I've finally worked up the courage to do a Portal story! It's my favorite game ever, probably because there's no actual fighting, cuz I suck at those kind of games.

But yeah, let me know if I've gotten Glados' personality right.

And P.S. The picture is how Glados looks as a pony, minus the wings and potato cutie mark. Sorry, she's a wimpy little earth pony. That just makes it twenty times better.

I like it! Looks good so far.

I am interested.

Ooh, this. This is interesting. This is very, very interesting.

Can't wait for more, bro.

this... is gonna be excellent...

woho another portal story

Its a good story . Can't wait to see more pony Glados .

Earth ponies physically out match pegasai and unicorns, think of them like the back bone of Equestria, the hard workers and people who do stuff by hand, and this is terrific exactly how i think of GLAdOS

you do glados realy good

keep it up

I sense this will be on the front page.

Good job, very good story

Looks promising. Untill GlaDOS learns magic and poisons everypony with conqured neurotoxin.

This will get featured soon, you all heard it from me.

Added to my ever growing "Read Later" list.

Gah, I need to play portal again now. Nice work

>>10551971055197

Lol

>>10515441051544How did you get your story on the top 10? I've got almost 10x as many views, which obviously isn't the way you got featured. How DID you get featured? Not trying to sound indignant or something by stating a 'wtf, how is urs better than mine even tho i got more views'. That would b rude, so sorry if I came off sounding like that. I'm just genuinely curious on how people get stories featured.

You just made my night. So you deserve

A applause!

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And five Spikes

Btw I love Portal it´s such a great game and finally I´ve come to see a Portal fic.

Also great job making this, I´m going to keep a eye on this story for more chapters to come.

All my yes are belong to you.

Interested and fav'ed. I'll be keeping an eye on this story.

I am interested. Very very interested.

Yessssssssss

LMAO featured already!? SCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>10515441051544

Wimpy? I hope you mean GLaDOS specifically, because just about any OTHER Earth Pony could (Not WOULD, just COULD) make you eat your own teeth over that comment.

this will go down in fimfic crossover history.

All right, I read your story. Loving it, and can't wait to see how she reacts to "THE MAGIC OF FRIENDSHIP!!!" Please make more, and we all know this is worthy of its current featured status.

My mind is now thinking of non random things welp there goes the neighborhood very good story though can't wait to read more and hopefully i won't lose my insanity along the way

ME GUSTA

Get ready to do some science, some ponyscience! I will looking forward to hear Glados ironic jokes. This has potential.

You got GLaDOS's persenality down exactly! keep up the good work!!!

Same thing I tell a Lot of people: Work on your tenses. Choose if you're going to speak as though it is happeneing right this instant, or as if you're describing something that has already happened. Past tense versus present tense. What you want is PAST tense, Describing something as though it has already happened, because this is a narrative as told by an omnicious, third person Narrator. Second person stories are really the only place in fiction for Present tense. It's enjoyable, but the jumping tenses keeps bumping me out of immersion

>>10515441051544

I concur, it looks good so far. Glados is more or less anamoral and sadistic, with a sense of humour that is pretty dark and cruel. You seem to portray Glados well with her hiding her emotionals (if not misdirect) and have her passion for science dwelling in her head. I'm looking forward to more udates, keep up the good work :ajsmug

Equestria vs. multi awarded villain of the year GLaDOS.  The land will never be the same again

lul, I would love if she ended up being really nice outwardly, but evil on the inside xD

No matter what happens, dis gonna beh good c:

Dear Science, help me in my time of need.

That's great!

>>10551971055197

*clap*

*clap*

*clap*

"Oh good my slow-clap processor made it into this thing."

Way to call it bro.

>>10515441051544

Anyway its a great story so far, i expect great things from you, author.

Do. Not. Disappoint. Me.

I approve of PonyDOS. I expect to see more amazingness from you, author.

This should be intresting

You certainly have captured GLaDOS well, so far.  But what I'm looking forward to is seeing how you develope her personality.

Well... This should be interesting to read!

I'll update later when I've read it.

Edit: Oh wow, it feels soooo short, Probably because I was enjoying it to much

I was unsure of this at first, but this is excellent. Well thought out sentences with easy-to-read structure makes this story a gem. Plus, you have a fun, interesting, and original(?) plot that I'm eager to see more of. Keep it up my friend, you are doing a fine job.

Well you have piqued my interests! I shall watch this fic with a scrutinizing eye!

The only way that this could get better would be for Chell to suddenly appear as a pony...

But already this is amazing, MOAR!

-Jorofrarie

MOAR!! YOUR GOD DEMANDS IT! DO YOU DARE DEFY US DESTROYAH!? IF YOU DO NOT COMPLY WE WILL DESTROY ALL YOU HOLD DEAR!!!

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>>10554171055417

OH, I have found your work rather stimulating.  I will follow to see if anymore pleasurable experiences arrise from this jumbled together mass of words.

Glados and PONIES!?!

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"Glados knew for a fact that cowboy hats led to the socially awkward or unintelligent."

