. Already working on Chapter 2, but I will wait for some more comments to see what I need or don't need.
I like this story so far, I loved your use of vocab. P.S your profile pic is fucking scary.
Hellgate London had an interesting story to it. That is where the profile pic comes from.
"Picture has nothing to do with the story"
Awww I expected a Hellgate London with Ponies...
Never mind. I will read this later.
Ive never proofread for someone before, explain to me how exactly it would work and entail and I may be able to help, I like the story so far BTW =D
I really like this story so far. Keep up the good work.
DAYUUUMMM! Almost 2,000 words! What a fun way to start the morning. Time for waffles and bacon!
590031 Alright. Glad your willing to be a proofread!
591501 Look at the third chapter. From then on, they are going to be much longer. That one was almost 2000 words for Celestia's sake!
The twist was a small one, also in the third chapter. It happened when he explained part of his past.
591558 It's all cool.
So you would like to me to proofread?
589980 i know thats creepy even for me
ima liking where this going keep it up bro
RD kissed Dylan? Nice...
592430 He prefers Shade, but I have a feeling your name is Dylan. Is it?
591857 Yes. I would. I will email you the Chapter before I post it and you send me a revised one. Sound good?
like its good
593261 Alrighty =D
593227 No, my name's John. I just like to call myself Nex. lol
594664 Damn. Thats pretty badass. My friends usually call me Shade cause I don't like to be around most people and Im very good at blending in with the dark and shadows.
594886 just like a ninja. I call myself Nex because I'm ussually the type of bloke that loves close quarters fighting.
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another awesome chapter keep em comin dude
621954 cool thanks now how do i use said access
621960 I'll give you the password to access the story, just don't tell anyone else or make changes.
621999 yes sir are you gonna pm me the password and pm me also whenever you have a new chapter
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622038 Well, then.
622042 what? 3.bp.blogspot.com/-7_qGO7Zf4zI/TlrQQFDIZLI/AAAAAAAALKE/u6tg-v5-bew/s1600/optimized_derpy_glasses2.gif
622050 THAT. IS. THE. MOST. AMAZING.....
622060 derp images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/30100000/Derpy-is-Derpy-derpy-hooves-mlp-fim-30137248-450-320.gif
VeteranO'awesome your face is fresh and crisp as morning dew trickling down a majestic glacier with the sun's ray shining off the side gleaming as if theres a thousand fresh cut polished diamonds molded into a beautiful face of a mare.
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622060
622258 With spit flying out of it?
Changed your mind on proofreading :P?
622287 I forgot I was so excited about the puppies getting adopted and having my free-time back that I just did this one immediatly.
Well, I Never... No I'm just kidding, Lemme know with an email when you want me to slave my fingers to the bone for you I'd be happy to, it's letting me turn around and work for the community I love
I really like where this is going
twas a pleasure to help a friend in need
How about 'New Divide' by Linkin Park?
677490 Fixed
678638 I dunno. I need something a little more upbeat. I think I can squeeze that into one of the fight scenes, though.
679464 how about this music suggestion
679773 That is perfect for a future scene!
680009 i know im using it as well for my fight scene
Nanosuits, Memory eyes, Evil world destroying dictators, Love at first sight ponies...
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