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After GLaDOS is uploaded into a potato battery, Wheatley humiliates the AI even further by uploading her into a project that was abandoned by Aperture a long time ago. In the blink of an eye, she finds herself in a deformed body of flesh and bone that resembles an equine, and is just as powerless as one too. It comes with all of its needs and bodily functions as well. To make matters worse, she's trapped in a land full of insufferable creatures that just want to make 'friends.' Will GLaDOS' cold, sadistic sense of humor and morals get the better of the ponies? Or will they peel away the once artificial being's metallic shell and find that there's a softer side? Probably not, but it's worth a try.

Story Theme: Tyler Bates - I Love You (Watchmen OST)

Thanks to Meeester, MrJoshy, and funkyferret for proofreading/reviewing.

Cover by Fedte16.

First Published
9th Aug 2012
Last Modified
11th Sep 2013
#1 · 123w, 1d ago · 4 · · Iron Grip ·

:yay: I've finally worked up the courage to do a Portal story! It's my favorite game ever, probably because there's no actual fighting, cuz I suck at those kind of games. :twilightblush:

But yeah, let me know if I've gotten Glados' personality right. :twilightsmile:

And P.S. The picture is how Glados looks as a pony, minus the wings and potato cutie mark. Sorry, she's a wimpy little earth pony. That just makes it twenty times better. :rainbowlaugh:

#2 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

I like it! Looks good so far.

#3 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

I am interested.

#4 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Ooh, this. This is interesting. This is very, very interesting.

Can't wait for more, bro.

#5 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

this... is gonna be excellent...

#6 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

woho another portal story:pinkiehappy:

#7 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Its a good story :eeyup:. Can't wait to see more pony Glados :pinkiehappy:.

#8 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Earth ponies physically out match pegasai and unicorns, think of them like the back bone of Equestria, the hard workers and people who do stuff by hand, and this is terrific exactly how i think of GLAdOS

#9 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

you do glados realy good:pinkiehappy:

keep it up:twilightsmile:

#10 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

I sense this will be on the front page.

Good job, very good story :yay:

#11 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Looks promising. Untill GlaDOS learns magic and poisons everypony with conqured neurotoxin.:pinkiecrazy:

#12 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

This will get featured soon, you all heard it from me. :pinkiehappy:

#13 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Added to my ever growing "Read Later" list.

#14 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Gah, I need to play portal again now. Nice work

>>1055197

Lol

#15 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

>>1051544How did you get your story on the top 10? I've got almost 10x as many views, which obviously isn't the way you got featured. How DID you get featured? Not trying to sound indignant or something by stating a 'wtf, how is urs better than mine even tho i got more views'. That would b rude, so sorry if I came off sounding like that. I'm just genuinely curious on how people get stories featured.

#16 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

You just made my night. So you deserve

A applause!

And five Spikes :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Btw I love Portal it´s such a great game and finally I´ve come to see a Portal fic.

Also great job making this:pinkiehappy:, I´m going to keep a eye on this story for more chapters to come.

Oni
#17 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

All my yes are belong to you.

#18 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Interested and fav'ed. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. :twilightsmile:

#19 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

I am interested. Very very interested.

#20 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Yessssssssss

#21 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

LMAO featured already!? SCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#22 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

>>1051544

Wimpy? :ajbemused: I hope you mean GLaDOS specifically, because just about any OTHER Earth Pony could (Not WOULD, just COULD) make you eat your own teeth over that comment.

#23 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

this will go down in fimfic crossover history.

#24 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

All right, I read your story. Loving it, and can't wait to see how she reacts to "THE MAGIC OF FRIENDSHIP!!!" Please make more, and we all know this is worthy of its current featured status.

#25 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

My mind is now thinking of non random things welp there goes the neighborhood very good story though can't wait to read more and hopefully i won't lose my insanity along the way:pinkiecrazy:

#26 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

ME GUSTA

#27 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Get ready to do some science, some ponyscience! I will looking forward to hear Glados ironic jokes. This has potential.

#28 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

You got GLaDOS's persenality down exactly! keep up the good work!!!

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#29 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Same thing I tell a Lot of people: Work on your tenses. Choose if you're going to speak as though it is happeneing right this instant, or as if you're describing something that has already happened. Past tense versus present tense. What you want is PAST tense, Describing something as though it has already happened, because this is a narrative as told by an omnicious, third person Narrator. Second person stories are really the only place in fiction for Present tense. It's enjoyable, but the jumping tenses keeps bumping me out of immersion

#31 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

>>1051544

I concur, it looks good so far. Glados is more or less anamoral and sadistic, with a sense of humour that is pretty dark and cruel. You seem to portray Glados well with her hiding her emotionals (if not misdirect) and have her passion for science dwelling in her head. I'm looking forward to more udates, keep up the good work :ajsmug

#32 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Equestria vs. multi awarded villain of the year GLaDOS.  The land will never be the same again

#33 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

lul, I would love if she ended up being really nice outwardly, but evil on the inside xD

No matter what happens, dis gonna beh good c:

#34 · 123w, 1d ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Dear Science, help me in my time of need.

:rainbowlaugh: That's great!

#35 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

>>1055197

*clap*

*clap*

*clap*

"Oh good my slow-clap processor made it into this thing."

Way to call it bro.

>>1051544

Anyway its a great story so far, i expect great things from you, author.

Do. Not. Disappoint. Me.

#36 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

I approve of PonyDOS. I expect to see more amazingness from you, author.

#37 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

This should be intresting:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

#38 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

You certainly have captured GLaDOS well, so far.  But what I'm looking forward to is seeing how you develope her personality.

#39 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Well... This should be interesting to read!

I'll update later when I've read it.

Edit: Oh wow, it feels soooo short, Probably because I was enjoying it to much :twilightsheepish:

#40 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

I was unsure of this at first, but this is excellent. Well thought out sentences with easy-to-read structure makes this story a gem. Plus, you have a fun, interesting, and original(?) plot that I'm eager to see more of. Keep it up my friend, you are doing a fine job.

#41 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Well you have piqued my interests! I shall watch this fic with a scrutinizing eye!

#42 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

The only way that this could get better would be for Chell to suddenly appear as a pony...

But already this is amazing, MOAR!

-Jorofrarie

#43 · 123w, 23h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

MOAR!! YOUR GOD DEMANDS IT! DO YOU DARE DEFY US DESTROYAH!? IF YOU DO NOT COMPLY WE WILL DESTROY ALL YOU HOLD DEAR!!!

#45 · 123w, 22h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

OH, I have found your work rather stimulating.  I will follow to see if anymore pleasurable experiences arrise from this jumbled together mass of words. :yay:

#47 · 123w, 22h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

"Glados knew for a fact that cowboy hats led to the socially awkward or unintelligent."

Glados has encountered neckbeards before, evidently.

#48 · 123w, 22h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

this....is gonna be gooooood:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

#49 · 123w, 22h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

This is awesome! Moar please!:pinkiehappy: also, you got glados' personality right, though make her express sarcasm more. (she will go nuts with pinkie):pinkiehappy:

I think glados should have wings, also, her cutie mark should be molecules circling around each other in diff directions just thought it would fit nicely. with her and the whole quantum space portals and what not.

My general grammar and sentence structuring is a little off today, so dont mind that.

#50 · 123w, 22h ago · · · Iron Grip ·

Not only have you kept everything in character and provide a real outlook on how they would act you also crossed over two phenomenally different things successfully.

So you earned a like and a favorite.

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