Glados has encountered neckbeards before, evidently.

this....is gonna be gooooood

This is awesome! Moar please! also, you got glados' personality right, though make her express sarcasm more. (she will go nuts with pinkie)

I think glados should have wings, also, her cutie mark should be molecules circling around each other in diff directions just thought it would fit nicely. with her and the whole quantum space portals and what not.

My general grammar and sentence structuring is a little off today, so dont mind that.

Not only have you kept everything in character and provide a real outlook on how they would act you also crossed over two phenomenally different things successfully.

So you earned a like and a favorite.

MUST HAVE MORE

Brilliant!

Again, she saw how horses walked before. They trot like deer, only less majestic and more like a freight train. Or Chell.

You, sir, are amazing.

Great job, going to favorite this!

>>10552901055290

I don't know exactly how the favorite box works anymore, they keep changing it, but I do know they stopped counting views, since "looking at a story" isn't the same as "liking a story".  

>>10515441051544

You should probably work a description of GLaDOS pony into the story itself.  Perhaps give her a chance to find a mirror or lake and take herself in.  That way the audience won't have to rely on the inaccurate picture or reading an author's note, which I know many people skip.

>>10557961055796Ah, then that would explain why. This has close to 40 likes (wierd, you'd think you'd need more than that) and mine has just over 10. Eh, w/e. Probly would be a bad idea if I got featured anyways. If I got featured, I might get more viewers. If I got more viewers, I might get some of the viewers that go 'plz make more'. If I got more viewers like that, I'd be pressured to crank out chapters faster and more frequently. If I got pressured, I would be stressed with too much work (considering I'm starting senior year a week from today. Seriously, start of school on a mother bucking THURSDAY! What the fuck is the school board thinking?). And if that happens, I will end up giving a mouse a cookie. If I give a mouse a cookie, the world as we know it will cease to exist.

>>10558081055808

Yeah, the likes seemed low to me, too.  But since they were trying to feature half new stories and half old stories, maybe 40 was more likes than the other new stories it was competing with for the new slots?

Ah well, good luck with being a senior.

Love it... but now i have thoughts of Fluttershy being incredibly malovelent.

I love the story so far GLaDOS is spot on I can't wait to read her reaction when she take a look at her cuttie mark.

lovely, Uppvote for you my dear.

>>10558181055818Thanks, although I don't know if it will be bad or good. On one hand, I have to repeat about 2 classes from last year (due to the teacher being a complete bitch, and partially due to me not thinking before I speak. Long story short, called a girl a bitch, she shouted at me, I got suspended), plus all the other senior classes like English 12, stats, econ and government. Oh god, I am not looking forward to those two. But, on the other hand, I get to see all my friends that I haven't seen over the summer. I get to mingle with society, and enjoy being a person. I mean, laying around and doing w/e the fuck you want is nice, but it can't last forever. Eh, I digress. Thanks again.

The moment I saw this story's title, I knew it would get into the feature box. I didn't anticipate that it would hit slot one, but hey! Never question results, right?

Anyway, I still haven't taken the time to read chapter one, but I thought I would contribute my totally irrelevant two cents.

At first I was like ,then I was like , then i was like and now im like

Plz make more

UPDATE QUICKLY PLEASE

>>10515441051544

The potato mark would turn me off to the story unless it was suppose to be comedic so i think you for that.  I always picture pony GlaDOS with either a Aperture Science logo as a mark. Or a Ai core. Cell having a portal.

Though I do think she would be a Pegasus. Earth pony's trait being strong and enduring far from wimpy. Pegasus are weak but faster it would fut the I'm powerless thing more in my opinion.  (don't get me wrong Pegasus are awesome)

This looks like a good crossover so far. watching you.

I don't like much portal world but it's quite interesting

Lets see how it will go

This intrigues me. Please sir, do go on.

You know, I used to have access to neurotoxin. But then some idiot decided that I was 'mentally unstable' and kicked me out of the Illuminati.

Ewige Blumenkraft und ewige Schlangenkraft!

Glados as pony...so many possibilities.

You think Wheatley was bad? Wait till you meet Pinkie.

Glados:...Suddenly that Potato Battery is looking OH-SO appealing right now...

Keep going. For science. You monster.

>>10515441051544 Finaly i have waited so long for a Glados turned pony in equestria story. =D

By looking at this chapter i can tell this is gona be good.

You did a very good job on Glados' character. There were a few minor errors in there though:

"Now...." The intelligence dampening sphere shifted it's blue optic towards the potato still clutched in his massive robotic claw. "what do I do with you now that the lass is plummeting down an elevator shaft?"

its

...the potato still clutched in his massive robotic claw, "What do I do with you...

She just lied there, sulking in her own misery,

http://web.ku.edu/~edit/lie.html

But unfortunately, being a horse isn't as intimidating as a giant robot in control of an entire facility. Armed with neurotoxin.

...giant robot in control of an entire facility, and not to mention one armed with neurotoxin.

Or something along those lines.

