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The girls defeat yet another victim of Equestrian magic, but Rainbow is injured as a result. She not only loses her memory, she is just not herself. The only way to save her is magic - a magic on the other side of the portal.
How are the girls going to keep that a secret?
How are they going to get Dash through the portal?
Can magic really fix your friends?
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It's very great for your first story :)
*reads description*
*reads story*
I think I read the wrong thing.
Someone's about to get their butt whupped.
9578937 It's just the first 3 chapters, hun.
Give it, and the author, time and I'm sure we'll be getting to the nitty-gritty of the story soon.
9578731 Very much agree!
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Thank you. I am often think I'm never enough, so positive comments are extremely appreciated.
Though don't stop giving constructive criticism
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Trust me, you read that right. This is just the beginning. Why else did I purposely make sure it was Rainbow Dash who was injured?
*Le GaSp*
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Thankies!
9584613 You're very welcome, my friend.
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😸
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9586224 Keep up the great work, okay?
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You got it! The next chapter will be out as soon as possible. In between sports and school, it's a little hard, but it's almost ready, I promise!!
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And that's good to know.
Just remember to tend to your school and other stuff first, and that's good to know.
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😉
9588708 Hee.
Im just now finding this story and it's super good! I can't wait for more!
Rainbow nuuu! I swear she's too good for this world omg
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Yeah, she is. Don't worry, things get better.
Or do they?
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More is coming, I promise. Chapter Four just needs final touches and overview. Should be up by this weekend. Though, with my life, it'll likely be up in three weeks😹
It'll come soon.🙃
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Oh, and thanks for your support 😊
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Of course! And don’t rush yourself! I know I said I couldn’t wait but I’ll be fine waiting longer
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🐱Should be done within a week. Thanks for your patience
Guys, I have a unfortunate message.
Due to sudden schedule change, I was unable to stick to my promise of the when the story's next chapter would be out. It has taken me longer to write this one, as ideas have been a little sparse. But it's coming.
Because of this, I have decided to not promise any more release dates. You'll just have to be a little patient 😉.
I'm sorry to get your hopes up only to drag them down. I hope you understand.
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Don't worry, I'll write more. Once school lets out, the chapters should be coming real fast!! No promises, but I should have the next one out within a week. Maybe. I don't know, I'm lazy.
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Thanks so much for your support, too. It means a lot.
All right guys!! I finally have the next chapter out!! AT LAST!!
Hope you enjoy it!!
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yessss this story is so goodddd omc
omg I'm finally catching up and woahhh- this story gets better and better with each chapter. Keep going!
Sorry for the lengthy absence, but it's here now!! Hope you guys enjoy!! :) <3
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Working on that. Coming soon. Thanks for actually stopping to read it!!
Before I read this, I must know: Why would they need to keep the fact that Dash needs magic from Equestria to get better a secret?
I’m enjoying the story. Great for a first story, but I have one suggestion for you in this chapter.
Using a break and and a subtitle like “Flashback/Backstory“ is not the best of ideas. It ruins the immersion in the story. We should be able to just follow Sunset into Crystal’s memories seamlessly.
Perhaps something along the lines of of the following as a suggestion or example:
Just a break or new paragraph is really all that is needed here. Putting in the separation and title screaming flashback cam be like slamming on the breaks for the flow of the story.
Or if you wanted you could add a bit more with this version:
Well I like the story concept a lot. Just more more piece of advice you are already doing here for the future. If you plan to change not just point of view but also type of view 3rd person, 1st person etc. like here only do it between chapters. Changing POV is fine but changing perspective is probably best left for different chapters like you did here.
Can’t wait for more.
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See...I'm still working on that. You'll see.
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Glad you liked it. I promise to only use first person in separate chapters, and only sometimes. I just wanted to show what this would look like to Dash.
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Thanks for the advice and support. I'll work on that for this story and any future ones.
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Yeah I figured that was the case and it was done nicely.
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looking forward to reading more. Like they say practice makes perfect.
oh my </3
WAIT NO THATS IT??!