And I think you're pushing AJ's accent a bit.

"Mah name's Applejack. What're in tarnation are ya doing out here?" She gave a greeting smile, her emerald eyes were soft and welcoming.

There's a mistake in there, and I think you're using the word 'tarnation' incorrectly. Tarnation is used to express anger or annoyance, so it really doesn't fit in there. Lighter use of the accents and wording would be nice. Just because AJ has the accent doesn't mean she needs to call everyone 'partner', and that goes for other characters as well. Just because they said it once or twice doesn't mean you should have Rarity finish every sentence with 'darling', or have Pinkie say 'Okie dokie loki' when she agrees with something.

Good effort, I'm looking forward to reading more.

-Sparklight

>>10515441051544 I'm gonna enjoy her reaction when she finds out in my opinion that she's the most limited of the three pony races.

Could use some proofreading and Applejack's written accent could be toned down a little, but the concept is definitely very awesome and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Will keep an eye on this one.

Aaaaallright! Gonna say something more than that after I read it. But this looks pretty great so see you after I finish reading!

     Okay! I read it, first impressions: AMAZING!            Now that I've read it: SUPER AMAZING!!!!

Keep up the great work and post another chapter quickly my friend!

This is good story. Wait no, scratch that. This is A GREAT STORY. You've made my, uh not midnight, you made my morning! Yea

This is very relevent to my interests

I quite fancy this.

Well it seems more interesting than the other one, Better Living Through Science And Ponies.

I can't wait for GLaDOS' scathing humor to verbally slap all the ponies, hopefully in her very same robotic voice. I want more soon please.

MMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please?

I believe an acceptable way of expressing my thought on this chapter would be something akin to this;

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And how he heck did you manage to get 265 thumbs up and only a single thumb down? Heck, I'd bet that that person didn't even read the story. Probably just disliked because it was a crossover or some such.

I guess what I'm saying is that this is pretty freaking tops and you shouldn't stop any time soon!

Edit: And now it's 266:2. Well now we know that you'll get at least 133 thumbs up for every 1 thumb down. Nice job!

I can not see though the pic. Glados there is so cute. Were did you get the pic?

This is nice. Will read more. Now to criticize a bit.

The whole "intimidating look with one eye under hair" is the only thing that put me like "Meh?" Glady should not have an idea what look can be intimidating for a equine creature, and she can not be making any poses

>Glados knew for a fact that cowboy hats led to the socially awkward or unintelligent. Dear Science, help me in my time of need.

Um... really? How is that scientifically accurate? Either elaborate her train of thoughts so we will not need to make the connection or think of something else.

>"Mah name's Applejack. What're in tarnation are ya doing out here?"

Isn't "What're in tarnation" having some kind of an aggressive intonation? For me, and everyone, who watched the show, I don't think it sounds very welcoming in AJ's voice.

That's what got me a bit frustrated in the chapter. If you don't want to hear my blabbering - do tell and I won't bother you in the next chapters any more.

I recommend concentrating less on frustration of being a "pony" and more on frustration of being a meatbag. It is far shocking just to breathe than to breathe like a pony if you get my thought.

To good i need MOAR

>>10552901055290

Well, I think the moderators or people who have acess to everything in this website has to decide if a story can get featured and not counting on how many views but by opinion and reviews???

Well here we are again. Its always such a pleasure.

Remember the time you cried to kill me twice?

Oh how we laughed and laughed. Except I wasn't laughing.

Under the circumstances I've been shockingly nice....

Dare you to read and listen to this!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=25ClYY5mwbc

>>10556251055625

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And then, it starts to play this

Ya I saw a comment where they wanted Chell. That would be funny. And when Glados learns about magic... there's going to be some experiments...

This should be interesting! I'll be sure to read this.  GO GLADOS (sorry but as awesome as ponies are GLADOS is cooler.

well i l'île tour glados personality and or captured my intrest as fast as thé LEGENDARY Kkat fiction most of you gavé heard of bases off some obscure bethesda game called Fallout 3...

PRETTY DAMN AWSOME

THE FUN LEVELS ARE AT 100% EFFIENCY!

It's....It's been my life long dream to be in the featured box....LET ALONE NUMBER ONE!!!! Thanks so much everybody! I'm kinda nervous though, with everyone's expectations extremely high. But I'll try my best!

>>10563131056313 And thank you for your constructive criticism. I've got nothing to say really to those comments, aside from the cowboy hat one. All's I gotta say is Glados has been known to act kind of childish at times, right?

And thus on this the frabjus day...

We all hail this author and his glorious work of fan fiction.

And we shall read it and see that it is pony. and good, that to.

Yep I was this is awesome.  I can just picture what GLADOS would say to Chell right now.  "Oh hi how are you doing, cause I'm a freaken horse."

This looks very promising, I will follow it.

>>10515441051544

I have a sudden urge to congratulate you my dear sir.

I am not entirely sure why.

But I think it is because you are AWESOME!

>>10556251055625 Godzilla for the effing win. I will do as you wish, Lord DESTROYAH!